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Quote by nekala20
I have asked her if she liked what I had done or if it seemed right because I haven't written anything like this before and I wanted her opinion on what she thought of it. Yes I did tell her it is "Read Only" and she still changed things and I have told her before that she can't make changes to my story as it puts me off. No the changes weren't beneficial and I prefer to keep all my copies in electronic form because then I can control a lot easier who sees it and it wasn't that I didn't appreciate her opinion but I would have preferred her to tell me what she thought was wrong instead of just changing things in my manuscript without telling me. She changed the length of a couple of my sentences and added things where they shouldn't be. It would have been different if she had told me what was wrong so that I could do it instead of just changing things I wouldn't of minded it so much.


Did you want the person to just say yes I liked it or no I did not like it; or did you want them to make constructive criticisms?
If you want more than just a yes or no, then making changes is the most practical means of doing it.
It seems that you want them to recommend changes that you might make, but you do not want them to make them. It would be easy for you to go back and fix any changes they made back to the original form.
I understand that feeling. My writing is like my baby, I do not want anyone touching it, but I realized a long time ago that if I wanted the help, I had to let them play with my baby.
ABG made some great points too. A second pair of eyes is always a good idea. If you want advise from an outstanding writer, she is the one to listen to. She is one of the best.
I think the way I deal with characters is crazy, but it is the only way I have ever been able to create believable and unique characters. It also makes the writing process slow for me.
I think of my characters as real people. I will figure out a complete personality profile for any character. The more important the character is the more extensive the profile.
I work up their history, family, childhood, their physical characteristics and abilities, their mental processes including their general ideas of life, and their emotional make-up. I try to make a character that I can give 15-25 labels to.
After I make this character as much of a person as I feel I need, then I write the story. As the story move along, the characters are placed in various situations. How would this person react to this situation? What would they do? That is how the story will progress.
I think my characters are realistic and easy to empathize with is because I make them as real as possible then make the story fit them and not make the characters fit the story.
I know it sounds strange , but I talk with my characters (mentally, not out loud) and let them tell me what they will do. I think it is because I grew up playing role playing games. (Yes D&D was a big part of that. I actually played with the creators of the game. The Gygaxs. Name dropping can be fun.)
Does anyone else do characters this way?
I have to say, this is an interesting thread. I enjoyed reading everyone's answers.
I have not posted a story I did not like. I have worked on a couple of dozen things that never panned out, but I would not post them. Maybe someday I might think of a way to make them worthwhile.
I am super critical of my own writing. I keep changing it again and again trying to get it just right, but at some point I have to stop when I'm not making helpful changes. It is common for me to do 5-10 rewrites of a piece before I submit it.
Even then I still notice every single little bit that I feel is not just right. A word grouping, phasing, or word choice that I feel could be better. Organizing the story's flow and pace, especially in my Sci-Fi stories.
I often find it difficult to go back and read some of my work because I see the possible potential I did not quite reach.
I think my stories are good and a few very good, but I have not written the story yet that everything fell into place. A story that people read and go WOW. I may never, but I think I can if I keep getting better.
The people on Stories Space have made me such a much better writer with their advise and examples. I look at my earliest few stories compared to what I do now, and I can only thank all my friends for their help and support.
A great tongue in cheek comedy 'Airplane' (1980)

"Whatever happened to chivalry? Does it only exist in 80's movies? I want John Cusack holding a boombox outside my window. I wanna ride off on a lawnmower with Patrick Dempsey. I want Jake from Sixteen Candles waiting outside the church for me. I want Judd Nelson thrusting his fist into the air because he knows he got me. Just once I want my life to be like an 80's movie, preferably one with a really awesome musical number for no apparent reason. But no, no, John Hughes did not direct my life."
There are a few people in my heart, but lately one has been on my mind all the time.
I would like to do them both at once. I have seen bungee jumping from balloons. If I have to choice balloon.

swimming pool or hot tub?
Quote by Rebellious_Soul
Keeps bringing knives to gun fights.


She has six toes on her left foot. That is why it is easy for her to use base 11 number systems. (Gosh I am a nerd)
Oh, I am lost and found myself here. Think I will stay a while and rest.
There is nothing funny about her, only lovely. Unless of course you count the fact that she actually is a living Barbie doll.
A language with the words capable of properly praising Larry has not been written. All I can do is to make a feeble attempt to write what a steadfast and caring friend he has been.
Quote by paulus
There's a right time for both of them. Ofcourse nobody likes to be the target of critisism, but that doesn't always make it unjust.



Scubadiving or skydiving?



Skydiving. Freefall is as good as good sex.


The future or the past?
My admiration and applause. I just read his latest, 'Life.' It was great!
Underground, so to speak. Deep in the mountains. I can live there awhile and see what happens. So if you want to live come with me, but it will cost you one 'Payday' candy bar. (I love those things)

For one month, would you be more willing to give up your hearing, or your ability to speak?
I do not know if it is really that nice a thing, but she is one of my favorite people. I wish I could see how her life turns out.
Quote by Rebellious_Soul
On both shoulders.

Would you ever get a facial piercing?


I do not like to say never, but right now I can not think of a single reason I would want one. Unless someone would like to pay me $100 to get one. (And you pay for the piercing.) Last thing I need is another hole in my head, the ones I already have get me in enough trouble.


Is there any thing that would make you shave your head bald for 3 months?
Quote by CKAcres
Drive in theaters, none left where I live.


We still have a drive-in in Kenosha, Wisconsin. Of course it is closed in the winter, but when it is open it plays great full-length double features of front-run movies. It is an all-night experience. Wish I could convince my wife to go to one and fool-around like we used to. Just making out; do not be dirty minded now.


I miss the kids being able to go out and play. Going house to house, down the street, to the park, or anywhere more than 10' from their front yard without needing adults to spoil their fun. Now kids have play date. OMG, I would have died inside with so little freedom, but I guess the world is getting used to less and less freedom.
Jiffy Pop Popcorn. You cooked it over the stove and its top portion grew as the popcorn popped. I liked it a lot. With microwave popcorn, Jiffy Pop has disappeared.


I'm glad I don't have to decide this. As usual, the level of writing is phenomenal. On the bright side, there aren't many bad choices. smile
1454

The press of Johannes Gutenberg produces the first printed documents bearing a date in this year.
Yes. I have a few presented to me during my time in the navy. My favorite was the US flag presented to me at my retirement. It came with a personal note from the CNO and President.


Would you like to be famous and why?
Road to Perdition (2002)


LS: So. You got your reward and you're just leaving, then?
HS: That's right, yeah. Got some old debts I gotta pay off with this stuff. Even if I didn't, you don't think I'd be fool enough to stick around here, do you? Why don't you come with us? You're pretty good in a fight. We could use you.
LS: Come on. Why don't you take a look around. You know what's about to happen, what they're up against. They could use a good pilot like you, you're turning your back on them.
HS: What good is a reward if you ain't around to use it?
Megamind (2010)
To Roxanne when she asks if he's going to give up. Then he says, "I'm going home."


D: Find your inner compass. Loyalty is but a flower in the winds of fear and temptation.
H: What the hell are you sayin'?
D: It's a haiku.
H: Cut the crap before I drop a grenade down your throat!