You are 1 of 136 active visitors 0 Members in the chat rooms
1,190 members
Latest Forum Posts:

Loving You

Tags: love, warmth
I love you
You brightened my dark sky with your starlight...the light that shone in your eyes

Taking me to new heights as I lost myself in their depth

warming my cold skin with the gentle stroke of your hand

pulling me into your warm embrace as you promised me it would all be okay

How can I feel this way that I feel?

I get so lost in your eyes

craving the fire that I find in your lips

needing the passion in your eyes

I could stop all time just to hold you close the way we are right now

closing my eyes and feeling your warmth

your safety

your love

you have given me a world that I had never seen before

I know I will never be the same

I love you so deeply, so honestly...so raw

You have made your way so deep into my heart

give me your soul and I will let you have mine

I will give you all of the time that you want

I look into your face as the moon highlights your skin

taking your hand into mine

feeling your lips as the fires start to burn

This is where I belong

This story is protected by International Copyright Law, by the author, all rights reserved. If found posted anywhere other than storiesspace.com with this note attached, it has been posted without my permission.

To link to this story from your site - please use the following code:

<a href="http://www.storiesspace.com/stories/poetry/loving-you.aspx">Loving You</a>

Report offensive post

Comments(4)

HK4167
Posted 05 Feb 2013 16:26
Such a sweet, lovely and beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing with us.
fuzzy1954
Posted 03 Feb 2013 20:16
sweetness from a loved one
Hammlette
Posted 03 Feb 2013 11:01
I get lost in your eyes, the fire in your lips....if only... well done as always.
LauraLee_Sweetness
Posted 03 Feb 2013 08:52
how romantically sweet
 

Post a Comment (max 500 characters):

 

Tell us why

Please tell us why you think this story should be removed.

Reason

Tell the author

The author has asked for feedback on your score of {score}. This will appear as a comment below.

Comment