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I Missed You...

I missed you, sweetheart...
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I missed you, sweetie, the message said.

And before she could turn around,
she was dead.

"I missed you, sweetheart,"
said the killer to her severed head.

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rolandloops
Posted 30 Jan 2013 06:31
Nice little tale of murder. The breadth of the story was larder than the length of the words.

Colors_of_the_Wind
Posted 21 Jan 2013 00:06
Circle, your comment made me smile. As did all of them, but yours. Thank you, all of you, for your feedback and lovely comments

Circle_Something
Posted 19 Jan 2013 20:37
I didn't even read the tags, but bloody hell! That would make a great story for a heavy metal song. They could drag that out for about four or five minutes. It's damned dark and pretty enjoyable, in a macabre sorta way.

fuzzy1954
Posted 16 Jan 2013 08:37
dark!!!!

Rumple_deWriter
Posted 16 Jan 2013 07:10
Good work but after much thought, I gave it a four. To me, the tags carried too much of the story. And while the telling was intense, it was also a bit confusing.

frogprince
Posted 02 Jan 2013 20:15
This was macabre. A real dark tale.

Sadman
Posted 02 Jan 2013 17:02
Wow!, this is amaizing, I glad to read it, well done
 

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