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Thanks for the coffee set up, Larry.

Despite my botching of the english language (and yes, I agree there are far too many confusing words), Mrs Rambles has kicked off the first-line story challenge with a wonderful piece. Which can be found here: https://www.storiesspace.com/stories/micro-fiction/-the-invisible-girl-.aspx

I'm fighting some sort of cold. I'm fully vaxed but went to the walk-in clinic over the weekend, just to be safe. Tests came back negative for covid and the delta variant, so I guess there are still other viruses out there all vying for our attention. Under normal circumstances, I wouldn't have minded giving it to them. But now I can't help but wonder if every time I get sick, I will feel the need to get tested. Ugh...

Hope you all are having a wonderful start to the week!


Could only be one other thing… you’re pregnant.

CONGRATULATIONS!!!

If it’s a boy, please name him, Verbs. If it’s a girl, please name her, Ping.

If you have one of each, or more, any variation of PinglyVerbs or VerballyPing will do nicely.

Immaculate conception. What a concept!


Just spent three hours in the dentist chair. A very old (probably older than our mother-to-be) crown broke. Lots of prep. But we’re good to go again until the permanent crown is made.

Toffee, gum, and anything sticky and chewy, please. I want to test my dentist’s proficiency.

Smile. It’s Monday. No more Olympics.


Tams is having Ping's and my secret love child!? What a selfless gesture! A product of the combined gene pool of Ping and Verbs: what could possibly go wrong?

PinglyVerbs. Perbal! Ving!

I think perhaps I've had a little too much coffee....
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This weekend has been very hot, sweaty and hot, humid and hot. Spent it with husband visiting a vast number of antique malls in PA. Not very good a/c in these old buildings and just walking and walking and every now and then saying "how about this?" To which his usual reply is "nah, we have too many of those". Nice motel though with thoroughly European feel. Only open a week and lacking a few things "that got delayed in the supply line". Lovely breakfast and more hours slogging through more antique malls.
Finally home and feet up for maybe a week.
Oh, and Verbs - welcome to my world. How does it feel being one above the Nationals? Sorry. Don't even get me started on why, why, why the trades were made to the Dodgers. Gnashing teeth every time I think about it.



I think it was just time to move on from the core of that 2019 team that won the World Series. That was an astonishingly fun team to watch, Sherzer and Strasburg were such a strong one-two punch. You'll be good again in a couple years, with lots of young (cheap!) prospects. As opposed to the Mets, who are just flat out unable to score a run.

But hey, it's a sunny day, and Talia is feeling well again, and I finally figured out was is up with the haunting grey-eyed lady in the dog park (SHE'S FICTIONAL!).

Gotta disagree with the "too many words" thing, Pingo. Like every sperm being sacred, every word is perfect for some sentence somewhere. I say, more words! Ever increasing ways to express ourselves! Let out teenagers invent new weird slang, let Urban Dictionary overflow with their obscene and misspent vocabulary, let sports and space travel fling new words into our mouths like popcorn!

Whew. That took a lot out of me. Hope everyone is well.

Coffee and a cookie please.
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Hi everyone
A beautiful day here
A large coffee would be fantastic
Me and miss Molly the monkey are gonna help in the church nursery this morning.
Scott that's a good idea I'm sure each animal who visits have an idea what they like .

*Moving the old cookies to the emergency cookie tins behind the counter and filling the cookie jars to the tippy top with fresh cookies.*
In Big Bird we have pecan divines, oatmeal raisin cookies, chocolate orange cookies and snickerdoodles
In Cookie Monster we have ginger snaps, white chocolate supremes, chocolate covered cherry cookies and hot chocolate and marshmallow cookies
In Elmo we have lemon cookies, double chocolate hazelnut ,m&m cookies and snickerdoodles

*Giving the adorable critters fresh water and treats*

Off I go to deal with little humans
Stay safe everyone!


SNICKERDOODLES!!! How did you know?

