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Name:
Lorelie London
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Age:
33
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Cancer
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In a Relationship
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Illinois, United States

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Topic: The Rules of Writing
Posted: 27 Jun 2011 09:49

Although that is a funny paper you posted about "following the rules of writing" (it's cute!) I don't totally agree with it. If you think of writing as a form of "art" then you are allowed "creative freedom" - which means you are allowed to break the rules, if you want! All really good writers seem to do this. After all, we're not back in English class being graded. So if you want to write: Louisa looked totally hot. But only because her hair extensions were in. I say, go for it! As for editing my work? I tend to go overboard with that, which is why I like writing contests. There is a deadline and I have to adhere to it, which forces me NOT to get bogged down with over-editing.

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Thoughts on a Bus

I stand here forever, with traffic zooming by me. I feel like everyone is staring at me, wondering why I'm just standing here, like a lost soul. I don't know what to do with my hands. I try to act like I don't care. I'm cool. I'm above it all. But inside, I hate it. I hate waiting for the bus. I don't like taking public transportation. My friend, Alyssa is different. She thinks it's...

Added 23 Jan 2012 | Category Musings | Votes 6 | Avg Score 4.67 | Views 662 | 5 Comments

Picture of a Monarch

"Picture of a Monarch" Fluttering gently, all around Landing right in front of me, not making a sound This beauty is amazing. It has so much power. I stop in my tracks, to view a Monarch on a flower. Wings of bright orange. Petals of bright pink This sure beats any poster at the mall, I think. But the sight is so ephemeral. I know it won't last. So I run in to get my camera....

Added 14 Jan 2012 | Category Poetry | Votes 6 | Avg Score 4.5 | Views 551 | 2 Comments

The Tease

I like to tease I don't aim to please. I think it's fun If you look, I've won! A flash of "this" there A glimpse of white underwear. I'm providing a show Where it leads? Sure I know. Not to the bed But rather, to the head! Where you will think of me When your wife thinks it is her, you see. Some say it's not nice. That it has a price. They say I need love ...

Added 27 Jun 2011 | Category Poetry | Votes 8 | Avg Score 4.13 | Views 1,425 | 6 Comments

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