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I once again watched a baseball game til 2 in the morning. A crazy extra-inning Mets/Reds tilt that the Mets had no right to win (4 errors in the first two innings) but won anyway. Anyway, a bit bleary this morning.

Writing critique group went really well. This is the first one I’ve ever really been in, and I really like these guys. Supportive, but interested in the story, and how to improve it. No one gets offended or offensive. I really like it. And they liked my story!

I see more entries! Plus the Sensual Lady and the One True Ping. I look forward to reading and commenting. Really happy to be part of such a strong group of stories.

Okay. Time to put the words on the blank page.

Coffee and a banana cookie would hit the spot.
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I will have an entry.


Yay! That's 10!
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The Nat/Padre game thing was very upsetting. My brother and his family were at the game. They didn't hear much where they were, but it was frightening for them.

It's good to see a few more comp entries on the front page.

I'm tired but can't sleep. Family issues again, sigh, no surprise there, but some things exhaust me more than others.

I'll grab a handful of cookies to go.

I hope Monday is kind to everyone.

Cheers!


Did you see Tatis gathering up fans attending the game and ushering them into the dugout for safety? What a class act!

The comp is shaping up. Some really strong contenders - it's a little intimidating. And Tam entered! Yay! Looking forward to reading that one. And we all nervously await the twisted imaginings inside the brain of the One True Ping.

When do they announce winners?

Writer's critique tonight, and they are doing one of my stories. I'll try to stave off the feeling of Imposter Syndrome one more time.

Talia says hi. So do the cats.

Coffee and a cookie sounds perfect.
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My entry has moved from Google Docs to a saved draft on here. Just want to take another go at it before I pull the trigger. However, have to finish some yard work first.


Drop that rake right now and submit! I finally finished mine! Now I get to enjoy my Sunday.

Fling that bottle over here. I’ll add some to my coffee to celebrate. God that sounds awful. Moscato and coffee. I take it back.

Off to read the Sunday paper, then ShyThespian’s entry.

Where, oh where, is the comp entry of the One True Ping?
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Looks like the coffee is ready. I'll have a cuppa.

It just occurred to me that the folks that we get to judge our contest may not be members and perhaps they will become a few new members after this competition.

It was a shame about the Nationals and the Padres game last night in Washington. Just a sad sign of the times in America.



That Nat/Padres shooting at the game made me sad. Talia actually had a friend at the game - she was uninjured and saw little.

Makes the Mets inability to buy a win seem a little unimportant. smile Ugly game last night.

It was, however, nice to wake up to so many nice comments on the comp entry. I've read all but one, which I'll read today. Gonna be a tough choice. And two big gund will still enter - the Ape and the One True Ping. Good luck all.

Hit with with a big cup of coffee and a cookie - off to read the Sunday paper.
And...I just clicked "Publish Story."

A limoncello would be a perfect way to mark this occasion.
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CuriousAnnie has just added her story to the list.

Verity: We’ll Be Home By Christmas

Survivor: The Little Survivor

AnnaMayZing: Over The Top

KatarinaTechgoddess: I'm Still alive

CuriousAnnie: Broken Banns


I am anxiously waiting for more, but not at 11:59 PM. Yes, Verbal, I'm looking at you.



Hee hee. I’ll be ready Sunday morning. I have to get rid of 10 words after the last rewrite. sad

SO PSYCHED to see Curious Annie entering. She’s a top notch writer. Ping is entering too I think. And Scott. Molly, how about you?

EDIT: I've read the other entries so far. Really strong field. Where are you Scott and Pingly?

I'm ready to enter, but will still hold off until tomorrow so I can give the doc one last swoop.
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Well, only if it comes with a glass of Moscato!


If it gets that bad, the glass is yours. I'll already have drunk the rest of the bottle.


Sounds like I might need to bring my own bottle and share with you! Lol!


4989 words! I'm ready to enter! At 23:59:59 on July 18, of course.

Pour me a glass!
Done. 5300 words. Guess I've got some work to do. smile

We have almost no internet. I was on the phone for an hour and a half with them yesterday, and am trying to avoid another hour and a half of pure frustration today. I'm even willing to FOREGO BASEBALL, since we don't have enough bandwidth to watch. I'm not going to sacrifice a sunny day for their lack of accountability.

I'd love a coffee and a cookie as I set out to find the real story inside this 5300 word mess.
Final push. I finish the story today, come hell or high water.

I'll post on Sunday night or Monday.