Lazy day today, though yardwork and grocery shopping are both involved. I think we're grilling tonight: a small strip steak, a piece of salmon, some corn on the cob. Yum.

The Mets blow chunks. That is all. First place recedes like the first blush of youth.

We might follow Ping's example and go see Quiet Place 2.

Coffee and a SNICKERDOODLE please!!!
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Oh my, Mr Mendalla. How could you think such a thing about a sweet old lady like me.


Never said it about you, just about that story. And if mine was in any way an influence, you are welcome. I don't think I have ever been cited as an influence (other than a bad one ) before.


Don’t worry, I’ve got the bad influence thing going on in spades. smile

I can’t think of a danged thing for the prompt. Looking forward to what everyone else does with it.

The Mets have officially fallen from first place. They left 15 runners on base in 9 innings. How does a team even to that?

Great comp going on at another site, btw.

Talia went to bed headache-y and tired, and woke up feeling the same. I suspect I am playing nurse to her today. Give her some healing thoughts!

Me, I don’t need healing thoughts, I need frikking coffee!
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I really like your idea Verbs, but I am (among other things) extremely tech-challenged. I want to avoid creating more work for the mods by having to help insert pics into the body of the story.

I also like Ping's suggestion. My fear (pun intended) is that Halloween is right around the corner and I wouldn't want to step on the toes of a possible future comp. I do like the thought of keeping the stories light and fun.

My idea is that I will throw down an opening line. So many fantastic stories start with killer first lines; Call me Ishmael...or...Mother died today, or maybe yesterday; I can't be sure. Not saying mine is killer, but it seems like it will be fun to see where each person takes the line.

Here is what I have come up with for rules:

- I will give a first-line prompt, every story must have that line as the open.
- From there you are free to take it where ever you'd like and in whatever category and length you choose.
- Please make sure to follow storiespace guidelines for acceptable content.
- Please include Inspirators as a tag. Make sure it is spelled exactly that way so when we click on the tag, it will isolate all of our stories on one page.
- This is just a challenge and all for fun, no prizes or awards will be given out.
- There is no time limit for entries.

Here is your first-line prompt...have fun with it!

"To everyone in the room, she seemed like just a normal girl wearing Vans, bluejeans, and a red hoodie."




On this like sugar on cookies!

Hello everyone. Hugs to those who need them! Just help yourself.

Mets lost AGAIN. Sigh. We could lose first place tonight. Big series against the Phillies.

No Talia today. The cats and I are going to build a Duplicator! She's come home to two of me, and four of them!

Blerg. Still waking up. Coffee and a sugar cookie would do the trick!


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Morning All!

drums fingers on counter waiting for the coffee to finish brewing...decides to sneak a GF cookie for the wait

I'm having post-comp blues. The energy and buzz when those comps are active make it so much fun. Plus for some reason, my brain gets more active when there is a prompt to work off of. What if we did a friendly Inspirators story challenge thingy? Anyone have ideas for a prompt?

I tend to gravitate toward these categories(but I'm certainly open to anything):

- Thriller
- Horror
- Fantasy
- Romance

Just a thought...hope everyone is having a great day...and look at that, the coffee's done percolating.


That'd be fun - no prizes, a friendly game. We should collect prompts!

Here's one: look around you and find three objects you can literally see. Combine them in a story or poem or plot. Post pictures of the three objects with your writing.

I'm still waking up, though, so I'm not gonna do it now. smile

The game was fun - Roland's Cubbies won 3-2 - though the drive was long. We had an excellent time. My daughter loved it. We brought a six-year-old friend of the family who had never seen a baseball game before, and seeing the experience through his excited eyes got me teared up a few times. Really, really sweet. We made some memories.

I'm still a little tired from the drive though. Expecting a chill day today. Write and edit. See what happens to the eerie hot girl in the Dog Park.

