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A Meeting of Souls

Originally written as the opening verse to a story I am writing...
Our eyes met across the smoky room,

Smoldering gazes locking intimately.

Your unspoken words stroking me in an

Ethereal tongue only our souls could understand.

Moving toward you as if in a dream,

My hungry heart could be plainly seen.

As I looked up into your eyes,

You saw desire that was hard to hide.

How could one glance have said so much?

Our hearts spoke silently

Without deception or disguise,

Bodies tingling without a touch.

We danced together as lovers dance,

To the rhythm of music only we could hear,

Bodies not touching, yet souls intertwined

Passions flaring like a white-hot flame.

That night forever sealed our fates

As we bared our souls, a pact was made.

We were but prisoners of our own desires

Bound within the unyielding chains of love.

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Comments(15)

HK4167
Posted 26 Feb 2013 15:08
So wonderful. Beautiful, passionate and enticing. Bravo!
rolandloops
Posted 02 Feb 2013 00:20
A wonderful emotional union of two souls. Your imagery is vivid and I like your choice of words, in meaning and word flow. A worthy tale set to poetry.
ManofDesire
Posted 08 Jan 2013 00:20
wow that was beautiful
Strongheart
Posted 05 Jan 2013 09:14
Love creates so many images and emotions, Nicely done.
Viv
Posted 04 Jan 2013 12:30
Sweet and evocative, have lots of fun rattling those chains.
rantingsenior
Posted 03 Jan 2013 17:04
Wow…..really fantastic! That happened to me last week, but it was our walkers that weren’t touching, not our bodies. (And we didn't dance, we rolled.)
rune
Posted 03 Jan 2013 03:16
wow nicely done! ... love the feeling of being happy while reading it hope to read some more of your works have a nice day!
CKAcres
Posted 02 Jan 2013 15:22
So nice to have you sharing your work with us again Yas.
Awesome image filled piece, loved it.
Isadora
Posted 02 Jan 2013 14:50
Bravo..lovely work.
DirtyMartini
Posted 02 Jan 2013 13:10
I have to agree with Larry, nice to see you writing again...and nicely done, as usual I might add...
sea
Posted 02 Jan 2013 09:07
wow....... love it
fuzzy1954
Posted 02 Jan 2013 08:37
love it
bound chains of love
LauraLee_Sweetness
Posted 02 Jan 2013 08:21
wonderful!!
Dreamcatcher
Posted 02 Jan 2013 08:14
Glad to see you writing again.. it didn't matter who was looking back.. only that you were looking at them.. good stuff..
magnificent1rascal
Posted 02 Jan 2013 06:58
Wow! Excellent.
 

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