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Lights off? No one at the counter? No coffee? I'm on it. does absolutely nothing for 10 minutes

Okay! Water is hot, not boiling, and the tea bags are nicely laid out. The percolator is percolating! Sara's cookies are all freshly baked.

Time to jump back into the novel for the second draft. It sure feels like a lot of work this morning. One page at a time.

I hope everyone is well. The place feels sort of empty. tumbleweed blow by

A coffee and a cookie for me.

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Sadly, I have no way of watching this. And two of my very favorite actors. And great reviews. Enjoy.

Get Hulu! Then you can watch old Mary Tyler Moore shows like we do!

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Is married. Happily. Very happily.

As am I. She concurs with Ms. Daddario's celebrity crush-worthiness. smile

We just started The Old Man. Terrific acting by Bridges and Lithgow.

What? Huh? The lights are off, and I don't smell any coffee brewing.

Okay, here are some of Sara's cookies, I'll munch on them as I sort everything out. Here's some hot water for tea, and the percolator is perking. Disco!

I am so sorry to hear about your cat Gill, and my apologies for this late condolence. Such a sadness to see them go, a pet's love is so pure and unconditional and constant. My heart goes out to you, as does Talia's.

Chicago was really fun. Danced a TON at the wedding, and I will confess I looked reasonably good in a suit (thanks mostly to Talia's help) (who looked much better than I). Saw the Art Institute, never made it to the Science and Industry museum. Next time. Saw a GREAT game at Wrigley Field (Mets won 8-0) and an old college friend. Good trip.

I got a really bloody, angry horror story accepted by Crone Girls Press yesterday. Proceeds go to help health care rights for women, which should give you an idea of the content. Feels good to help in a tiny way.

A coffee and a home-shaped cookie please.

Good morning all!

Off to Chicago early tomorrow morning for a week! A party, followed by a wedding, followed by museums and restaurants and bars, followed by a Mets-Cubs game on Thursday night. Look for me and Talia 9 rows behind the Mets dugout!

Coffee and cookie please!

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Good morning. I'll have one of the Padre's cookies. They are in second place now in the NL West.

I've been pretty well locked into Toyota's for two decades now. Presently I have two Priuses. One is a 2008 and the other is 2012. They give me gas mileage in the 40s in town, but if I "get out on the highway" the mileage gets up into the 50s. They love driving long distances.

Good to see you again, Larry. Your Padres really are coming on, in what was supposed to be an unwinnable division.

Ape, I'll eat some leftover cake. The 4th celebration is a bit muted in the states here, with the shootings and the All The Crazy, All The Time circus that is currently American politics.

But. Things to write, a wedding to pack for, walks to take, baseball to watch. It's sunny and hot and I am grateful to be alive.

A coffee and a Mets cookie please!

I will, to no one's surprise, take a Mets cookie.

Lazy day. No writing, just doing stuff I'd blown off while I was hellbent on finishing the novel. Sent payment proof off to the IRS yesterday. Got a haircut today for the big wedding (again: not ours) next weekend. I'll probably get all dressed up like a Ken doll this weekend to make sure the new suit looks nice.

Stranger things is back!!! That alone will compose a good deal of the weekend.

Enjoy the 4th, all you Americans, and enjoy the weekend, the rest of you. A coffee to go with that Met cookie would be swell.

Congrats on the new car. My old gas guzzling soccer-Mom mini-van has a few more miles in her sadly. When I get a new (used) car, it’ll be like Elizabeth’s, a Subaru. I loved my Outback.

I’m going to a bar this afternoon to see if they’d be interested in hosting a poetry/prose reading once a month. Hope they say yes. It’d be nice to get back into the game.

Braves are now THREE games back. Yikes!

A coffee and a cookie please!

Good morning all. Thanks for the setup and the treats.

I actually have to drive across town to deliver proof to the IRS that I paid them. You'd think they'd just be able to look in their coffers, because they cashed my check, but no. So an hour and a half out of my day.

Other than that nothing to complain about. I'm submitting stories today. I hate submitting stories, and I am not very good at it. I'm not very detailed oriented and everyone has their own set of manuscript rules.

Mets got spanked last night. Sara's Braves are only 4 games back.

Coffee and Mets-shaped cookies please!

Good morning all. Thanks for the setup.

Weird waking up without immediately jumping onto working on the novel. I feel lazy! Today is the 1/6 hearings as I battle the IRS on whether I owe them money or not (I already paid you!). Other than that, not much else.

I hope everyone is well. Publish that story,

Scott, you know my answer to that will always be PUBLISH it! Especially since you already have the formatting part down. You can always pull it back down.

