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Quote by paulusQuote by GIGGLES
I will listen and try
Maybe it'll even rhyme
But who knows
My rhyming blows
So I sit here and sigh ....haha
I have been on here quite a while
and have seen almost every style
and I have to say
that yours is okay
it never fails to make me smile
There are other people posting on this thread...
I was wondering if you'd noticed...
You fluttered like a bird
Perched up high
Scared to soar
Terrified to die
Shaking in fear
You're mind made up
You will go elsewhere
Tired of this dump
With great courage now
You took your leap
Not sure how
You sounded your victory tweet
Higher and higher you fly
Embracing your life
No more fear of dying
No more useless strife
Perched up high
Scared to soar
Terrified to die
Shaking in fear
You're mind made up
You will go elsewhere
Tired of this dump
With great courage now
You took your leap
Not sure how
You sounded your victory tweet
Higher and higher you fly
Embracing your life
No more fear of dying
No more useless strife
Quote by paulusQuote by GIGGLESIf you don't mind some spicy language, there's a song on youtube that might help find the right meter. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ei68YJe-nA0&feature=youtube_gdata_player[/quote]Quote by paulusQuote by GIGGLES
~*~ did I do it right??
Yes and no, AABBA is correct, the meter isn't spot on. If you go back a but in this thread, You'll find somethin I wrote about the rules for limericks.
But with a little effort, and forgive me for stealing your words:
When you finally do find your place
Show some real class and also some grace
Never tell any lies
And don't overly sigh
And remember to wash your sweet face
Thank you! I kinda see haha I will practice more but I am finding doing limericks fun(:
Ok thanks
Quote by paulusQuote by GIGGLES
~*~ did I do it right??
Yes and no, AABBA is correct, the meter isn't spot on. If you go back a but in this thread, You'll find somethin I wrote about the rules for limericks.
But with a little effort, and forgive me for stealing your words:
When you finally do find your place
Show some real class and also some grace
Never tell any lies
And don't overly sigh
And remember to wash your sweet face
Thank you! I kinda see haha I will practice more but I am finding doing limericks fun(:
first time tryingThis doesn't quite follow the AABBA rule, and some of the words are in Swahili, but it's still fun...
There was a young lady from Kikuyu
Whose stomach looked like a kibuyu
when asked
who did this to you
she said
huyo ama huyo ama huyo.
Translated, that means...
There was a young lady from Kikuyu (Kikuyu is a place and is also a tribe... pronounced Kic- kooo- you)
Whose stomach looked like a Kibuyu (Kibuyu means calabash... pronounced Ki- booo-you)
when asked
who did this to you
she said
huyo ama huyo ama huyo (huyo means he/him ... pronounced who-you, ama means either/or... so... him or him or him)
There was a young lady from Kikuyu
Whose stomach looked like a kibuyu
when asked
who did this to you
she said
huyo ama huyo ama huyo.
Translated, that means...
There was a young lady from Kikuyu (Kikuyu is a place and is also a tribe... pronounced Kic- kooo- you)
Whose stomach looked like a Kibuyu (Kibuyu means calabash... pronounced Ki- booo-you)
when asked
who did this to you
she said
huyo ama huyo ama huyo (huyo means he/him ... pronounced who-you, ama means either/or... so... him or him or him)