Still no baseball. I filled this yawning void in my life by watching Hamilton last night (I'm about to cancel Disney+ because Loki is over, gotta watch Hamilton first). Excellent, exciting piece of theater. I turned it on to give it a chance and listen to a song, and I couldn't turn it off. I don't know American history well enough to speak on the criticisms of the play, but I thought the "race-conscious" casting was a brilliant choice - you end up thinking about the reasons behind it all through the play.

My only issue, mildly PC: how come the women characters never rap? They sing, only men rap. It's oddly gendered.

The guy who played Jefferson ROCKED!

Okay. Time to get to the words THE END.

Coffee and cookies sounds like manna from heaven.
I think a conversation with a box of frogs sounds enlightening!
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My vestigial tail is wagging: there must be coffee close by! A cuppa, please. I have video therapy in 25 minutes.


All vestigial tail pics and gifs were disturbing. This gif probably better represents your mood and expression.



You know, the one with the tongue hanging out is almost exactly what I look like in real life. Uncanny.

8 days, right? Next Thursday is the deadline. I am on this like Godzilla on Tokyo! Finish by Friday, edit during the weekend, submit. Jezz, it's gonna be hard to let go of a story with so little editing. Alsas, my own damn fault.

No Talia in the house today - me and the cats are gonna play MarioKart all day. They suck - no opposable thumbs!

No baseball either, not until Friday. I'm going slowly insane.

Okay. Read the newspaper, drink some coffee, then tilt at the blank page.
Yeah, I'll be there, but it will be last minute, mostly because I want to do a good job, which is in everyone's best interests, right? I'm also happy to learn I don't need 10 votes to qualify. That woulda been tough.

It is what it is. I'd like a ton of entries too, but writing is hard, and writing for a comp puts you under even more scrutiny. I understand if folks are hesitant to enter.

I'm guessing over 10 entries. And one will be mine.
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en re: Larry's CT scan report.

WAHOO!!! (please pardon those last to ungrammatical exclaimation points -- I just couldn't resit, honest.;)

Yesterday was the birthday of Carl/Fuzzy) while Larry/Survivor got that great CT report. To celebrate both events, here's a little sports news from their neck of the woods.

Sports tidbit: Two high school baseball players from the stomping grounds of Larry, and Carl, who had been signed by my LSU Tigers, were drafted by their hometown team, the Kansas City Royals in the early rounds of the MLB draft. And while it is true that the school's cheerleaders are perky and and the Golden Girl dancers are most alluring money is money, especially when there's a gob of it available for going pro. Here's hoping they both make it to the majors and have great careers.

I was gonna brag on the slugger from Verbal's beloved Mets winning his second straight home run derby yesterday, but I forgot his name. (the hitter, not Verbal)

Thanks for the coffee, Larry. and big hugs for Sarah on account of her cookies. Think I'll take some of both and slip over to the corner table. And since I remembered to bring my rain hat, I'll sit under the leaky window A/c and ponder the imponderable, or at least the implausable.

Later, Inspirators.


Pete Alonzo, Mr. Bill, but sadly I missed the home run derby. I actually watch one live, the last time the All Star Game was in Denver, and I had a corporate job that allowed me perks like All Star Game tix.

Still, no baseball for 4 days (I don't count, and rarely watch, the All Star Game). How will I survive!? How will Talia cope with my need to be continually entertained!? I'm like living with a 5 year old child. Or, you know, Ping.

1500 words into the comp entry. Enough so that I'm likely to finish. Let's see, the contest closes in 9 days. Writing 1000 words a day, I should finish in 4 days. Edit for 2 days. 3 days to get 10 votes (no easy feat!). It's gonna be close, but I'm committed.

My vestigial tail is wagging: there must be coffee close by! A cuppa, please. I have video therapy in 25 minutes.
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So today I begin to write a horror fairytale, which I don't think is even a genre.


Some of Tanith Lee's stuff kind of went there. And Gaiman at times. Charles de Lint got pretty dark at times. And a few others. I'm not sure it has ever been named as a genre, but it certainly exists though a lot of it tends to get tagged as "urban fantasy" rather than "horror".


Poppy Z Brite (it's a real name) is excellent at this particular sub-genre. It's giving me fits. sad

More coffee.
Good luck with the test, Larry.

I made a passing mention to the comp as well, though I'm not well known over there. Read the comp entries last night, and they are really good. My idea for the comp is dark and weird, and out of my comfort zone, but there's no time to think up another. So today I begin to write a horror fairytale, which I don't think is even a genre.

Quiet day, lovely outside, all is well with the world. Time to write.

Coffee and hundreds and hundreds of cookies, please.
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Well, got my wish. Awesome drama at Euro. Poor England. I thought they showed magnificent ball control (Verbie The Love Bug is tittering), but alas, they lost 3-2 in penalties. So much pressure. So much history. Love it.