Coffee and three cookies please.
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Happy Hump Day to all Inspirators. The coffee pot has been rinsed and dried as has been the tea kettle. Today's coffee is from the Big Mamou Coffee Co. located near the fabled town of, Little Mamou. Water is from the nearby Atchafalaya River. Enjoy.

Some of the baseball teams Inspirators pull for won: Padres, Diamondbacks, Braves, while others such as the Mets Royals, and Nationals did not. Probably a great object lesson there but it escapes me.

Time to fill my mug, grab some of Sarah's cookies and wander over to the corner table to spend some time wool gathering.

Later, Inspirators.



The object lesson is: baseball is as much about losing as it is about winning. Life, too.

And that’s as philosophical as I am prepared to get today.

My youngest daughter and I are driving up to Denver today to see the Rockies play Roland’s Cubs. I don’t have a strong rooting interest in either team, I just like to watch baseball. And hang out with my daughter.

It’s a longish drive, so we might leave early. Those Coors Field games can get long. It’s a GORGEOUS stadium.

Enjoy your day all. I’m taking a vacation day.

Coffee and a snickerdoodle!
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Jeff, you are going to love watching Baez play. He plays the game with the heart of a gladiator, the talent of a hall-of-famer, and the joy of a little boy. His defense and baserunning are gifts from Olympus. If you forgive him for his strikeouts, he is day in and day out the best in baseball.

Saw my brain doctor today, and he said over the last six months, I have shown only a minor decline in my tests. So I did not dare tell him I had not slept since Saturday night. I have had insomnia since high school. So I have been binge-watching 'Grimm.'

Have a great week, my friends.


He is a joy to watch! I love the abandon with which he plays. The Mets as a whole are still playing poorly, but winning isn't the only point of watching. Baseball is as much about losing as winning.

Really glad the doc had good things to say. We like to see you around here. I don't have anyone else to talk baseball with, so take care of yourself.

Lovely day here. Edit and write, long walk, eat supper, watch the game on time-delay around 7. That's my rhythm most days, and I really thrive doing it. Retirement has freed me in so many ways, and I am so grateful. It's a gift from Covid actually: CSU wouldn't have offered early retirement but for the huge losses in state revenue from The Covid.

I hope everyone is doing well! When's the next contest?

Anyway. Time to settle in.

I love a coffee and several snickerdoodles (I thought I saw some in one of the back jars).
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Wow... So many talented writers and so many excellent stories! I'm honored to be sharing the podium with Verbal and Thespian. Everyone who entered deserves a round of applause.

Thank you to everyone who read my story and especially those who scored and left a comment.

If I know Verbal, he's already blown his winnings on Godzilla posters for the ceiling above his bed.lnC56bNT9RFzfSo7 So, a round of sarsaparillas on me!



Close.

Enough left over for a six-pack!

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Reading a graphic novel series called Once & Future. Basically, what if King Arthur's return was horror rather than fantasy. Arthur is what we would call a "lich" in D&D, basically an animated skeletal monster commanding a "round table" of similar horrors. Merlin just showed up but seems to be something else entirely. Arrayed against Arthur's evil are Bridgette Macquire, an elderly monster hunter who is supposed to be living in a seniors' home, her grandson Duncan and a historian named Rose (who kind of got sucked into the story by dating Duncan).

The underlying idea seem to be that it is not so much people coming back to life as their stories, with many variations possible on those stories. Beowulf has made an appearance, and the last chapter that I read (I am partway through volume 2) ended with the appearance of his foe Grendel. Beowulf is sent against Duncan and Bridgette by Arthur who describes them as "monster and mother", creating an allegory for Grendel and his mother. Not sure how Grendel is going to fit in, yet, but he is currently outside Bridgette's home. Good stuff. The last volume is up for a Hugo (one of the most prestigious sf and fantasy awards) this year and the series has picked up other awards and nominations as well.

Author is Kieron Gillen, a British comic book writer, and the art is by Dan Mora. Both creators are multiple award-winners.


