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should of written on here sooner.
Hi all im new(ish) and am friends with Lovely Tiff, Rebellious soul, Entangled fate, Lilxfox 13, TaliaRussell, Ejg, Nox and Frogprince.
I have just had my first story printed here and would love some feedback.
I am looking for more friends, and some great stories to reed.
Hi all im new(ish) and am friends with Lovely Tiff, Rebellious soul, Entangled fate, Lilxfox 13, TaliaRussell, Ejg, Nox and Frogprince.
I have just had my first story printed here and would love some feedback.
I am looking for more friends, and some great stories to reed.
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Hi this was site was recommended to me by a friend.
i'm new to sites like this. been writing for about a year, and my first book is nearly finished... (grammar check and final draft need completing)
iv been reading a few posts and got some tips... but the grammar check is going to take a wile.
Would love to chat to any people who can help or find them selves in a similar situation.
a short description of my story (100,000 words)
A young woman awakes in a strange world full of monsters and magic with no memories.
the only clue to her past is a crystal around her neck and one word "Lowenna
if any one wants to chat about writing or stories read just pm me
i'm new to sites like this. been writing for about a year, and my first book is nearly finished... (grammar check and final draft need completing)
iv been reading a few posts and got some tips... but the grammar check is going to take a wile.
Would love to chat to any people who can help or find them selves in a similar situation.
a short description of my story (100,000 words)
A young woman awakes in a strange world full of monsters and magic with no memories.
the only clue to her past is a crystal around her neck and one word "Lowenna
if any one wants to chat about writing or stories read just pm me
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names are important, since my book is set in a strange world where there is no technology I have tried to use old names, so they seem to fit better. Some are Celtic, some are old English some are Asian and some I made up (different races have different name origins)
I also have tried to put friends names in the book but have changed them just a touch, i.e. I have a friend called Tiff and another called Rich, so in the book they became Tiffa & Ricardo, I have also tried to avoid names which people would relate to tv or other books, i.e. Zeena, who became Zeanith.
I have renamed a few characters after I get to know them as I would hope people get attached to them and there old name didn't seam to fit.
Orcs and trolls have simple names i.e. Narg, Grilk, Tog. Noble men and women have long fancy names, i.e. Sebastian, Darcarial, Vladimir.
Lawmen have Strong Names i.e. Zeanith, Erkut, Marchel. and town people have a good mix depending on where they come from, i.e. Reath, Vorn, Uma, Valery
The Lead has one of my favourite Celtic names... Lowenna
I think names can show status and can help readers connect with the character.
I also have tried to put friends names in the book but have changed them just a touch, i.e. I have a friend called Tiff and another called Rich, so in the book they became Tiffa & Ricardo, I have also tried to avoid names which people would relate to tv or other books, i.e. Zeena, who became Zeanith.
I have renamed a few characters after I get to know them as I would hope people get attached to them and there old name didn't seam to fit.
Orcs and trolls have simple names i.e. Narg, Grilk, Tog. Noble men and women have long fancy names, i.e. Sebastian, Darcarial, Vladimir.
Lawmen have Strong Names i.e. Zeanith, Erkut, Marchel. and town people have a good mix depending on where they come from, i.e. Reath, Vorn, Uma, Valery
The Lead has one of my favourite Celtic names... Lowenna
I think names can show status and can help readers connect with the character.
Active Ink Slinger
Quote by Rebellious_SoulQuote by rbo
The first "friend" I had on Stories space, and a nice guy
I'm a girl...
and Yay Justine! (I think I am running out of nice things to say...)
sorry...dam and I read your profile (can you for give me, you are nice) picture confused me