Speaking of history, now there are three active tennis greats with 20 major championship victories. Unbelievable. US Open will possibly break the tie.

Next Up: The Open Championship. The pandemic cancelled last year’s event. This one will be emotional. Great tournament, as always. And then, I think I’m done with sports for a while. The Olympics, unless something absolutely astounding happens, will be a lessor event. The Olympics is about bringing people from around the world together to celebrate athletic achievements. It should have been postponed one more year. But that’s the old sports and recreation administrator in me talking. The other voices in my head have no opinion on the matter. One says get some limoncello. A couple say cold brew coffee. And yet another says get the chainsaw and hockey mask and scare the neighbours later this evening.

All three sound pretty good.

McLarry of the family Green, my daughter starts her acting/dancing/singing camp tomorrow. Ballet is done for the year. Decided none over the summer. So, her musical camp will be her sole focus. I know you appreciate those that participate in the performance arts. She’s also a little sketchy, and by sketchy, I mean artist.

Last night, the neighbours had a party and kept us up to around two. Long story. I’m still pissed. Even after I yelled at them at the top of my lungs to shut the f’n music off. They tried to apologize this morning. I said I can’t hear you.

Anyway, while being kept awake, my daughter drew this amazing scene with multiple winged demons descending upon their home. I wish I could post it to show you, but she reminded me that that would be a copyright infringement.

Sheesh. Who’s raising this kid? 🤣🤣🤣


Verbie the Love Bug. Heavy sigh. I guess it's better than Sprite's Furball (rhymes with Verbal) (and herbal) (and gerbil).

I got a couple paragraphs down, so I think I have an entry. I love the first two sentences. But the first two sentences do not a story make. I'm write it this week, and if it does not suck, I will post it.

I have totally by accident turned grilling fish into something that is easy and foolproof. I've always been scared to grill fish because it's so hard, but we bought a screen mat that you lay over the grill. Get a good piece of salmon, season lightly, oil the fish, oil the mat, oil everything, get the grill HOT and then cook, with cover down, skin side down. 8 minutes, flip, 2 minutes, and eat! Foolproof and really good. Crispy on the outside, flaky on the inside! Just like me.

Last baseball game of the first half. Watching it now on a time delay, and the Mets are winning handily. SO SORRY to hear about Acuna's injury Sara. It's awful to see such a talented star go down for the season.

A non-alcoholic limoncello please. Any cookies left?
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Eleven, count'em, eleven days left to get your story in. Mine is just about there. Just trying to stick the landing. Who else is going to join our wonderful trio of Verity, Survivor, and AnnaMayZing?


QUIT RUSHING ME! smile

I'll be there.

EDIT: AND...we have an opening sentence!!!
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THE COOKIE BANDIT IS RIGHT HERE!!!

Finished writer's critique group today, and for once I did NOT feel like an imposter! So that's an excellent way to start the day.

20 days to get a comp entry in, right? Sigh. I promise to read all of them, but not before I get an idea - I almost slole Larry's by accident!

The rest of today: edit the geese story. Grill. Watch the Mets double header (playing the hapless Pirates). Roland, sorry about your Cubbies. They lost 11 in a row and look to be on the cusp of a fire sale. I'm guessing we'll end up with Bryant. And his contract.

Enjoy your weekend everyone!

Coffee please. And ALL THE COOKIES! HAHAHAHAHHA!!! (That was a maniacal laugh.)


I may be too late to help with the goose story, but found a couple:






Thank you for contributing to my nightmares, Elizabeth! smile

Glorious Sunday here. We'll do a little shopping and grill tonight (chicken, fish, green beans). Last baseball game FOR A WEEK!!! I don't know how I'll survive.

So I guess, as Scott tell me, I only have 2 weeks to write this comp story. I may read some entries and try to get an idea. I find it so hard to write to a specific theme. My mind just goes where it wants to go, and the words follow, as I wander off into my own interior world. In medical circles this is referred to as Pingbrain.

Coffee and many, many cookies please.
THE COOKIE BANDIT IS RIGHT HERE!!!

Finished writer's critique group today, and for once I did NOT feel like an imposter! So that's an excellent way to start the day.

20 days to get a comp entry in, right? Sigh. I promise to read all of them, but not before I get an idea - I almost slole Larry's by accident!

The rest of today: edit the geese story. Grill. Watch the Mets double header (playing the hapless Pirates). Roland, sorry about your Cubbies. They lost 11 in a row and look to be on the cusp of a fire sale. I'm guessing we'll end up with Bryant. And his contract.

Enjoy your weekend everyone!