That sounds amazing. Not only the Arthurian bit, but the Beowulf/Grendal thing too (I have a soft spot for mothers and monsters smile ). Have you heard of the book Grendel, by John Nichols? It's the story from Grendel's point of view. Just wonderful. I think it was made into an animated film as well. One of my favorite books.
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Hello everyone

Congratulations to all of the entries to the contest. Every story was excellent. I would have pulled out every hair on my head if I had to make those choices.

Sometimes, when I read a story, I can not think of a single thing about that story that has not already been said, and I wind up not commenting. I read every story in this competition, and everyone was excellent, but I did not comment on three of the stories. Two of those three non-comment stories won awards. Either that was a big coincidence, or the judges must think my praise is negative towards grading.

A couple of cookies and tea, please.

Bryant (SFG), Baez (NYM), and Rizzo (NYY) all hit home runs in their first game for their new clubs. I wish them well.

Have a great day, my friends.



Good morning all. Glad you had a fun birthday James.

Thanks for the set-up Larry.

Still waking up. Fun weekend. Great concert, great to be in a bar, great to travel out of town and hang out with friends. I'm going back up on Wednesday to see a Rockies-Cubs game with my daughter.

Speaking of the Cubbies, you are right about that fire sale Roland - but it also means you'll have fresh new talent and a smaller payroll to start fresh. Rosters get bloated after a World Series win. At least the Mets got a piece of that championship in Javy Baez.

Coffee would be swell. And a large handful of cookies! Hugs to all the animals and humans.
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Drinks are on me! And while no alcohol is allowed in the coffee shop, I hear a rumour that Ping is passing out limoncello shots from the trunk of his car out in the parking lot. It's that 1979 Monkey-sh1t green Ford Pinto out there. No, wait, that's my car!






You are unsafe at any speed, Mr. Ping. An honor to be in the contest with you. Dig that EP! Now, can I have a limoncello please? I'll wash that fine sports car of yours in payment for it.
Happy birthday, James!

And congrats to all the winners and top tenners (that rhymes!) on the comp. I genuinely did not expect to win (that's not false modesty, trust me) and so it's a perfect cap on a lovely weekend.

A cold and rainy day here, but that just means I don't have to do yardwork, so you'll hear no complaints from me.

It was SO NICE to go to an actual bar and hear actual live music. Really good concert, and the whiskey went down smooth. Robert Earl Keen is a helluva storyteller, and told a lot of stories. Here's one he didn't tell on Friday, about his car burning up during the second annual Willie Nelson picnic. Followed by that song Bill loves so much.

Drink're on me today, and for the rest of the month of July!



Sorry, couldn't resist, that's my favorite comic of all time.

What a cool contest, what a strong field, and I love that it is ultimately about the survival of StoriesSpace, and the continued camaraderie of all the writers here. I met a couple new writer friends here, and got into some extended conversations with others I'd not talked to much before. So here's to the writing community here, and to the hard work and skill of everyone who entered. Frankly, the strength of those early entries (I'm looking at you Verity) is what pushed me, and I'm sure many others, to do my best.

Also, HUGE thanks to Molly, who did so much verifying and clarifying, and kept us all up to date on who had entered. This would not have happened without the talented, hard-working, red-haired siren of Stories Space, Molly.

This really made my weekend, everyone. Thanks!

Drinks are on me! And while no alcohol is allowed in the coffee shop, I hear a rumour that Ping is passing out limoncello shots from the trunk of his car out in the parking lot. It's that 1979 Monkey-sh1t green Ford Pinto out there. No, wait, that's my car!
It’s August 1st on the East Coast of the US. Just sayin’.
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Good book! I just cracked open his latest, Hail Mary. Good, nerdy, hard sci-fi.
DUNE!!!

Also, the Green Knight. Love all that Arthurian stuff.
I’m kinda pumped, yeah.

Currently typing this in the Costco parking lot, almost home from Denver. Talia is picking up a couple things, I have a toothache (arg!) and a bit of a hangover so am waiting in the car.

