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Thanks for the info, you two. I've never done anything with, to, or on Good Reads. If I want to bore folks with my take on a book, I'll do it here. ;)

Well, it's not like we haven't commented on each other's stories, but here's your official greeting:

Greetings, Bri.

Let me add an 'Amen' to what Gypsy just wrote. To see a great example of what she mentioned, check out the Critique forum.

Probably just my contrary nature, but the first book title that popped into what passes for my mind was, "Galileo's Daughter."

From a marketing standpoint, I suppose it makes sense. Odds are "The Cloistered Nun's Father' wouldn't have the been as eye-catching.

Like most fads, literary or otherwise, odds are it will eventually fade.

Can't ever go too wrong quoting Trollop. That opening sentence is a gem. Thanks, Gypsy.

"It was admitted by all her friends, and also by her enemies,--who
were in truth the more numerous and active body of the two,--that
Lizzie Greystock had done very well with herself."

Almost forgot...came across this one recently.

-- This all started because of a clerical error.--
"The Pleasure of My Company by Steve Martin (yeah, THAT Steve Martin)

Great link, DM. Another good source is short story collections. Thumbing through them, checking out the different openings, can gin some ideas...I mean, besides just drinking gin. ;)

Truth be told, considering the number of votes on my last subs here and at Lush,I'm more in the 'Snaggle Puss Stage' of my writing career...exiting stage left. ;)
No fair using dem 'cute symbols. ;)

TINNITUS: ringing in the ear...At my age, I'm very familiar with the condition, but until reading "Sweet Tooth" by Ian McEwan, I'd never come across it in fiction to describe a type of faint, persistent noise.

Just finished, 'Sweet Tooth' by Ian McEwan. Can't recommend a book more highly. It's a combination love story and sort of a spy thriller centered aroun a young writer in GB during the early '70's and his relationship with a MI5 employee. Most of the book is written in first person from a female POV. Don't let McEwan's prizes or high lit rep put you off. This is a great read and IMO' must reading for would-be prize winning writers.

"Hearts Torn Asunder" is a very good read.

I've just started, "Sweet Tooth" by Ian McEwan. Don't let his prizes and 'high lit' reputation scare you off. This is a spy novel, of sorts, set in the '70's with a female protag/narrator and is written in first person. So far, it's been both a good read and an education on how to handle first person.

In the immortal words of, Randy Newman:

"Human kindness is overflowing, and I think it's gonna rain, today."

Well, rain-wise, there's at least an 80% chance here in Austin town. As for human kindness, Gov. R. Perry and the GOP dominated legislature still refuse to take Medicaid money from the Feds. Probably don't want to crowd waiting rooms with poor folks who can always go to an ER.
Andy, there's no 'right or wrong' answer. The only question is which will best help you tell your tale.

First person is more intimate but it restricts a writer to the narrator's point of view.

Third is the most flexible and is, by far, the most often used these days in fiction. The only genre I can think of where first person is common is in detective novels and many of today's suspense/mystery books are also in third person.

SS is a great place to try different approaches to story telling. BUT (note that's a big, but) if you just feel lead to try switching from first to third person or vice versa, do so sparingly and with great caution. A drink or two is also advisable. smile

Also and in addition, if you do give it a try, it might be best to send a message along with your submission warning the mods what's coming their way.

Good luck.

Good one, Gypsy. believe I'll go

RUMINATE (as in, think deeply)

on 'erstwhile' for, you know, a while.

Greetings. It's me and I'm back again. Number two daughter has been officially married off in due and ancient form. With luck my old nerves and checking account will begin to recover before long.

Thanks for the birthday good wishes. Things having been a tad hectic in what passes for my RL, I haven't been able to respond individually, but they all meant a lot.

Reading over these posts makes me feel proud to be a small part of the Stories Space family.

Thanks to every who has or will later join in the discussion.

ps: Please pardon the threadjack, but I'll be a bit scarce around here for a few days. My daughter's wedding will be on the 23rd. Once recovered from that physically and financially exhausting experience, I shall, not unlike a bad taco, be coming back. RdW
Let us all now pause to give thanks Brother Martini's prose was not accompanied by his photo.

Can I have a big, Amen?

Oh yeah, major congrats Alan. In my (very) humble opinion, you done did good, and who's going to argue with two smilies wearing sunglasses?

Maggie, you are a class act.

Roland, thanks for the compliment and for sharing your thoughts.

FWIW, I'm not sure there's a 'right' answer to how best to handle subjects some might find distasteful. My hope with that story was to imply the nature of the Klan while using humor to show them as flawed humans.

If you haven't been exposed to my pitiful prose, congratulations. smile But I would encourage you to go there and check out the comments.

Tempy, it's obvious you will have a long and glorious run here at SS. Anyone who quotes me on their third post is a most commendable keeper. ;)

But seriously (sort of) welcome to Stories Space.

Welcome to the 'blue' country, Liz. I recall being 18 once upon a time, but the memory is very, very distant and fading fast. ;)

Looking forward to reading your work.

Just in case there's any doubt, I will not, I say again, NOT, be using this space to pimp my latest SS story, "The Belle of Catawba Street," even though it is, IMHO, both funny and controversial. Any questions? ;)

I'm still focused on the do-nothing U.S. Congress. That's why my word for the day is:

methitic

Andrew, maybe this is a cultural thing, but just between you and me, around my neck of the woods, folks almost always use deodorant on their armpits and not their nasal passages. Of course, if the nose is what you prefer, then go for it. ;)

And BTW, no I didn't mention that stuff some lady-type persons of the opposite gender spray in a place other than their underarms, or nose,. and don't care to.

Fuzzy, because Mother Nature is the Mommy and said so, of course.

Andrew, Repeated repetitions of redundancies is rediculous, right?