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Woman

Her beauty represents us well
Her intellect does us proud
Soft as a feather; yet strong as steel
She lives her life out loud
Her bright future is our bright future
Her failures aren’t hers alone
When she feels pain we feel the same
After all she's one of our own
She possesses a lifelong membership
In the mightiest club in the world
Power was placed in the palm of her hand
The day she was born a girl
Her eyes sparkle with the light of life and love
Her hips sway to a rhythm only they can hear
She gives birth to beauty in the form of man and art
She soldiers through madness
In the face of exquisite fear
Cocoa brown or seafoam green
honey gold or baby blue
Her eyes capture life's best photographs
Images sublime; no matter the hue
Her bosom is a source of sustenance
Her mouth the source of comforting words
Her arms cradle slumbering babies and children
Her voice calms raging seas with authority unheard
This creature is a woman
A feeling, faltering sensual soul
She rules to the right of her mighty king
The softer half of their sovereign whole
She is a woman
Bendable but unbreakable
benevolent giver of life
Loyal friend and confidant
Loving mother and wife
She is a woman
No shrinking violent
Radiantly colorful yet beautifully plain
The most fragrant flower in the garden of life
A rose by any other name...

Woman
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Comments(13)

HK4167
Posted 13 Feb 2013 13:37
What a wonderful poem. I totally agree with fuzzy1954 and CKAcres below, couldn't express it better myself. I only wish I could give it a 10.
ACCooper
Posted 13 Feb 2013 12:39
Snoopy (Rick), thank you so much. When I read words like yours and the other commenters, it encourages me greatly! Thanks again!
ACCooper
Posted 13 Feb 2013 12:37
Steffanie, thank u so much!!'
ACCooper
Posted 13 Feb 2013 12:37
Fuzzy1954, I sm humbled by your appreciation of my poem. Thank you!!
snoop
Posted 13 Feb 2013 10:36
I am very impressed with your poem and the 'depth' you are showing. Your understanding and maturity shines through. "5"+++

Rick
steffanie
Posted 13 Feb 2013 09:32
What lovely words. Very well done.

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fuzzy1954
Posted 13 Feb 2013 08:31
a story of a true woman holding life tight to her heart and speaks from her soul

well done off to my favorite list
ACCooper
Posted 13 Feb 2013 08:07
Peter_Pan, thank you very much!!!
ACCooper
Posted 13 Feb 2013 08:06
Thank you, CKAcres!
Peter_Pan
Posted 13 Feb 2013 06:58
I can certainly not fault your writing.
CKAcres
Posted 13 Feb 2013 05:51
Your words paint wonderful images of a woman who, in the garden of life is loved and respected. Well done.
ACCooper
Posted 12 Feb 2013 19:53
Thanks so much!! I really appreciate your kind words!!!!!!
DirtyMartini
Posted 12 Feb 2013 19:05
Nicely done...really liking your poems btw...what I've had the chance to read so far...reminds me I should read more...
 

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