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They thought he fell... she knew he jumped...
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You promised me forever,
But that became never
when I got the call...

You'd had a terrible fall,
But they came to know
That fall wasn't a fall at all.

You had jumped.

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Circle_Something
Posted 19 Jan 2013 16:43
That's powerful and I think the fact that you've never lost anyone (and I sincerely hope you never do) to suicide makes it even more powerful, in some way.

frankstevens
Posted 18 Jan 2013 10:23
your a good writer please continue

fuzzy1954
Posted 17 Jan 2013 14:37
Leann I for one love your work pls keep writing from your heart and soul
thanks you
5+++

Colors_of_the_Wind
Posted 04 Jan 2013 21:31
...this one was a school one. I have, thankfully, never lost anyone to suicide. I almost did this year, however, and it quite terrified me.

Same with the... Never Forget one, never been a victim nor a witness of domestic violence, but I have read plenty and heard of plenty on the news to know how to write it and what it does to a person. Some would also say I get way too much into my characters...

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frogprince
Posted 03 Jan 2013 17:50
Such a sad lament. Your friend jumped rather than seek help and your love.
 

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