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Granted but Kiera brings pizza which she cooked and you eat and then you spend 5 days in ER with food poisoning ...

I wish I could get steak as a prescription item on the NHS.
Litter

Ugly scars despoil
Roadside verges and hedgerows
Across the country

Ignorant drivers
Carelessly toss their rubbish
Anywhere they like

Why such laziness?
Our once green and pleasant land
Is not anymore
bursts into a hysterical fit of giggling at the sight or sound of the word 'conniption'....
Granted - but it becomes a stinky, detritus-filled, scum-covered impassable pond instead...

I wish Ginger would come and have a beer with me... along with Kiera
I agree, Nekala. In this form of work, you can build better feeling for the antagonist. Good or bad.

Just a lovely twist in its purist form.
Ah yes, I don't have it posted on here but I have a story called Unbelievable World, were the antagonists is the one leading the story. Of course it is quiet breathe taking by learning how and why he does the things he do. Very fine line of work but still needs a lot of editing until I ever post it for the public eye.
banned for being the one person who always seems to be banning me!
I wish this thread wasn't disappearing into the dark abyss...