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Broken Glass
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Broken Glass

Valentine's Poem
Broken Glass

The only boy I ever loved was

Damaged on the inside

Contorted and deformed

He felt the same as I

We frolicked in our despair-- together

We were drowning -- together

We died that day -- together

The only boy I ever loved had

Broken glass for eyes

His ideology was

Warped and construed

He saw the alternate beauty in the

Darkness and the

Darkness in the light

We all knew

Was

In

You

.

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Sherzahd
Posted 06 Mar 2013 12:24
Best of luck in the competition.

HK4167
Posted 26 Feb 2013 14:05
Best of luck in the competition!

redrandi
Posted 16 Feb 2013 07:02
Dark and painful. Good story.

Thesaddestlandscape
Posted 15 Feb 2013 10:44
Wrote this in math class lol

away
fuzzy1954
Posted 15 Feb 2013 10:10
loved this
good luck

CKAcres
Posted 15 Feb 2013 07:55
Good Luck

JoanéeLoveSe7en
Posted 13 Feb 2013 18:23
perfect

Peter_Pan
Posted 13 Feb 2013 18:07
Buena suerte

Thesaddestlandscape
Posted 13 Feb 2013 17:26
Thank you

LauraLee_Sweetness
Posted 13 Feb 2013 16:48
good luck in the competition.

the first part was truly magnificent but i wondered if you left a word out of your last sentence because it felt somehow incomplete to me. a wonderful work none the less...
 

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