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Dreamcatcher
Over 90 days ago
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Dizzy Daisy.. we're all a bit hazy.. you're standing in line with a frown.. it's not that you're lazy.. you're just Crazy Daisy.. for it is I who wears the crown..
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Oh yeah...here's something my friends can drink to...Draft Magazine is looking for articles on, you guessed it, beer...so, go out and do that research this weekend for that next article...


DRAFT Magazine
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Let me know when the latex protection industry needs some fact finding studies...
no.. no.. no.. wildrose_girl.. sit and watch the banner unfurl.. the winner's name is about to be spread.. and no surprise for all along I've said.. I'll proudly wear the crown upon my head.. the rest of you can applaud instead.. oh.. yeah.. and one more thing.. from my WINNER WINNER CHICKEN DINNER we'll all be fed...
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Hmm, I guess it really depends on personal preference. I use both, but it depends on how I want others to read it. Typically when I write from a limited first person viewpoint, I will use present tense, acting as if my character is experiencing things the same time the reader is. When writing in 3rd person (limited or omniscient) I fall into a past tense.

I've noticed that many writers will use past tense, as if 'retelling' a story that has already occurred. I don't think this is wrong, it really depends on the presentation of the story.

I've rather enjoyed using 1st person present tense, as I feel it invokes a more intense and personal experience. Play around and see what suits your needs with the story best; it's different for each one!

M. Hendrix


Nicely stated..
I started writing when I was 10 years old as an escape from a miserable childhood.. I share probably less than 5% of my work.. and the little I do share is so I don't seem like a kibitzer when I rate and comment on the other writers here who are far more prolific and better at it than me..
Sorry I'm late.. had to make everyone wait.. so let me get this straight.. and may I clearly state.. and what I say is without debate.. WINNER WINNER CHICKEN DINNER!!! I wear the crown proudly..
coconut pineapple.. strawberry.. and rocky road... with crushed nuts, hot fudge, whipped cream.. and a drizzle of hot caramel sauce.. and one of those little wafer cookies..

bread pudding or peach cobbler
OK.. breaks over.. everybody back on the push brooms.. there's a parade coming and I'm on the winner's float with my trophy.. I'll autograph programs for everybody later..
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Oh, Miss Shy Person...I think I may have figured out what a pooter might be after all...and assuming your pooter was made within the last twenty years or so, it should have a microphone thingy...

Of course, not having a microphone to plug into the thingy could still present a problem...

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I LOVE that pooter! This is an old laptop. Like the old brick-type mobiles, but a laptop. I have discovered what I THINK is a hole for the mic, but... I don't have a mic. So you are all currently spared my northern accent and silly voices.






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...and I've found that just shouting into that little hole doesn't work either..


Soooo many comments... sooooo the wrong site for them...



Hmmm.. I think I'm being chastised.. but not sure for what.. oh yeah.. I forgot.. it's for being me..
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The picture you have posted of a pooter might be a pooter in your world, but a pooter in my world is a heavy box-like contraption


Oh, Miss Shy Person...I think I may have figured out what a pooter might be after all...and assuming your pooter was made within the last twenty years or so, it should have a microphone thingy...

Of course, not having a microphone to plug into the thingy could still present a problem...



...and I've found that just shouting into that little hole doesn't work either..
I just heard from the parade director that they need the 3 people directly in front of me to sweep up confetti after I pass by.. Taken.. WRG.. and CK.. there are brooms over by the curb.. you can take turns clapping for me while the other two sweep...
you children behave!! don't make me come up there.. now settle down while I get my trophy..