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Coma

Alone in the dark

I first wrote this from a prompt given by a friend - hers was a first person account of being a hostage in her own mind and much longer than a micro and a fantastic read!

Darkness and silence surround me like rope binding me to a hospital bed. I can't move! Why can't I move? I want to scream but can't.  I can't even feel my tongue.  Physically, I just feel numb, and my thoughts won't stop!  Am I alive?  Maybe I died.  If I died, where is the bright light to follow?  Is this it?  I just exist in this darkness, unable to move for eternity?  Please - is there anyone out there?  Am I alone?  Darkness and silence hold me tight.  This is hell without the fire and flames or even the devil...

 

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