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Choice

Freedom to write as one deems
What does a number mean?
Can one's thoughts truly be scored?
Is this a race, winning the highest vote?

Many shun the chance to shine
Others boast, thinking they are tops
While some prefer to just try

It is not winning that brings joy
The challenge defies the hidden
The need to voice a line is grand

The soul is filled with happiness
Exhaling true emotion
Words penned that soothe the mind

Not all have the balls to write
To those that do, I applaud you
Ease those thoughts, let them flow

It is one's choice to be heard
Read, inhaled, savored
Trashed, erased or wasted

So let the numbers be
Pay no mind, smile and breathe
For exposing one's underside
Is a choice indeed

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Comments(9)

HK4167
Posted 10 Jan 2013 19:20
This is so true...thank you so much for writing this. 😊
frankstevens
Posted 09 Jan 2013 15:39
this and a cup of coffee will smooth out the day
LauraLee_Sweetness
Posted 09 Jan 2013 11:20
all we can do is tell our truth. good reminder that it is our truth and no one else can validate it really.
billybroadband
Posted 09 Jan 2013 05:37
I don't pay much attention to the numbers...although some day I would like to get all "5's" just to see what it feels like, lol....I'd always like to get more readers, though....

away
fuzzy1954
Posted 09 Jan 2013 01:18
I totally agree with Dave and LostSoul
Isadora thank you for writing this ...
rune
Posted 08 Jan 2013 20:56
so true arts are not appreciated through the highest score or by numbers but how the soul of one's talent flows through his works and transfer the beauty of it to other person who are just lookers who appreciate the art have a nice day everyone
Peter_Pan
Posted 08 Jan 2013 16:49
I loved it, perhaps because my numbers are so low. I am laughing out loud now. I do not think I will ever get a large audience here, but you are so right. The reason we write is to share our thoughts in hopes that they will illuminate the lives of a wonderful few.
CKAcres
Posted 08 Jan 2013 16:23
Thank you Isadora, for having the words to express thoughts that I have had many times. Well said.
Dreamcatcher
Posted 08 Jan 2013 13:36
Good advice..
 

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