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Quote by DenimAngel

It was a super busy morning then I came home and took a long nap them kids in the Church nursery kicked my butt


Ah, those Church kids are a rough bunch (Yes, I was one once. And my Dad was a PK.).

Been kind of blah and low energy this evening. Went for a walk but I was just kind of plodding along and couldn't really enjoy what I had to listen to (a podcast and a bunch of music). Weird because I was in a pretty good mood for most of the day.

Anyhoo, it's getting late so an herbal tea is in order. Lemon ginger is a fave.
Bike taken in to the shop, some more shopping done, floors washed. Now it's Mill...er...tea time. Green tea and cookies time, to be precise.
First track from the next album from Auri. Same lineup but apparently Kai Hahto from Nightwish was brought on as a session drummer, making 3 Nightwish members involved now.

Good morning! I've put the coffee on. Kettle is boiling with some Irish Breakfast in my favorite teapot.

Just submitted the next Micro of the Day. Watch for it.

It is a bit chilly here this morning but we are supposedly headed for 30C (86F) and humid before a system comes through tonight to cool things back down.
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Scott, I want to join you. But every time I start to write my brain leaves my body. But it would be fun if I could write one or two. Thanks for the idea.


I know that feeling. The trick is for it come back with more ideas for stories.
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The ones I was referring to were the BroodX or seventeen-year cicadas. The sound they all made was very impressive. At first, I thought I was hearing car alarms or police sirens going off. I am sure you can find videos on YouTube showing them and the audio picking up that roar.



Yeesh. Damn things are noisy enough to start and these ones are worse? * shudders *
Trying to resurrect an old computer here. Problem: I can't remember what password is on my account and my wife's account, which I do have the password for, isn't an administrator so I can't do much with it. Growl. Need it working because it is the only bootable computer in the house with a DVD drive and we have an old DVD from my son's school days that we want to rip to MP4.

The first Stories Space story of my "Micro of the Day" project is now up. Enjoy!

https://www.storiesspace.com/stories/micro-fiction/-the-target-.aspx
First of my "Micro of the Day" series to go here is submitted. It's horror, but what else is new from me? I think half of my output here is in that genre. I'll post a link once verification happens.

Quote by gillianleeza

I know I complained about the incessant cicada buzzing but I feel a bit sad that it has stopped. They only live for about a month.


Still too early for cicadas here. They are more of a July-August thing in Ontario, though maybe global warming will shift that eventually.

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The heat has returned but I did enjoy the last few days of cooler weather.


Supposed to be somewhat warm and muggy for the weekend here, then cool down again.

Coffee and tea are on for this lovely Saturday. Tea is a pot of my Sunday Tea (black w. French Vanilla) but there's lot of others if you prefer something else.
One thing I like about micros is that there is lots of room to set things up, then let the reader's imagination run wild. It is too little space to really flesh things out so you give a few key bits and then the imagination can fill in the rest.
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Hi everyone !

I've come across from the sister site because I've been told that this place is a wonderful comfy forum full of friendly folk and
well written stories.

And that's exactly what I've found - so glad I'm here !


Hey, Yuri (space is one of my pet interests so love the username), welcome to SS!!
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Scott, good luck on the micro thing


One down, next one is in progress. The second will go here. It's horror and dark as they come. I think. It didn't make me laugh at least.

More tea to get me through the afternoon.
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I know the feeling *huggle hug hug* I hope everything goes well for your blood work. Treat yourself 😃👍 you deserve it. You got this!



Numbers were good all round so no complaints. Next thing I need to survive: my second dose of COVID vaccine. That's booked for next Tuesday.leZ5CjFZoxjN2nRo

Good morning, all. Coffee and kettle are on. How's things?
How do you do it? How do you get a story down to under 1000, or under 100, words and still get the story told?

I am sure there are all kinds of tricks and tips for writing short short fiction. Let's share them.

1. Adjectives and adverbs are the enemy, esp. in micro. Yes, you might need the former from time to time but review each one to make sure it is really necessary.

2. Active takes fewer words than passive in many cases. And writing in active voice is good practice anyhow.

3. Watch for cases where a small wording change can save words (trying to remember the example from the micro i wrote this afternoon and I can't)
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except for (insert name(s) of your antagonist)who fell victum to a sudden, mysterious, and painfully disabling case of Shingles


LOL. I actually had a bout of shingles back in the winter. Not disabling and fairly mild compared to what I have heard from others, but definitely made me uncomfortable for a few days.

So, I may have an idea. Instead of knocking myself dead trying to stick the landing on long stories, I'll try doing some micros. I'm calling it "Micro of the Day" but it may not be daily on here. Some may go on the site that must not be named. Maybe the challenge of doing interesting, meaningful stories in 100 words will get my creative juices flowing again.

Green tea and definitely more cookies. Fasting for my blood work has left me rather miserable all day. Glad this is only every three months.
Not 102 here but heating up again to be sure. Then it is supposed to cool off and get shower-y tomorrow.

So what do you do when you have half a story? I have one sitting in my "slush pile" that I started a few months ago. The part that is written (the beginning) is marvelous, IMHO. But I kind of stalled and every time I go back and read it, I just don't know what to do with it.
Welp, my turn to fire up the coffee maker and kettle. I'm just drinking tea (fasting for blood work) but there's still cake and cookies left. Kick back and enjoy some.

Warming up here, but still sunny so might work on the deck again.
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He's a great writer. He wrote a book called The Great Iowa Baseball Confederacy that blew me away.


Oh, very. He racked up awards something fierce up here. Was even an Officer of the Order of Canada.
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The Natural
Major League
For the Love of the Game
Field of Dreams
Bull Durham



Out of that lot, I think I've only seen Field of Dreams, but then I'm not at all fond of "America's Pastime". You can keep it as far as I am concerned. Well, until the Jays are in the playoffs again, then I'll probably change my tune for a year or two. Though being a Jays fan where I live is a bit risky. This was Detroit Tigers turf for a long time (we're halfway between Toronto and Detroit).

Trivia: Field of Dreams is based on Shoeless Joe by the late W. P. Kinsella, one of my country's literary greats.
Picked up a little something to celebrate the good news. Have a slice or three, everyone. Should go good with my lunchtime tea.



Yeah, things got out of hand but I think it was a fairly stressful situation for a lot of us and tempers flared. I'm not one to carry grudges so hopefully things quiet down as we eagerly anticipate the new site.
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I almost hate to ask how you do subtraction in this system.


I didn't mess with that - just addition - but either way, I don't think Jane (or any woman) would want a wife that ironically messed with math only to have it backfire on her.


Good thing you're not an accountant, I guess. But I'm sure Jane could handle it. She'd just have to keep the household budget herself.rKxBiQmhrS5TBjnz
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You say that now, but wait until you have to actively remind yourself to add the numbers every time you do math the way I have to.


I almost hate to ask how you do subtraction in this system.
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That awkward moment when you've somehow convinced yourself that people have been doing addition wrong for centuries and now actual addition seems wrong to you.

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How addition is done: 5 + 6 = 11.
How I've started thinking it's done: 5 + 6 = 56.

Tldr; I'm an idiot. Nuff said.


I think there's days when I might prefer your way.
Yeah, been thinking over writing some myself. Could be a fun exercise.
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Stop being so negative. Others offered to help. Like a dog with a rotting bone, you chose to go your own way. Don't take your frustration out on me or anyone else, ESPECIALLY in this thread.



If you really want to help, leave. Or at least start being constructive.


I think asking people to leave is over the top, and liable to jinx the project, or at least the good vibes and spirit of camaraderie associated with it.

Can we all chill out a little bit?


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