Someone finally posted this on Youtube!
Man I've been waiting a long time for that.
- 'Course why I didn't post it myself is a long story,
(It all started in a small town on the shores of Lake Ontario. The year was...never mind).
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I remember the days of sitting around a table and just bouncing ideas off each other while writing. The one thing we always tried to remember was that we all loved writing. No matter the subjective, the outcome was the objective.
My personal favourite writing is poetry. But, while another site, I tried a short story. One of the comments was something to the effect of, 'begin a new sentence every time someone else speaks.'
That comment was due to the fact that my dialogue was contained within the same paragraph while two parties were conversing. I constantly repeat that one to myself, and I'm always up for more enlightenment.
My personal favourite writing is poetry. But, while another site, I tried a short story. One of the comments was something to the effect of, 'begin a new sentence every time someone else speaks.'
That comment was due to the fact that my dialogue was contained within the same paragraph while two parties were conversing. I constantly repeat that one to myself, and I'm always up for more enlightenment.
A warm and heartfelt Thank You for the above.However,no mice needed to chase.I have enough fun chasing falling rose petals in the "EOL" game,as I claim myself the winner there!!!!!!!
" If everybody is thinking alike,then somebody Isn't thinking." Gen.G.S.Patton