Coffee please. And ALL THE COOKIES! HAHAHAHAHHA!!! (That was a maniacal laugh.)
Got to the end of the geese story! The thugs end up plucking the protagonist's eyes out! That'll teach him!

Didn't sleep well. Very tired. Editing day today, thank God, so I don't have to bash out 900 words,

Grilling sausage and peppers and corn on the cob tonight. Yum!

No big plans for the weekend. We always say we're going to the movies, but we always end up blowing it off. Quiet Place is still playing, so maybe....

Mets got rained out AGAIN! Double header on Saturday, their 10th of the year. Alas.

Coffee and a handful of cookies please!
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This one has robotic geese. Really.


How much worse than the real thing can they possibly be? (Unpatriotic Canadian aside: Canada Geese are the more horrible nuisance animals alive.)



Pro tip: as horrible as they are, it's nearly impossible to make a flock of robot geese scary.

Lazy day, and I'm slightly irritable. My goal today is to finish this damn story. And to figure out how to make the geese scary.

My youngest is coming over later to give Talia and I FRESH HOMEMADE CANOLLIS!!! That, i suspect, will brighten my mood.

As for voting, I just write the damn things. I care about comments, as does everyone, but I don't care about the view or vote numbers.

It's too late for coffee. I'll leave out a plate of my daughter's canollis though.

ACTUAL CANOLLIS---->

So I started rewatching The Larry Sanders Show.

I missed it on its first run, but I used to watch it on Bravo, back when Bravo was a thing. Actually, I once had a shoulder operation (rotator cuff) and lay in bed for weeks, and the highlight of the day was two Larry Sanders episodes, back to back, at noon. I clung to them like a drowning man clinging to a life preserver. Great show.

It's so weird watching it again - the cultural references are SO old (Dan Quayle jokes!?) and the celebrities are so young, and from another era. It's like stepping into a time machine. And it's so cynical, almost mean-spirited. Also very funny. And the celebrity sightings are so trippy.

I don't know that I'll re-binge the entire thing, but I might.
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Good morning. The place is looking nice and clean. Fresh coffee is here for your pleasure, as is the teakettle.

Nice day outside. It is perfect weather. Not hot at all. I expect it will get much hotter later, however.

You folks all take care, ya hear?



Thanks for the coffee Larry. Have you seen this play? He jumps while already in mid-air! MVP year for him.



Ping, Ping, Ping, you best be careful, gasoline on little Ping (ew - my eyes! MY EYES!) might be a withering experience. I look forward to tales of you Then-Came-Bronson-ing your way about North America. We have a comfy couch. And coyotes.

Talia working at physical work again. And there's a DOUBLE HEADER! Me and the cats are gonna get into double trouble. It's gonna be like Cat in the Hat around here! "Now! Now! Have no fear. Have no fear!” said the cat / My tricks are not bad, said the Cat in the Hat!"

She returning to physical work in late August. Wah.

Finishing off a new story today. More subversive suburban horror. This one has robotic geese. Really.

Coffee and a few cookies would be a thrill!
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Anyone use Audacity for adding audio to a story? I have. Used this stuff. Now look what it does. Bad company. Bad.

https://www.pcmag.com/news/audacity-is-being-called-spyware-after-privacy-policy-update

There is something called, Storiespace - note there is only one ‘s’ in the middle. It is adware.

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Rump, hugs and understanding sent your way. Darkness is dancing demon of deception. Sometimes we need to ignore the sock hop rules and wear steel-toed boots.

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First nipples, now four letter words with self-censoring asterick letter replacements. Oh that verbs. Shame. Shame. Shame.

I mention this, or rather quote that, because my son and I are rewatching GoT. Well, I’m rewatching it. We are nearing the end of season five where Cersei does her nudy walk of shame. Just a few days ago, we were watching The Family Guy and in that episode, Peter did his naked walk of shame. I knew we were close to that scene in GoT, so I didn’t mention the connection. I’m hoping for a lovely déjà vu reaction. He blushes when he sees boobies. I’m loving’ it! Funny thing, watching GoT with him has bridged so many topics of discussion. GoT has been an excellent vehicle to discuss what is appropriate, inappropriate, and absolutely wrong, in addition to all the complicated grey zones of life, relationships, and society. Who freakin’ knew?

Stick ‘em with the pointy end.

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Cold caffeine brew for the road, please.


I've used Audacity a TON, and thought it was a great piece of software. It's open source! Or was. They are grabbing "data necessary for law enforcement, litigation and authorities' requests (if any)." Too bad.

I still have read no comp entries, and still have no idea of my own. Or rather, I've discarded the first two ideas.

