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The FCC can now force any program off the air that disagrees with the administration. I expected this from Trump. I didn’t expect 270 Republican Congressmen to stand by and do nothing as our democracy is dismantled. Sorry for being political but I am angry and scared. These are inarguably unconstitutional actions.

Anyway. I wrote a thing about Moby Dick, which I read this summer. It’s on the front page is anyone is interested. Don’t worry, it’s hardly literary criticism. Just my two cents. https://www.storiesspace.com/stories/memoirs/riding-with-ishmael

I hope everyone is well.

Coffee!

Oof. A second comedian is silenced (along with ABC and CBS and colleges across the nation). Things are getting scary. Jon Stewart is next.

I can't even. Coffee please.

Brownies! Yum! I'll take two!

Critique group went well last night. I didn't get savaged. Maybe I'm getting better. Or at least more tenacious.

Warm and sunny. I love this time of year. The Mets are clinging to the last playoff spot like a cat on a drape. Bear's BJay's are going strong at least.

Seize the brownie!

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Good news is always welcome. These days, there is not enough good news. It's so demoralizing to follow the news day after day. I try to take a break whenever I can.

Scary, scary times. I can't watch the news anymore. I'm listening to Science Friday on (the recently defunded) NPR to escape. I'm glad the jellyfish chilled out at least, Gillian.

Trying to insert a new scene into the novel today, and not having an easy time of it. Frustrating day. At least the weekend approaches. We may go see The Conjuring. I don't like many sequels, but The Conjuring is a pretty reliable franchise. The Long Walk is out too. And Spinal Tap 2!

Anyway. Stay safe out there friends. The things we have in common far outweigh the things that divide us.

Peace.

Up with the sun these days. Well, okay, 7:30 isn't waking up with the sun, but it is to me. It's my new sleep schedule these days.

Sorry about your tooth, Mr. Ape. Few things are worse than a toothache.

Same old thang today. Rewrites, v4. Though Talia and I will have some exciting news for everyone come mid-October. Save the date!

As for today, coffee and a caramel cookie please.

We are both sick as dogs. Talia got it yesterday, I got it from her. snorts and coughs At least I finished the 3rd draft of the book before this cold showed up. So I can chill today. Start draft four on Monday.

Gill, my memory is awful as well, and it worries me from time to time. Thus the Benedryl news. I suspect at least some of my short-term memory loss has to do with my use of herby combustibles. But still. I hope the jellyfish stay at bay.

Mets cookies! Mets cookies! I'll eat ALL OF THEM! Thank you, Cora.

Enjoy the weekend Ape. And look forward to your upcoming trip!

Hot tea please.

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I woke up early again. It's strange and interesting how the body works and changes over time. I used to be a night owl and liked sleeping in. Now I like waking up early and usually going to bed early, at least earlier then when I used to go to bed.

Me too, Cora. Until fairly recently I was a night owl. Lately I've been learning how to make the early morning my friend. Up early again today! I may try another sleep aid, but most likely I'll just learn my new bodily rhythm and lean into it.

Write/edit and pick up the grandkid from school is the extent of my day. Mets lost. sad

Coffee please! And an apple pie donut!

Cora, you sure are bringing the treats these days! I applaud your impulse to come here to ease your mind about your Rose. I've had difficult times where coming here (or a similar spot) first thing in the morning gave me some peace. I hope it brings you peace as well.

Gillian, that drive must be a bear, for you to decide it's your last one. Traffic and wildfires: sounds like a typical Colorado summer. I'm glad the visit went well.

About to finish the 3rd draft of the novel. It's the first good, readable draft, though it still needs a ton of work. Why do novels have to be so much work?

In other news, I was taking Benedryl for sleep for a few months. I just read about a link between Benedryl and dementia, though, and so stopped immediately. Yikes!

Coffee please!

My ironic tribute to Labor Day is to NOT labor and instead play video games all day.

I may be called upon to grill later, but that will be it. It's been a long summer and I am gonna relax.

Happy Labo(u)r Day everyone!

Sending giant hugs to you and your dog, Cora. Godspeed to him and to you.

Nothing new here. I'm still editing the thing. We are preparing for a second operation for my daughter - not unexpected, and this time we know was to expect, so it's not nearly as scary.

In other, scarier, news: the entire frikkin CDC appears to have walked out of the building, in protest over recent firings. If there's a heath emergency the US will be driving without headlights. Or leaders who believe in science.

Coffee.

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Her name is Kelly. We’re rare identical mirror twins. We do everything with opposite hands. She’s mostly left where I’m right-handed, but a few things we do the other way around. And I call her Dom Twin. She’s always been the dominant personality in our relationship.

That's too cool! If she lived in Australia she could be your mirror and upside down twin! Tell her hi from your writing buddies.

Depression is indeed a hard road, Ape (back pain too). Hope you feel better. I have had a couple sleepless nights over the weekend, but am doing better today. Starting the third draft of the novel. I'm not sick of it yet, which is a good sign.

Any caramel and ice cream goodies left?

My tummy is fine, but thanks for all the digestive well wishes.

