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I'm working on that

Learning to love again
I trust you,

But I don’t trust me,

Not yet at least.

I like you,

But I don’t like me,

I’m working on that.

I have feelings for you,

But, I still don’t know

How I feel about myself.

I love you.

I am trying to love myself,

Because until I do,

I can’t be loved,

Or truly love another.

I trust a lot of things.

I trust a lot of people.

It seems the hardest thing to trust

Is myself,

My feelings,

My emotions,

My love.

But I’m working on that.
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3rebels4
Posted 24 Feb 2013 14:12
It reminds me of how I made the decision to love myself instead of striving for others attention. Love yourself and the rest will fall into its right place.
Kiki
Posted 16 Feb 2013 14:14
Beautifully put!! It is like reading my own thoughts...You are a great poet!!
angelicelf
Posted 15 Feb 2013 11:35
A simple truth, simply written, that all have felt. The oddity of a simple truth is that it is often hard to deal with. Simple does not mean easy. I have been told recently that I should praise more and write less, I'm working on that. It was very good.
Isadora
Posted 13 Feb 2013 20:17
Finding or better yet discovering one's self is the peak of a new world.
Allow those feelings to define the future. Beautiful work...
redrandi
Posted 13 Feb 2013 13:22
Very nice words for so difficult a discussion. We all identify with the idea of love and trust. And the rarity of getting the right mixture for both. I would say that trust comes from our mind and love from our heart, but your word are much better. We don't just read them we can feel them.
HK4167
Posted 13 Feb 2013 12:59
Well done with honest emotions and deep thoughts. Many of us have went through places like this.
steffanie
Posted 13 Feb 2013 09:51
I used to feel like that. Very nicely put.
fuzzy1954
Posted 13 Feb 2013 08:39
listen to your heart my friend there no better guide thru your life's journey
CKAcres
Posted 13 Feb 2013 06:11
Honest words, most can share and feel. Works in progress as it be. Nicely done.
frankstevens
Posted 12 Feb 2013 19:54
well done
thanks for sharing
Kari
Posted 12 Feb 2013 17:49
I think everyone who has loved and lost, goes thru something
like this.
magnificent1rascal
Posted 12 Feb 2013 17:10
Very nice.
 

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