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Angel Wings
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fuzzy1954

Angel Wings

Tags: angel, feather
With a bolt of bright white light my angel stood before me
This runs in conjunction with my previous stories 

How I Lost My Way part 1 and part 2

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from a young age I was taught about angels

we sat as the nuns read to us, our little eyes wide

pictures swirled around us, all stories from long ago

loving angels and warrior angels, white, red and black

being of the youngest I sat in complete awe waiting

for my angel or at least a white feather from heaven

my mind grew and grew to not think of my angel

school, the farm and growing older, there was no time to dream

as a young man if ever asked, who needs an angel would be my answer

going to dances my mind on earth angels next to me in my GMC

going to the mail one hot day in July there was "the" letter

waiting in line in Detroit I had time to think and as I stood

a lone white feather floated down and landed in front of me

for at that moment in time my angel was there watching me

being of all of 18 this I kept to myself, move forward

look forward you green peas march at double time

your ass belongs to your uncle now

little did I realize that my angel was protecting me

till that fateful hot day in Vietnam

when I faded to black my angel was standing over me

in my wallet to this day is a white lone feather

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Comments(9)

Kari
Posted 23 Mar 2013 11:58
Well done my friend well done
CKAcres
Posted 16 Mar 2013 16:28
Glad that you had an angel to watch out for you my friend, and is still.
rolandloops
Posted 13 Mar 2013 13:20
A good ending for your Lost Your Way stories.
Kiki
Posted 12 Mar 2013 17:27
Touching piece of writing...Magical!
HK4167
Posted 12 Mar 2013 11:57
Such a beautiful poem...
sea
Posted 12 Mar 2013 04:45
i have yet to get my white feather....... but i still believe in angels.... poignant....heart touching...... poem Carl
Hotstuff
Posted 11 Mar 2013 20:57
A beautiful story..very well written..I have my angel with me always.
frogprince
Posted 11 Mar 2013 16:25
I know of what you wrote. I have seen my angel on three occasions. She guided me through some of the toughest times of my life. Like you I experienced war in VietNam. Some of my best and worst memories. We all have an angel. Right now mine is sitting on my shoulder. Thank for a wonderful trip.
3rebels4
Posted 11 Mar 2013 15:55
Cool! I always heard the story that there were guardian angels and they protect us in strange ways. It seemed kind of romantic yet sad at the same time because we hardly ever see them...
 

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