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Surrender
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fuzzy1954
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Surrender

Tags: love, control
surrender to your urges
Surrender

surrender to my touch

your tease is coming to a shattering climax

as you surrender your body and soul

It shall come fast and hard

clothes ripped and torn

eyes screaming full of lust

waiting

waiting

to be claimed by your lover
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HK4167
Posted 30 Jan 2013 10:20
Love how you express your desire and passion in the beautiful words...

Isadora
Posted 29 Jan 2013 15:31
Intense desire...passion ablaze...Damn!!!

poetlou
Posted 28 Jan 2013 09:37
love the passion in this write, and anticipation

fuzzy1954
Posted 28 Jan 2013 08:07
thank you my friends.... it was a detour from my main stories.... it flowed very easy thinking of my soul mate

Hammlette
Posted 28 Jan 2013 06:47
very nice! Very passionate

CKAcres
Posted 28 Jan 2013 06:15
A change of path for you Fuzzy nicely done.

sea
Posted 27 Jan 2013 23:46
yes surrender and sweet fulfillment indeed, yet again you prove you can be good at other genre's if you really wish to! extremely sensual!

LauraLee_Sweetness
Posted 27 Jan 2013 21:14
wow
 

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