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The Mud Beneath

"The Final Chapters"

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"I do hope those of you who have read all the chapters of this story have enjoyed reading it as much as I did writing it."

Chapter Twelve: Into the Pit

June 2024 – Donetsk Region, Ukraine

The military checkpoint had been evacuated the day before they arrived.

No warning, no explanation—just boots, tire tracks, and one soldier’s abandoned rosary half-buried in churned mud. The villagers near the trenchline wouldn’t speak to Eleanor or her team. Not even to ask why an old blind woman, five strangers, and a heavy case of ritual tools had come to the edge of a war-haunted wood.

“The earth moved last night,” Kemi whispered, crouching by a snapped tree root. “It’s rising.” Amari scanned the distance through scope-glassed eyes. “Or something’s digging up.” They made camp two miles from the known spiral site. Louise set stones around the perimeter, whispering to them, marking space like an old soul returning to a desecrated temple. Wren stayed close to Eleanor. She never asked why. She already knew.

He wrote in mud. At first, on his arms. Then on walls. Then, on strips of cloth from the uniforms of missing soldiers. The words were not his, but he did not need to understand them. The spiral understood him. The spiral spoke.

“She bound me in song, but I remember the silence between the notes.”

“The new Circle walks on shallow roots.”

“They will kneel, or they will feed the bloom.”

Peter had built a new spiral. A living one.

It breathed. And something inside it pulsed like a second heart beneath the land.

That night, Eleanor led them to the edge of the Spiral Field. The sky was low and red, the moon a gash behind smoke.

Father Tomasz collapsed to his knees, vomiting soil and whispers.

Kemi scribbled a warning in her journal:

“It’s not just the entity anymore. The land itself is infected. The spiral is copying itself.

Louise knelt at the edge of the field and laid her palm to the ground. Her body convulsed—then stilled. She spoke in a voice not her own:

“He wears Peter’s skin.”

“He builds a cradle of blood.”

“The gate is open.”

Amari volunteered to go first.

He carried an old soldier’s badge—John Mercer’s. Eleanor had given it to him earlier with only four words: “He didn’t die blind.”

Down the trench he went, rifle slung across his back, a crude Earthbinder ward tied to his chest like a rosary.

He reached the spiral within twenty minutes.

But it wasn’t a spiral anymore.

It was a wound.

Peter stood at its center. His eyes were black with soil. He was smiling.

Peter did not attack. He welcomed them.

Eleanor arrived last, leaning heavily on Wren’s shoulder.

The spiral shifted beneath them, reacting to their presence, its lines warping slightly—like it remembered her bones.

“Hello, Auntie,” Peter said. His voice was layered with something deeper—something old. “You brought friends.”

“You’re bleeding,” she said. “From the soul outward.”

“I’m birthing it.”

“Then we’re here for the burial.”

Wren stepped forward. Something glowed beneath her skin.

The entity hissed. Wren was known to it.

The Circle formed their positions.

Kemi began to chant—an incantation so old the air itself seemed to recoil. Louise held the Codex fragment Eleanor had hidden all these years. Tomasz whispered prayers while gripping nails carved from the wood of a tree that grew atop the Belgian spiral.

Amari poured salt and ash in sacred lines.

Peter stood at the center, unmoving.

“You can’t stop birth,” he whispered.

“You’re just killing the midwife.”

The spiral split open.

And from beneath, a shape rose—tall, sinewed, carved from living clay and bone. Its mouth opened, and Eleanor’s voice came out.

Chapter Thirteen: Wren’s Awakening

The Spiral, Donetsk Region – Just before the Binding

The spiral roared. The entity had risen.

But all eyes turned not to Peter, nor the creature of clay and grief, but to Wren Vale.

She stood unmoving, her eyes wide—but her face held no fear.

She was glowing. Not bright like flame. Not sterile like electricity.

It was an ancient glow, gold threaded with mossy green, the hue of sunlight through burial soil. It leaked from her palms, her collarbones, her breath.

Louise whispered, “She’s… binding.”

The light pulled Wren inward—through herself, and beyond.

She stood in a great hall of roots, under a sky of stone. Around her, ten women knelt in a circle, chanting. Their hands bled into the earth, their faces marked with spiral tattoos. She was not a visitor here. She was one of them.

