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Quote by GIGGLES
~*~ did I do it right??

Yes and no, AABBA is correct, the meter isn't spot on. If you go back a but in this thread, You'll find somethin I wrote about the rules for limericks.
But with a little effort, and forgive me for stealing your words:

When you finally do find your place
Show some real class and also some grace
Never tell any lies
And don't overly sigh
And remember to wash your sweet face
Quote by Dreamcatcher
If I read it.. I score it.. I comment..
And your question?
Quote by Entangled_Fate
I would say the person who has been here the longest

Who do you think would win the competition?

I have no clue, there are several I think are very good.

If you score lower than 4, do you leave a comment to tell why?
Quote by the_enchantress
Paulus


And Paul, why did you give me a score of 1?

I have anemia. That's what Killer is about.



I didn't. Not on purpose anyway. I removed it.
You're just full of ignorance
his buddy said
Why can't you see
what goes on in her head
You are in love with her
that clearly shows
Why don't you do something
so that she knows
The whole world can see
how she feels about you
That she desp'rately loves you
why don't you see too
So open your eyes
and just give her that kiss
Open up and enjoy
the best feeling there is
Paper money, I love stacking them and counting them. All that plastic may be easy, but doesn't make me feel as rich, as those little stacks do.

sunset or dawn?
A tiny ant bit in my arse as I sat on the ground
And asked me: "Will you lift that thing, for if I must go 'round"
"I'll need a lunchbox, big enough, to last a day, or two"
"And I just want to be home soon, so move, and let me through"
Quote by GIGGLES
Buzz Buzzz Buzzz
Goes that silly bumblebee
Buzz Buzz Buzzz
Chasing Chasing after me!

Run Run Run
Back into my cozy house
Run Run Run
Ouch! That bee hid in my blouse

Scream Scream Scream
I need my booboo cream
Scream Scream Scream
I am a little drama queen ...lol

Buzz Buzz Buzz
Flew away that bumblebee
Buzz buzz buzz
He doesn't play with crybabies

I might be to old to giggle, but you sure made me laugh, what a wonderfully silly poem.
And I'm giving the same answer, Dictionary, and for almost the same reason too. I never had that as an excercise for English, but the origin of words has always interested me.

Tolkien or Shakespeare?
I like all of them equally. I hope you'll finish the long ones one day though, but I'll be patient.

Did ypu read any of mt stuff and what did you think of it?
Sunny and way too mild for the time of year

how did you sleep, if at all?
Are you sure?

This is my spot
I think it is hot
and wanting to leave it
I surely am not
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Quote by Rebellious_Soul
Yes, however i believe it happens in a form of a wornhole and travels in another plane of existence. Because it would kind of suck if you travel and you run into a star or planet or something.

Do you honestly think when the aliens come it would be a good thing?


sheesh.. you snuck in ahead of me..

Yes and no.. aliens may be good.. it is us who corrupts events..

same question from me... Is there a bigger mystery than the formation of a carbon based lifeform inside another carbon based lifeform?

Yes, I think there is. The reproductive power of life is, as far as I'm concerned, something close to a miracle. Yet, somewhere, somehow, a carbon lifeform must have formed out of dead matter. To me, that is the greatest mystery of all, how did life come into existance. I don't believe in a creator, not in an omnipotent and omniscient being anyway. I think it happened by coincidence, but how, and was our tiny planet the only place where it happened? Somehow I doubt that.


Why would intelligent aliens be any better than we are?
If you mean other planes of existance, parrallel universes, yes I do, though I don't believe they are all in sync with ours. But according to the knowledge of the scientific world our universe will somewhere in a distant future return to its state before the big bang. All mass will become so compacted, that all movement will stop, even on a subatomic level. That means, all that matter will loose it's energy, thermal, kinetic and any other form I can think of. But energy never ceases to exist, it merely changes form, or, maybe place, and what other place could that be, than another dimension.

If there is an afterlife, would that survive the collapse of our universe?