So, I have my angry flash, and two different edits of it from two folks I trust (this theme is out of my wheelhouse, I need some help). So today's chore is combining those three docs into one final version and sending it off.

Other than that, it's sunny and warm here, and I have no obligations except those I have chosen.

A coffee and a watermelon cookie please.

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Well done, Verbs, a great achievement indeed. Are you going to you self-publish, or go the whole hog and find a publisher? I wish I could. Either way, good luck with it. 👌😊

Thanks for the kind thoughts. I won't really know if it's any good for another draft. I'll try to get a trad publisher if I like it in six months. Otherwise, I will self-pub or just put it in a drawer.

I got invited to an anthology with a very specific topic--I won't mention what it is, but it's very angry, which should give you a clue. Dashed off 1200 words yesterday, honing them now, they'll go out tomorrow. I have no idea if it's any good or not. I'm really new to pushing out a story this fast, but they want a quick turnaround.

A decaf and a cookie please!

Blinking Hello everyone. Didn't sleep well, but f it, I don't have anything to do today anyway. Take a walk. Listen to the news. Sigh.

I thought there was a Writers Group thread, which is where I was gonna post this. It's the weekly word count doc I used to track the novel (Chew). I hope it's presumptuous of me to post here, but I thought it might be interesting to a group of writers such as yourselves. You can clearly see the horse latitudes when I was selling the house, and the big push I made after that. You can pick out a Thanksgiving/Christmas break too.

Anyway. Extremely lazy day today, for a change. A coffee and a constitution-shaped cookie please.

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Cool. Good luck on the next pass. Hope it is not one of the ones where you go back and realize chapters 4-8 need a total rewrite or something.

Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood Morning!

Coffee is black and strong. Tea is tastier but still packing some punch. Iced tea is fresh and ready. It has cooled off here but only for today, supposed to be hot and muggy this weekend.

The whole damn thing needs a total rewrite. But I'm up to it. Not today, or tomorrow. But within a couple weeks. I hope to lose 30,000 words this time around. There's a nice taut story somewhere in all that mess.

Red, you are right, it does feel like a load off my shoulders, though I'll be picking it right back up. It's called Chew, and I wouldn't look for it anywhere soon - lotsa work ahead of me first.

At any rate, thanks for the congrats, it's nice to part of a supportive writing community.

I'd love a coffee and a novel-shaped cookie.

I'm gonna get to the end of this Damned Thing today. Nothing in the way, I know what to write, and I'm pointed toward toward it like an arrow toward the target.

Let's do this. Coffee please. A cookie when I finish.

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Thanks for the kind words, red. I know it is a bit long for the current climate of this place but I just could not find a good breakpoint to split it and rewriting it into two shorter stories did not appeal. Glad you enjoyed it, hope others do as well.

Coffee is on, teapots are full to the tippy-top with Earl Grey and Red Rose. Iced tea and lemonade and made and in the fridge. Gonna be a hot one in my neck of the woods so might need cold bevvies later.

Later, alligators.

I look forward to reading it.

Writing and 1/6 hearings and lunch with daughter and Mets-Astros tonight! Busy fun day! I think I consolidated events during my walk and have a chapter and a half left to write.

Happy Solstice all! I'd love a coffee and a cookie.

Where is everybody? There's no coffee in here!?!?!?

Okay, that looks like coffee beans. Grind em, slap em in the Mr. Coffee, right? Piece of cake!

Saw a great play this weekend - The Wolves - about a girls soccer team. The play was performed outside, on a facsimile of a soccer field. Very creative cool presentation.

Bought a suit too! Talia had so much fun. I'll grudgingly admit I did to. It's for a wedding in July.

Time to write. 113,855 at the beginning of this morning. I'm thinking maybe 6000 more words to finish.

Coffee and a cookie please.

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Today is the day for me to remove the dressing over a small lesion I had cut away last week. (Results of survey early July.) But I think I'll leave the removal until tomorrow simply because I'm a coward, and I'm expecting to see the equivalent of a bullet-hole in the centre of my chest,

For a change I'll try the Earl Grey tea and look forward to a munch on one of Susan's delicious cookies.

That sounds a little scary, though I'm sure it won't be. Were it me, the results of my imagination would be way worse than the reality, so taking off the bandage would be a relief.

Busy day yesterday, including a family medical scare, but things seem to be okay today. So while I fell short yesterday, I'll once again reach toward my thousand words today.

Hot and sunny out. Stock market is holding steady. Time to make the coffee and munch on cookies and get to work.

Hey, your coffee is better than the swill I made yesterday.

Dealing a lot of chores today - physical therapy, actual therapy, a tree guy coming to take down broken limbs, and the 1/6 hearings. Plus I gotta get a newsletter out soon. Still, hope to get my thousand.