Mets are still holding a 4 game lead - the worst first place record in baseball. Boy, the NL West is strong this year. I'm picking the third place Padres over the Dodgers.

Got my contract emailed to me for the short story yesterday! Signing and sending off today!

Time to write. Coffee and a comet cookie please!
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It's another Moanday mourning inside the hallowed walls of Inspirations. The coffee pot has been prepared in an approved manner as has the tea kettle. You'll have to trust me on all that and the source for the coffee and water.

What Ping posted yesterday about voting and commenting I agree with, approximately 100%. For me, the voting scale runs: Five: okay, Four, may need work. Beyond that, 3 through 1 just don't exist. If a story deserves a vote that low, odds are I've stopped reading it long before finishing the poor thing.

And in closing, please accept my apologies for not keeping up with recent SS stories. It's nothing personal, honest. Not sure why I'm now that way, probably depression, but there it is. Sorry.

With a filled coffee mug in one hand and a bunch of Sarah's cookies in the other, I'll slink over to the corner table to wonder if everyone had a good 4th of July weekend

Later, Inspirators. .


Sorry to hear about the depression, Bill. I've certainly been there. I know my reading (and writing) kind of ebbs and flows with my mood. I'm sure you'll be back reading eventually, and if you don't, we still have you here slinging coffee, keeping us happy and caffeinated.

Comments are important to me, but I pay no attention to scores. At the "other" site there are always a few commentless 4s tacked onto a story of mine, I just assumed someone read it and didn't love it. 1s might be a deliberate downvote for selfish reasons, but 4s seem perfectly legit to me. That said, I only give out 5s. If I don't like a story I just won't score it.

Lazy day today. The 4th was fun, if low key. We have been threatening to go see a movie for weeks, this might be the day.

A coffee and eight cookies please - one of each planet. F*ck Pluto. (I hope we're allowed to swear here.)
Had a glorious beginning to the 4th, and even got a little yard work done until this torrential rain we're currently experiencing. So I will watch the Yankees/Mets game until the skies clear (5-4 Yankees in the 6th). Then, grilling steak and fish before chilling on the back porch, watching fireworks. Talia's sopapilla cheesecake for dessert!

I like the fourth, though like Roland I can live without the fireworks. I like that it tends to revolve around grilling and being outside and hanging with friends and family. And it's important to remember that freedom is rarely free.

Have an excellent weekend everyone!

EDIT: Mets just tied it up!!!

Still raining.
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Don't leave us hanging! What movie did you rate a 10?


The only movie I have ever rated a 10.0 is a movie most people have never heard of, 'The Man of Earth.' It is a small independent film written by Jerome Bixby, who died in 1998. His son, Emerson, brought together a group of well-known co-star type of actors to film it in 2007 on a $200,000 budget over six days. It won a Saturn award that year and several other awards at various film festivals. It had a very limited release and was then released on DVD in 2007.

Its ratings are high on most sites, but due to its static nature and religious connotations, it did receive some low votes. It was filmed in and around a single rural house. Much as '12 Angry Men' was filmed in two rooms during a jury's deliberation.

IMDb's summary is, 'An impromptu goodbye party for Professor John Oldman becomes a mysterious interrogation after the retiring scholar reveals to his colleagues he has a longer and stranger past than they can imagine.'

I highly recommend it as my all-time favorite movie. I believe it is currently on Hulu for free.


Wow, that got really good scores on Rotten Tomatoes! It looks good. My favorite quote: "I can give you the ten commandments in ten words: Don't. Don't, don't, don't, don't, don't, don't, don't, don't, don't."

I am fading on the Falcon/Winter Snowman thing. It's good, it's just not grabbing me. Still loving Loki.
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Happy TGIF wishes along with pre Fourth of Julys salutes to all, especially those who plan on celebrating both events.

ET, don't call home, much less 911. The bars liquor license has come under official scrutiny. Apparently there's some question of its validity since it was issued by the Toad Suck Arkansas village council. Stay tuned.

Coffee's on and the tea kettle is doing its thing. Don't worry about the sources of the coffee and water. With enough of Sarah's cookies within easy reach, both coffee and tea should prove most potable.

BTW, y'all be nice to old Jeff. His beloved Mets wasted a 14 strikeout night by their stud young pitcher to lose to Sarah's Atlanta Braves.

Later, Inspirators.


Yes, that was quite the ugly loss. That two game lead gets slimmer and slimmer. Too much going on this weekend to watch any baseball, but we are playing the dreaded Yankees, so I will pop my head into the scores once or twice.

I guess virtual liquor is frowned upon. My apologies for polluting the delicate minds of Stories Space. I was looking to sip on some of Ping's limoncello.

Coffee please.