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Frightening Thoughts

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trembles

shakes

shudders

eyes open wide in fear,
a scream at her lips,
looking into the blue eyes
of the monster...

he haunts her dreams
at night
doesn't let her
rest
in every single one
it seems
he does something
bad

being an unwelcome guest.

the terror grips her
every time
and she feels her heart
stop
in her chest.

She wakes up in her room
an empty bed
there's nobody there to comfort her
and take these frightening thoughts
from her head...


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ToeTagJaneDoe
Posted 27 Jan 2013 18:21
This is good ....
.... and I like it
Well done!

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frogprince
Posted 05 Jan 2013 19:50
Fear after the loss of arms that protect her. Now she is alone with bad dreams haunting her. When they come she awakes looking for the comfort of arms long departed. Good work.
 

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