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Over 90 days ago
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Quote by rolandlytle
I have to say, this is an interesting thread. I enjoyed reading everyone's answers.
I have not posted a story I did not like. I have worked on a couple of dozen things that never panned out, but I would not post them. Maybe someday I might think of a way to make them worthwhile.
I am super critical of my own writing. I keep changing it again and again trying to get it just right, but at some point I have to stop when I'm not making helpful changes. It is common for me to do 5-10 rewrites of a piece before I submit it.
Even then I still notice every single little bit that I feel is not just right. A word grouping, phasing, or word choice that I feel could be better. Organizing the story's flow and pace, especially in my Sci-Fi stories.
I often find it difficult to go back and read some of my work because I see the possible potential I did not quite reach.
I think my stories are good and a few very good, but I have not written the story yet that everything fell into place. A story that people read and go WOW. I may never, but I think I can if I keep getting better.
The people on Stories Space have made me such a much better writer with their advise and examples. I look at my earliest few stories compared to what I do now, and I can only thank all my friends for their help and support.


There isn't any right or wrong way to develop our skills as a writer. Each of us has our own style and our work product reflects that style. Of course we adapt and evolve as our career allows and maybe even change entirely if that's what it takes. In the end, it's equal amounts of dissatisfaction and perseverance that gives our work its identity. Some of us sketch things out in pencil before we paint. Others just paint.
It sounds to me like your friend is really invested in you and only wanted to be a part of your experience.. my thought would be to thank them and tell them you may or may not use their suggestions.. if they are a close friend then perhaps a discussion about how you prefer them to propose edits might be had.. good luck on your writing and welcome to SS..
Raked yards with piles of colored leaves...

Covered bridges..

A dog running through your yard.. and everyone knows who he is..

Backyard tents from old blankets..
buuuuuurppp! had the beer..
sat right here..
no one was near..
EOL is mine.. never fear!!
whoa! that's in violation of policy.. no more entries after the King has been declared..
Sorry ya'll.. I just verified with SS admin and the game has been officially terminated and I have been declared the winner.. so relish that you gave it your best but it just wasn't enough..

All hail King Dreamcatcher..
Quote by authorised1960
I guess, like many of us here, I have quite a portfolio of accumulated works. I am not vain enough to imagine that everything I write is brilliant or even of any particular literary merit. However, I have written pieces that I am proud of, that I enjoyed writing and that please me still after some mental, emotional and chronological distance between composition and contemplation.

There are pieces, too, that annoy and disappoint, but which I 'let stand' as a reminder to myself that even after all this time I can (and do) still get it wrong.

I do have my favourites, items I have written that please me as stories/poems, for various reasons: plot, character/s, emotional impact, humour or whatever. In all honesty, of my entire body of work, they are few in number. That's not to say I dislike the other stuff, far from it. It's more like having favourite children from my brood of items: I prefer some to others!

I would have listed the works I like that I've submitted to SS, but I'm sure someone would have seen it as an attempt to promote myself (something I have unfairly been accused of elsewehere) or stroke my ego or somesuch thing, so I'll refrain.

I will be interested to read what you guys have to say about your work.


I will tell you which ones of yours I liked.. "Disintegration of the Heart".. "1914".. "Funny".. "Writing, Empathy and the Author"..

As for myself, at any one time I usually have 3-4 pieces in various stages of completion.. other times I will wake up at 2am in the morning and finsish a piece in one setting.. and I also have pieces I am fond of that have never been posted..

but of those I have posted I do like.. "One Bite".. "Ancient".. "Finding You".. "Untouchable".. "The Question".. that's not to say there aren't others, but my arm is tired from patting myself on the back.. lol...
Brrrr.. it's cold but not where I'm at
I don't have cold or snow or none of that
Here I'm getting tan from the sun
Walking and biking and having fun
but if it makes you feel better I still wear a hat
With all this talk of snow I am sad
Wearing tshirt and shorts I feel bad
Looking for cheer
I grab another ice cold beer
and feel glad..