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"Taking the sun, the moon, the stars and every thing good in me."

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"Suicide Blues' by Lightnin' Hopkins 15. 03.1912 20. 01.1982"

I am sitting with my morning coffee. My girl walks in and says "it's over." And just like that, she is gone. I watch from our kitchen window as she drives away. Taking the sun, the moon, the stars, and anything inside of me that is good. I am left a shell of the man she seduced five months ago. I stand frozen as my heart explodes. I think back to when she'd wake me as we slowly made love.

But things change, and that's the way it is. I know today will be one hell of a day.

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