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According to You...

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The gun slides down,
I can feel it at the crown
of my head
Ready to shoot me dead...

Now he has aimed
At my heart
I'm waiting for the bullet
To do its part...

Kill me in the dirt,
Treat me like a stone,
To be thrown
Not able to be hurt...

According to you,
I'm not human,
But to say what's true,
I'm more so than you.
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Sadman
Posted 02 Jan 2013 11:19
Wow!, I'm shocked, I like this work is the best I've read in a long time, the dark and twisted this poem is exquisitely delightful. I love it, well done.

Dreamcatcher
Posted 01 Jan 2013 16:56
Letting someone take up space in your mind is one thing.. but when you let them move into your heart you've let them past your defenses.. when they leave there is only a dark hole remaining.. nicely worded X..

frogprince
Posted 30 Dec 2012 14:28
I thought you were heading towards cheery. I guess the horror movie did you for a couple of days. THis is so dark, yet insightful. If a person is going to kill and feels the person to be killed is a rock and is hard, then the killer has to harder. This makes you softer and more gentle.

Rascal
Posted 30 Dec 2012 12:34
Wow, so dark, yet so true
 

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