Find your next favourite story now
Login
Tiger
Over 90 days ago

Forum

Active Ink Slinger
Finally back home, where I can drop by and say Hi! My Pear tree blossomed on time this Spring but my dogwoods are all just blossoming now, and my apple trees have just began to blossom. With all the rain the past few years, just about my entire tree cove has doubled in height! No exaggeration. I am hoping to put in some poplars and maples. Then I will have a nice tightly cropped mix of about 6 deciduous and 2 conifer,types. The first six types are tightly planted to insure competitiveness for sunlight. The reason for it is to produce trees with the harder wood than trees that are spaced on a tree farm.
Active Ink Slinger
Hot, rich coffee to keep me awake till the sun goes down! lol
Active Ink Slinger
Quote by AnnaMayZing
I find myself wondering. How many people (Families) are sitting and doing something together for the first time in a very long time?
In the long run, maybe some good will come of this pandemic.


Anna, Some years ago when young people started text messaging, I told my students at Uni, that I wanted them to go home for thanksgiving, and talk to one of their elders, and ask them about their lives.....just anything, and to write it up
for credit.
Less than half the class did it. I was a patient and kind man with my students but this was done to make them more family oriented. To get them to be thankful for their families.
Seeing my upset, one student asked me right out in class, "Doc, why are you upset?" I had to step out for a second and come back in smiling. I asked her, "Why didn't you all do your assignment?"
She said, with most of the class in agreement that when they are at home with their families, even at a big family dinner, they keep company with who is on line. One boy said firmly, "Now that's not right!"

I pray you are on to something there.
Active Ink Slinger
Quote by philliptennyson
Currently, I'm reading The History of Western Philosophy by Bertrand Russell. A great book. It starts from the Ancient times and covers every major era of our history. Also, he explains complicated things, so you can understand them easily.


That is a great book. He can be comical at times.
Active Ink Slinger
People tell me all the time, that they are bored. This is inconceivable to me. Did you know you can make every waking moment in your life meaningful? Granted, some moments are painful, nut it is meaningful. However, in a situation like we currently find ourselves in, locked up in a house or apartment, you would not believe how good you could be at some new hobby or skill, science or art. Just with simple logic, I can show you how to do it. Just find something that you always wanted to get good at like playing chess. Taking chess as an example, I can work out many others if you write to me privately and ask me to. Here is what you can do in this one "game."

For example, you could take an online course on almost anything, like learning how to play chess well.
(a) You could work on your openings
(b) You could work on your middle game
(c) You could work on your endgame.
(d) You could work on any of these when you have the white pieces
(e) You could work on any of these when you have the black pieces
(f) You could work on any of the above (a to e) to improve your offensive game
(g) ditto, to improve your defensive game.
(h) You could do any of the above for just one kind of piece: a king, a queen, a knight, a bishop, etc.
(i) You could do any of the above using the mathematical possibilities as shown on line that have been worked out with a computer.
(j) You could study any or all of the above by watching the great masters use them in actual games.
(k) You could use both (i) & (j) together.
This could go on for a lifetime. Some people do that and make a good living by winning games at tournament.
That list is seemingly endless.

Then you could be involved in the art/craft of making the materials used in playing the game. None is easy, and each involves a lot of work and research.
For example, in my family, my father was a skilled wood carver, and burnisher, and made many beautiful set of pieces, used by some very skilled players, or as a form of decoration in a game room.
My brother was a Master, so he made his living playing in tournaments.
As a hobby, I love to make the actual chessboard itself. There are so many ways that can be done. I have gotten some pretty fair prices for some of my boards.
No, they are not all alike.

Some people collect chess sets in a whole array of different ways.

I hope you can see that just around the game of chess, there are many thousands of interesting things you could do.
But more importantly, you could do millions of things with your time, with that kind of specificity.
Moreover, above I have just used an analytic method to work out the above lists.
One could work on one thing by creating whole new spin offs of an already existing game.

There is no need for anyone to be bored.
Active Ink Slinger
"Latcho Drom" by a gypsy village in the movie, "Latcho Drom" (=good/fateful journey/odyssey). A drom is Roma's ride in wagons and with horses in their lives. A band of people travelling together was always varied in size, and when two bands met up after a couple of years, some families would interchange the band they were with.
I would write all this out into a story but am afraid of the reaction I would get.
Active Ink Slinger
Urgent - ENrage [Using second and third to the last letters er the rules.]
Active Ink Slinger
Quote by AnnaMayZing
Quote by AnnaMayZing
Negotiation leading to happy conclusion.

Quote by Tiger
Negotiation is now almost mandatory.


My conclusion here, Tiger is that you chose the wrong word...


Why are you ridiculing me?
Active Ink Slinger
Quote by Marco
Hi, didn't find a better place where to post this.
I'm not English mothertongue, thus I often have troubles with the use of proper verb tenses (amongst other influences from my mother language). I have many stories, but I am fairly sure that they would be rejected because of that. So I'm looking for someone who would be so kind to proofread those I'd like to publish.
As far as now, I'm not going to try and publish the longer ones, in fact the short one I wish to publish is just around 15500 words (22 pages in MSWord).
I don't know if you have people helping with proofreading here, just hope so.
Thank you in advance.
Marco


Marco,

I have published articles and a book in more than one language. In most cases I am familiar with, nearly all European languages, come from Indo-European sources. The all have Mood and Tense structures that can be moved from one language to another, with minor adjustments.
If you are speaking of moving from Russian to English for example, it can be done, even though the Slavic languages do not use the verb "to be" in most cases.
So, if you are moving from a Romance to a Germanic language, you can now use "Google Translate" to do what you want to.

