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Much Luck

Just a random spewing of words in poetic format...


You remember the phone calls,

All those late nights,

(for you, not me)

I wrote all those poems,

You, all those comments.

It wasn't a long relationship,

Not by adult standards,

We lasted a year,

long distance, coast to coast,

Washington to Virginia,

But it felt like forever--

No, not the first few months,

That was Heaven,

I was so giggly and happiness bubbled,

But reality hit

And when reality hits, it hits hard,

We lasted a year,

And five days,

It was for the best,

Your depression was bringing me down,

And visa versa for you.

Now I hear you got a new girl,

A month after the break up,

Now, don't get the wrong idea,

I'm not jealous at all,

But really?

She's not going to solve your problems,

Sure, she's close--

close enough to meet up every day,

But it's a high school relationship,

And so far, you haven't had much luck in those.

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Comments(4)

HK4167
Posted 12 Mar 2013 12:15
Well done...long distance relationship is hard to work out, and young love is not easy either....
fuzzy1954
Posted 12 Mar 2013 07:03
well done
when you are my age you will one rainy day read your works while sipping a cup of tea. a smile on your face as you think how far you have grown
Peter_Pan
Posted 12 Mar 2013 06:53
Very well expressed.

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frogprince
Posted 22 Jan 2013 08:34
Nice way to chide an old flame. Long distance loves rarely last. You sound a little bitter that it was over and he rebounded so fast. You are strong and can survive this. Just keep going. Smile it keeps us all guessing.
 

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