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Late January Snowfall
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DLizze

Late January Snowfall

I am enthralled by little pins

of cold that dissipate on my tongue.

The crisp air tingles my nostrils

as I gaze into the soft grey sky.

The flakes are tiny.

They float lazily down

and sparkle for an instant

before disappearing into the grass.

The silence is palpable.

"This is it", I think to myself.

"This is the real snow

I have been waiting for

ever since that first wet,

sticky mess in November."

I want to laugh out loud

and shout into the sky.

But it would be almost sacreligious

to break the silence.

I gather firewood and go

back into the house.

The dog wants to go outside,

she barks once

and the moment is gone.

But her presence reminds me of you.

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DLizze
Posted 18 Jan 2013 08:59
Incidentally,the cover photo was taken on Feb 10, 2010, looking through my paito door. The snow was 32" deep when it stopped snowing. In Westminster, Maryland,where I took it, that broke all sorts of records.
Noraj
Posted 17 Jan 2013 09:17
Ah the fresh crisp clean moment of the newly fallen snow.
steffanie
Posted 16 Jan 2013 17:20
Ah... some lovely words there.
rantingsenior
Posted 15 Jan 2013 17:33
A beautiful description.. May the memory be a pleasant one.
CKAcres
Posted 15 Jan 2013 10:20
Very nicely done.
Kiki
Posted 15 Jan 2013 10:20
Beautifully captured... I was holding my breath while reading it.. Too bad it was over..smiles..little moments of pure bliss..thank you for sharing!
Kari
Posted 15 Jan 2013 09:54
beautifully told of what snow can be.
 

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