The real complications come with Mood and Tense structure, when one of the languages, does NOT, use them in their VERBS such as Mandarin Chinese often does not. So, for example, if you want say, "Hello! How are you?" Transliterated you just say, "Nin hao?" That says in English, "You well?" But it implies is opposite too. So, it really says, "You well or not well?" Notice there are no words for a verb.
But if I ask, "Have you had something to eat?" There you have asked in English, "You eat/not eat?" The time (which is in our verbs), is given by the person being asked in Mandarin: "I eat this morning," or, corrected in English, "I have eaten this morning."
So, in Mandarin, it is not a simple matter to move from English to Mandarin, or Mandarin to English partly because of the different ways, TIME is indicated [among many other things].
So, if your problem is like that, then Google Translate will not be perfect. There are a few languages that will take that system, many years to develop.
But unless you are dealing with a language like Mandarin, if you use Google Translate, ot translate your stories for you, and Grammarly, to refine your English. Google Translate will do 5,000 words at a time.
I believe I have answered your need.
If I have not addressed your question, please tell us here, and explain what I have missed.
Active Ink Slinger
Quote by AnnaMayZing
I had no idea what to expect Anna, and this really impressed me. Thank you once again.


You are welcome, Tiger. There are some amazing singers in the symphonic metal world and some incredibly beautiful music of which some could be considered the classical music of our age. Many of the women are classically trained. Sharon den Adel (above), Floor Jansen (Nightwish), Tarja Tarunen (Ex Nightwish) and Dianne van Giersbergen (Ex Xandria) to name but a few.



Of all the popular musical forms, metal music is the closest to classical
Active Ink Slinger
Quote by AnnaMayZing


Oh yeah!! That song rocked the house!!
Active Ink Slinger
The Lyrics in French thne in English:
Que reste-t-il de nos amours ?
Ce soir, le vent qui frappe à ma porte
me parle des amours mortes
devant le feu qui s'éteint.
Ce soir, c'est une chanson d'automne
dans la maison qui frissonne
et je pense aux jours lointains.

Que reste-t-il de nos amours ?
Que reste-t-il de ces beaux jours ?
Une photo, vieille photo
de ma jeunesse.
Que reste-t-il des billets doux ?
Des mois d'avril, des rendez-vous ?
Un souvenir qui me poursuit,
sans cesse.

Bonheur fané, cheveux au vent,
baisers volés, rêves mouvants.
Que reste-t-il de tout cela ?
Dites-le-moi.

Un petit village, un vieux clocher,
un paysage si bien caché,
et dans un nuage le cher visage
de mon passé.

Les mots, les mots tendres qu'on murmure,
les caresses les plus pures,
les serments au fond des bois,
les fleurs qu'on retrouve dans un livre,
dont le parfum vous enivre,
se sont envolés. Pourquoi ?

English:
What remains of our loves?
Versions: #1#2
Tonight, the wind knocking at my door
speaks to me of past loves
before the dying fire
tonight, an autumn song
quavers through the house
and I think of those bygone days

refrain:
What remains of our loves?
What of those fine days of yore?
A photo, an old photo, of my youth.
What remains of the love letters
the months of April, the rendez-vous?
A memory that pursues me without fail
a shadow of happiness, windblown hair
stolen kisses, moving dreams
what remains of all these things
do tell me?
a little village, an old bell tower
fields and meadows, well tucked away
and in a cloud, the cherished face
of my past days.

The words, the tender words that are murmured
the caresses purest of the pure
the vows exchanged deep in the woods
the flowers one finds among the pages of a book
whose perfume quakes and stirs
have all blown away, oh why?

Only an elderly French male could write such a song in their old age. It contrasts so well with Maurice Chevaliers, "Thank Heaven for Little Girls"
Active Ink Slinger
Quote by AnnaMayZing
I actually like this tune.



That is a beautiful piece of torch singing Anna! Birken is hot stuff to my ears (and eyes).

The next post will have another beautiful French piece I love by Charles Trenet.
Active Ink Slinger
I've got me here a full mug of fresh hot coffee, no sugar, so I deeply appreciate all those great cookies! What better treat can a man have than to be given a jar of cookies by a sweet southern belle?

Andy Nonymous, "They're not all for you cowboy!"
My Response: "Well I'll be gawl derned!"

Enjoy your day at the library Angel! Thank for the cookies!
Active Ink Slinger
Sleepless in Seattle-- Carly Simon doing "In the We Small Hours of the Morning"
Louis Armstrong doing "A Kiss to Build A Dream On."
Jimmy Durante doing "As Time Goes By"
Nat King Cole doing "Stardust"
Dr John with Rickie Lee Jones doing "Making Woopie!"
Gene Autry doing "Back in the Saddle Again"
Joe Cocker doing "Bye Bye Blackbird"
Harry Connick, Jr. doing a"A Wink and A Smile"
Tammy Wynette doing "Stand by Your Man"
Jimmy Durante doing "Make Someone Happy"
Celine Dion doing "When I Fall In Love"
Active Ink Slinger
Because he put the devil's image in our Forum!!