Cora, critiques are once a month. It'll take the rest of the year to get through the whole thing.

A twin of WG! Too (two!) cool!

I'd love to see a fjord, Ape. I didn't realize Canada had them. We in serious discussion to take a train up the West Coast early next year, perhaps as far as Vancouver.

Seize the fjord!

Hot and sunny here - I'll take one of those ice cream sandwiches.

Nothing new here. Still writing, still watching the Mets lose. Went to a stomach doc yesterday, they put me on Prilosec (which is over the counter).

Coffee!!! Lots!!! Now!!!

Oh, a picture book sounds hard, WG! Good luck with it. I'd be so intimidated by a project like that.

Go for the novella Ape! It'll give you a chance fully flesh out the world you are building.

Hey, I don't have jury duty! AND the critique group liked my chunk of novel so that felt good. Plus, we had a good turn-out. So yay! I just finished a second draft of the novel but it is by no means done - I just have to go start another draft.

Mets are winning again!

One of those ice cream and caramel and churros things please! They look delish.

I find out at 5:30 if I have jury duty on Tuesday. Wish me luck.

Also needing luck: my critique group meets tonight at 6:30, discussing the second chunk of my my novel. I'll be sure and wear padding - things might get rough!

I'll take a donut Cora. And a coffee!

That ice cream looks DELISH, Cora.

Enjoy playing hooky, Ape.

Me? Therapy at noon, school pickup for grandson at 3, and work on the last 4 chapters of this second draft in the off hours.

I have a jury duty call next week. Sigh. I kinda enjoyed my last jury summons, but I'm in the middle of a bunch of things now. I may have to act crazy (MORE crazy) so they won't pick me.

Coffee and ice cream please.

Those bee cookies look pretty tasty Cora.

I have a cold, though it isn’t too bad. I was in bed most of yesterday, and while I will get up and around today, I’m still feeling a bit punk, as my Dad used to say.

Roland, I am so psyched about a female umpire! A female pitcher is next! In other baseball news, the Mets appear to suck yet again, and with the highest payroll in baseball. Heavy sigh.

Coffee please!

Thanks for the treats Cora! I’ll have a watermelon cookie.

James, I didn’t realize it until after you posted, but the Jays have the best record in baseball! The Mets, sadly, appear to be beginning their late summer swoon.

I am knee deep in a second draft of the novel - currently heavily reworking the last five chapters. Then, well, I guess a third draft begins. This is hard work.

Hoping we would see comp results today!

Coffee!

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I had the hots for Gillian Anderson when the X-Files came out. (Along with 50% of the viewers)

I watched 'Major League' (1989) last night. It was not as good as I remembered it, but Bob Uecker was still great.

If you have the hots for Gillian you will LOVE The Fall.

About to start The Institute (Stephen King). It's a good book. The Following, with Kevin Bacon, looks interesting too. I think it's old, but we just discovered it.

I am craving the one last slice of ice-cream birthday cake.

Heya everyone.

The game was Big Fun. Not exactly a crisp, well-played game, but the Rockies won, with a 17-16 final score. It was fun to watch. 40 hits, 3.5 hours (and that doesn’t include the concert). The Dead cover band was reasonably good, good enough to get us dancing. Anyway, fun night.

Hot and sunny here. Coffee please!

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Read it… and… although I liked your comp piece a lot, I LOVED this one, but happy you didn’t cut it down to size. You love metal so much, you should write more stories around it.

I haven't read the story yet, but HEAVILY agree about writing about what you love (he said, having never written about baseball) (I do have a small but about my love of playing catch in the novel).

Good morning all. Denver here we come!

Happy birthday Jerry!

"We didn't invent the Grateful Dead, the crowd invented the Grateful Dead. We were just in line to see what was going to happen."
- Jerry Garcia

Watching The Fall, and on our next to last episode. Gillian Anderson vs. a serial killer. She's perfect in this.

Also watching Smoke. And for comfort watch in these fraught times: The West Wing. Ear candy for liberals, my first wife always called it.

Read em all! I too am glad I'm not judging this! Great field.

Slowly getting caught up on comp entries. Strong field, but that's often true lately.

We're packing for Denver and Coor's Field and Grateful Dead night. I've never been a Deadhead, but have had many Deadhead friends, and as I result I've seen the original Dead (with Jerry) in concert five times: Iowa City, Minneapolis, and three times at Madison Square Garden (I had a friend who always bought out the full week, every year they came).

Of course, tomorrow is just a baseball game and a cover band. Still, should be fun - it's kind of a birthday celebrstion as well.

Seize the coffee cup!

I am going to Grateful Dead night at Coors Field this weekend!

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Happy Birthday!!!!

Sounds like you had a fantastic trip and a great time!

The Mets are playing well and had a great chance to make the playoffs. With Judge out, the Mets are the best team in NYC.

Darn straight the best team in NYC is the Mets! Thanks for the props Roland!

Had a great birthday, though it says something that among my greatest gifts is getting a good night's sleep.

Not up to much today. I will try to write that cat scene though!

Coffee please.