The Second Coming (Yeats)
The whole God-damned world's gonna burn
I guess that people will never quite learn
The falcon can't hear
His beloved falconeer
And the slouchy old lion returns.
Last day! And I think we're still awaiting entries from the Sensual Lady and from the One True Ping. I TOLD you all we'd break 10 handily!
I'm all caught up with reading them, until the last few come in.
When are results announced?
Still oddly obsessed with the old Larry Sanders Show. Lots of cool old celebs and cultural references, some out loud laughs, and the darkest world view I've seen in quite some time.
I once again watched a baseball game til 2 in the morning. A crazy extra-inning Mets/Reds tilt that the Mets had no right to win (4 errors in the first two innings) but won anyway. Anyway, a bit bleary this morning.
Writing critique group went really well. This is the first one I’ve ever really been in, and I really like these guys. Supportive, but interested in the story, and how to improve it. No one gets offended or offensive. I really like it. And they liked my story!
I see more entries! Plus the Sensual Lady and the One True Ping. I look forward to reading and commenting. Really happy to be part of such a strong group of stories.
Okay. Time to put the words on the blank page.
Coffee and a banana cookie would hit the spot.
And...I just clicked "Publish Story."
A limoncello would be a perfect way to mark this occasion.
Final push. I finish the story today, come hell or high water.
I'll post on Sunday night or Monday.
Still no baseball. I filled this yawning void in my life by watching Hamilton last night (I'm about to cancel Disney+ because Loki is over, gotta watch Hamilton first). Excellent, exciting piece of theater. I turned it on to give it a chance and listen to a song, and I couldn't turn it off. I don't know American history well enough to speak on the criticisms of the play, but I thought the "race-conscious" casting was a brilliant choice - you end up thinking about the reasons behind it all through the play.
My only issue, mildly PC: how come the women characters never rap? They sing, only men rap. It's oddly gendered.
The guy who played Jefferson ROCKED!
Okay. Time to get to the words THE END.
Coffee and cookies sounds like manna from heaven.
I think a conversation with a box of frogs sounds enlightening!
Yeah, I'll be there, but it will be last minute, mostly because I want to do a good job, which is in everyone's best interests, right? I'm also happy to learn I don't need 10 votes to qualify. That woulda been tough.
It is what it is. I'd like a ton of entries too, but writing is hard, and writing for a comp puts you under even more scrutiny. I understand if folks are hesitant to enter.
I'm guessing over 10 entries. And one will be mine.
Good luck with the test, Larry.
I made a passing mention to the comp as well, though I'm not well known over there. Read the comp entries last night, and they are really good. My idea for the comp is dark and weird, and out of my comfort zone, but there's no time to think up another. So today I begin to write a horror fairytale, which I don't think is even a genre.
Quiet day, lovely outside, all is well with the world. Time to write.
Coffee and hundreds and hundreds of cookies, please.