The Robert Earl Keen concert was awesome (thus the hangover). He even played one of my favorite country tunes in the encore: an old Son Volt tune called Tear Stained Eye. I even got a little choked up. I am on an iPad and so can’t embed, but here is the URL (I think): https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=SIHtFySoo6U#

Enjoy the weekend, gentle Inspirators.

Coffee would be a boon.
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We have been suffering under a heatwave that appears to be ready to break tomorrow. The highs have been in the 90sF/30sC degrees. When it gets down into the 80s/20s we may have a break. Rough on the little critters.




Iced tea with a blast of limoncello solves all heat problems. I left a pitcher of this good mix in the fridge.

Lovely Fryday to you all!


Actual footage of my days in NYC. smile
Good morning all.

The endless weekend continues. Off to Denver in a couple hours. I’m tired, didn’t sleep well, but Talia can shoulder the driving.

Bill, you are SO right about The Road Goes On Fovever. It’s ALL PLOT, and would make an excellent movie. Look forward to hearing it tonight.

The trade deadline is over in a couple hours. We’ll see if the Mets-Cubs deal ever happens. The Nats gave one of the best pitchers in the league to the evil Yankees. Sorry, Elizabeth.

I’d love a coffee and one of those deLISH cookies.

*yawn*
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Morning, fellow storiespacers...

Did you all know that yawns are contagious? It's true. Next time you are in a crowd, let out an unsuspecting yawn and see how many around you follow suit. NOTE: I've yawned three times while writing this!

What's the antidote? Thank you for asking! It happens to be some of Rump's fine brew. I'll take a cup, if you don't mind, kind sir.

Happy Thursday everyone...hold strong, the weekend's within reach!


Totally not making this up: I once had a cat who I could make yawn! I knew it was a social behavior, so when I yawned, I'd aim it at her, and SHE'D YAWN BACK!

Anyway. Still waking up. Birthday was chill and fun. The actual celebration is tomorrow, when we are going to see a Robert Earl Keen concert (GREAT country singer-songwriter) with some friends.

Talia took today off, so we are in weekend mode early. I LOVE weekend mode. smile

Coffee and one of Sara's famous cookies please. Are there any shaped like ennui?

I'll leave you with a Robert Earl Keen song. The Highwaymen had a small hit with it, but Robert Earl Keen WROTE it. Great song.

Thanks for the coffee, Larry, and the birthday wishes, and thank you especially for the stack of quarters. I'll put on a tune, and encourage others to do the same.

Thanks for all the birthday posts everyone. It'll be a chill day, doing pretty much what I always do, interrupted by lunch with my daughter, pizza and cake with my other daughter and Talia. Presents interspersed along the way. Talia got me season tix to a theater here!

Sunday, huh? It's been a good strong comp. Looking forward to the results.

Ping, is that birds changing their songs story really a thing in Canada? Is it an actual story there? What if birds started to speak? What if it turns out they can talk, but they're really boring? They mostly talk about worms and twigs.

Here's some birthday music culled from my misspent youth. Post a song representative of your younger days!

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Okay. Okay. I’m not a Tik Toker, but this lady and her hubby make me laugh. She’s from Montreal but I think they live in Boston. Parents of two. She sings and is an ‘influencer’. He’s a lawyer. He never shows his face but is known as the Real Indian Dad. They both of Indian descent but he uses a very thick Indian accent for his character. It started out as him heckling her off camera while she played piano and sang, while preparing a future video post.

Sooo sooo funny.

RID: Did you hear about the two guys that stole a calendar?

DM: No

RID: They each got six months.


Iced tea, please. Some seed for the bird man of Colorado.


I’ve told this joke three times today. Got one laugh: Talia, predictably.

Sheena’s kinda cute.

Two meteor shores are peaking this evening. Might have to stay up late and watch.

