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Wings in Flight

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Stepping stones build a path

Across the ocean, against storms

Gray skies open as doves seek

A place to perch, rest and sleep

Winds cannot detour their flight

Even if these birds must learn to walk

Moving forward without a second thought

Wings or feet will guide the way

The fruits of this are to be seen

Yet shall they be sour or bittersweet

Always in flight seeking tomorrow

Tired wings bond and find a home

Once trust is given, it must be kept

For if it is lost never again will it return

These are the stones the pave the road

Upon muddled water, turned crystal pure

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CKAcres
Posted 05 Feb 2013 06:02
Wonderful piece Isadora, heart warming and real.

HK4167
Posted 04 Feb 2013 15:08
Wonderful...such a beautiful poem...

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fuzzy1954
Posted 03 Feb 2013 19:14
truly given from your heart
I love your way of expressing yourself
wings or feet shall guide there way
your poems continue to move me
and push me to be and do better
thank you. 5+++++

LauraLee_Sweetness
Posted 03 Feb 2013 17:09
this is wonderful on so many levels.

Hammlette
Posted 03 Feb 2013 13:42
I am speechless once more. I bet knowing you that the vows will be kept, and the fruits of this will be forever sweet for you. Well done. Thank you.

Peter_Pan
Posted 03 Feb 2013 12:57
I must say the symbolism is very entrancing. Am I correct that you are speaking of friendship vows and the need that they be kept without question or loss of trust? I have that kind of vow with special people. I am always happy when they are kept truly and faithfully.

snoop
Posted 03 Feb 2013 12:42
I DO like your writing and your style of expression. Thank you for sharing.
 

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