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Wish You Were Here

From when I was still in my long distance relationship... Song quotes by Avril Lavigne...
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"I can be tough,
I can be strong,
But with you
it's not like that
at all...

There's a girl
who gives a shit,
Behind this wall,
You just walk through it."

I have walls...
They're up at school
and in front of my family
and some of my friends,
but I can't seem to
keep them up around you.

They're all always down with you,
and I'm weak
and my heart's vulnerable
and when I need you...
I need you.

when I have my off days,
I need you.

when something's wrong...
I'm going to need you then
too.

I wish you were here,
it would make all this so much
easier
so much better
so much...

I just wish you were here...

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fuzzy1954
Posted 29 Jan 2013 09:12
hold your love
he will come to you
another wonderful work from you

frogprince
Posted 05 Jan 2013 19:06
So heartfelt. The need or a friend for the one closer to her than anyone else. Yet he can't be there. All she can do is wish it were possible. Whar a sentiment. What a plea for love. Beautiful.
 

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