The stock market is falling like a rock. Yikes. I'm gonna have to go back to work if this keeps up.

14 in a row for the Braves. Double yikes. The Mets got pummeled.

A cup and a cookie please.

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Anyone remember The Partridge Family? They sang some great tunes that went on to become huge hits.

I had a big crush on Laurie Partridge.

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The Usual Suspects.

Absolutely. (It's where my name came from.)

Also, Cabin in the Woods

I'm the first one in? It's like 10:30!

I can do this. Brew one cup of Keurig to get caffeine levels high enough to brew a full pot. Got it. Fling some of Sara's delish cookies about on doilies. Put out a dish of Necco wafers. We're good.

Braves have 13 wins in a row!!! Congrats, Sara. The NLE is a race again.

At one point I hit 111,111 words yesterday. Right now I'm thinking 4 more chapters which puts me AT LEAST a week out from finishing.

I'll pour myself a cup and munch on a cookie. Enjoy the day folks.

Thanks for the coffee Ape.

Congrats on those 12 wins in a row Sara! The NLE race is heating up (Phillies are rocking now too).

Broke 110k yesterday. Still not done. I may try to figure out EXACTLY how many chapters it'll take to finish before I start today. I may be rushing things, and I want to get it right. Put all the ducks in a row before I pull out the shotgun.

Ugly metaphor. Sorry. I love ducks.

Coffee and cookie please!

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Now that my story is done, a few facts and figures.

3 Books:

The Nurses:

140,543 words

426 pages

42 Chapters.

Kindred Spirits, Distant Hearts:

115,792 words

351 pages

33 Chapters.

The Long Road Home:

132,442 words

401 pages

39 Chapters

Total:

388,777 words

1178 pages

114 Chapters

For a tale that began as a short story of around 5000 words, these figures come as somewhat of a shock. However, I have loved every minute of writing it and would like to thank the many thousands of people who read and enjoyed it. Especially those who left such wonderful comments.

Now it is done, I shall have to get it published. Who knows, that might take another six years! 😳

Dang! I'm not worthy! Congrats on nearly half a million words!

I'm pulling out what little hair I have left trying to get to 110k!

As my daughter would say, I'm "jelly" of your accomplishments!

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Nats took the whole enchilada in 2019, in my timeline, though perhaps our timelines have diverged in this marvelous, mystical multiverse. What's my name? Am I still in Colorado?

The novel got pretty well savaged, but in a constructive way. It's a first draft, there's a lot wrong with it. I hope to finish this week, though I'm not sure that's gonna happen.

Up early to help Talia take her car to the dealer to fix it. Write and watch the 1/6 hearings, all day long.

A coffee and three sheep cookies please. baa!

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Hope our great ape can get the title he is searching for. I know he will. Great job moving stove and leaning out window to trim the tree; made me laugh.

And Verbal, I am so sorry you have had two whole losses with the Mets. Breaks my heart. Not.

Didn't the Nationals win the World Series in 2019. The last time the Mets won it all was... checks watch ...the Reagan Administration!!! We deserve a little good luck. It's HARD being a Mets fan.

Same old thing today. I'll break 109k words, and still not be done. Critique group reads the next big chunk this Saturday.

Riveting hearings last night. Not sure they will change anything. But spell-binding stuff.

Coffee and cookies please!

I am tired and irritable, but I will attempt to improve my mood before I begin my day.

Warm and muggy now, and I think that translates to hot and sunny later when the clouds burn off. I've got nothing to do today but write, and with a little luck I can finish the book tomorrow. Monday is more likely, but a man can dream.

Mets have been pummeled two consecutive nights now. Good thing tonight is a night off. Watching the hearings on the Jan 6 insurrection will be a welcome change (that was irony).

Time to write. Thanks for the coffee and cookies!

Sunny and hot. Hopefully thunderstorms in the afternoon. CRAZY storms out on the Eastern plains yesterday, lotsa hail and a couple twisters.

I'm at 106k plus, but am going to rejigger some of yesterday's writing, rather than push out new words. This close to the end, I don't want to overly rush it.

Mets got pummeled last night. Sigh.

Thanks for the coffee, Scott, and the cookies, Sara. Time to get to it.

Thanks for the coffee Scott.

Greetings Myrtle! On other sites I'm known as Ensorceled, so we've met in passing. smile Nice to see you here.

Broke 105k words yesterday, pushing to get another 1500 in the bank today. I'd love to finish this Damned Thing by Friday. Let's see if the characters cooperate.

Sunny and warm here, with thundershowers later. My favorite kind of day!

Time to get to work. A coffee and a sugar cookie would rock!