A non-alcoholic limoncello please. And MORE COOKIES!
Good morning fellow coffee and cookie lovers. Thanks for the set-up, Larry.

Guess whose birthday is in less than 24 hours?

We're not doing much for it. Ice cream cake and presents. And we're travelling up to Denver to see a concert with some friends this weekend. Other than that, just another pleasant day of writing and cat-ball and a Mets game in the evening.

I'm writing about an impossibly beautiful woman and her impossibly gorgeous dog, who hang out at the dog park, and the man who watches her from the kitchen window. We have a dog park visible from our kitchen window. There's NO beautiful woman. It's FICTION. Tell Talia. (Several gorgeous dogs though.)

Mets and Braves split the double header yesterday.

Coffee and a competition-shaped cookie please.
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This comp has been a favourite of mine, the friendliness and community is so strong here and that brings out the best in us all.



Darn upload limitations. I have a funny penguin gif where one smacks the other to the ground. I wanted to juxtapose the tuxedo’d pairing. Penguins & Nuns. I sense a very hot South African catholic school story in the making or a very chilly one from Antarctica. But I don’t think there are any catholic colonies on the big berg.

Good comp. I concur. At the very least, we learned that Verbs was raised by wolves.


I'll have you know I was raised by milquetoast Southern Baptists in the middle of Iowa. I'm about as non-wolf as they come.

Now, raised by birds - that's something to aspire too. I had this idea last night: what if the birds started talking to children. All over the world. Just flew to them and whispered something. And none of the kids will tell anyone what the birds said.

It was a really strong, fun contest, I agree.
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Hey, when are comp results supposed to be announced?


It says August 1 in the Site news forum.


So it does! Thank you!

Hey Al Copeland, nice to meet you, I'll get to your story soon (as will others I'm sure).

Anyway, I stopped by AGAIN because I just read the Mets have a double-header today with their nemesis, Sara's Braves, AND not only that, but it's a five game series. AND not only that, but the Mets have so little pitching that they don't know who is starting 2 of the next 3 games. This series is one of the first BIG series to decide the NL East! Good luck Sara!
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Is it still Moanday? it is? In the immortal words of Winnie-the-Pooh, "Oh bother."

Larry thanks for the set-up and for giving WG proper recognition and greetings.

I was a bit 'off my feed' this weekend. Just felt punky and out of sourts. On the other hand, it let me stay piled up in bed knocking off a couple historical mystery novels.

Next up could be an in-depth analysis of the news that the universities of Oklahoma and Texas will probably be moving from the Big-12 conference to the Southeastern Conference (SEC) wherr teams such as Alabama, Georgia and my beloved LSU Tigers roam. Yep that could be next up except most Inspirators don't care and I'm not sure how I feel about the whole thing.

With a second mug of coffee in one hand while the other is filled to overflowing with Sarah's cookies, I'll go over to the corner table, sit in a dry confy chair, and speculate on just what in the heck-e-darn is speculative fiction.

Later, Inspirators.


Sorry you were off your feed Bill. Hope the coffee and cookies help. They help me!

I think speculative fiction just means a "what if" story: what if some aspect of the world was different than it is now. Like, what if the Russians landed on the moon first. Or what if they found giant robot monsters there? It's a huge category, and a big buzzword these days.

New story idea: any of you Canadians heard of a huge population of songbirds there changing their tune? Apparently white throated sparrows started singing a shorter song - "Oh sweet Cana, Cana, Cana" instead of "Oh sweet Canada, Canada, Canada." WHAT IF the birds had something more nefarious in mind!?

https://www.theatlantic.com/science/archive/2020/07/bird-song-sparrows/613768/

Anyway. Mets won. Larry's Padres got a BIG bat at second base right before the trade deadline. They're still in the hunt, and would make the playoffs if the season ended today.

Starting a new story today. Maybe the bird one, maybe one about a dog park with somewhat mysterious dogs and owners.

Hey, when are comp results supposed to be announced?

Coffee and a bird shaped cookie please.