“You are not her descendant,” said a voice like shifting rock. “You are her echo.”

She knew then that her great-grandmother—the woman locked away in a 1940s asylum had not been mad. She had been trying to pass on the gift. But it had skipped two generations. Until now.

It was not a weapon.

It was a memory made flesh.

A memory of when the Earthbinders held the land in balance. When the entity—Eithar—was not yet corrupted. When the chant could heal, and the soil could speak in peace.

The light coursed through Wren’s spine, her veins, her breath.

The spiral responded. Its lines began to shiver away from the entity, recoiling from her presence.

“Only a daughter of the binding can unmake what her ancestors sealed,” Eleanor whispered from the edge of the circle. “But to bind it again, she must give it a name.”

The entity hissed as Wren stepped forward, light pulsing with each breath.

It spoke in Peter’s voice, in thousands of mouths.

“You know me.”

Wren nodded.

“You were loved once.”

Its clay form twitched.

“You were the healer.”

The air cracked.

“But now you are the wound.”

She laid her glowing hand against its chest—mud hissed, hardened, cracked.

“I name you Remembrance, so that you may never again be forgotten and rot in hunger beneath the world.”

The entity shrieked. But it began to fold inward.

Eleanor wept.

Tomasz fell to his knees in reverence.

Louise pressed her hand to the earth, tears flooding from her eyes.

Amari closed his eyes and whispered, “She’s the seal now.”

Kemi began recording—not with a pen, but in chant. The story would live again.

Chapter fourteen: The Last Spiral

Spiral Site, Donetsk Region — Twilight

The spiral buckled.

As Wren stepped forward, the geometry of the world twisted around her light. The entity—Remembrance—writhed in the shifting soil. Its form flickered between past and present: a great healer, a broken thing, a maw of centuries.

Peter knelt in its shadow, clutching his head.

“I can hear myself again,” he sobbed. “But it’s still speaking… I can’t make it stop.”

Eleanor reached for him with trembling fingers. “It will.”

Wren closed her eyes.

The wind stilled.

Each Circle member took their place:

Kemi sang in the lost tongue, the chant echoing like thunder wrapped in root.

Louise pressed the Codex shard into the ground—a key into memory.

Father Tomasz walked the circle’s edge, anointing it in ash and breath.

Amari placed the last of the binding stones, his steps heavy with silence.

Eleanor, seated in the center, raised her face toward the sky.

Wren began to speak. Not words, not language— A vibration, a resonance deep in the marrow of the earth. A pulse that called to the bones of the planet. The spiral responded.

The lines folded inward, pulling the entity with them. Remembrance screamed, a sound like thousands of voices torn from a wound.

“You left me in the dark—”

“you forgot me—”

“I only wanted to be remembered—”

And Wren answered:

“You are.” Then she called the name again—not with voice, but with will.

“Remembrance.”

The name became a tomb. The entity folded inward—flesh, shadow, grief, all pulled down into the spiral’s deepest coil.

And then—

Silence.

The light dimmed.

The spiral closed.

Peter collapsed into Eleanor’s arms. His eyes were wild with pain, but free.

“It’s gone,” he whispered. “But I still feel it… like ash in my blood.”

“You’ll carry it,” she said, stroking his hair. “We all do.”

He wept like a child.

Wren stood alone in the center of the spiral. Her glow had faded. She looked older somehow—not in face, but in gravity. Louise approached her and whispered, “What are you now?” Wren blinked, and for a moment her eyes glowed faintly.

“I am what they were. I am what they hoped to leave behind. A memory… with roots.”

The circle left the site as the first rains came—slow, clean, silent.

No media. No announcements.

The war would continue.

But one thread of ancient sorrow had finally been knotted shut.

Eleanor passed quietly two months later, her final smile one of peace.

Tomasz returned to Poland and became a healer.

Amari vanished.

Kemi wrote the Codex anew.

Louise remained Wren’s shadow.

And Peter?

He published one book—The Mud Beneath, anonymously. He never spoke of it again. He lives by the sea now. He does not dig.

Years later, Wren stood at a forgotten grove in Belgium. A spiral of moss grows in the dirt. She kneels, places her hand to the soil, and whispers:

“If you dream… let it be green.”

The roots stir—but do not rise.

She smiles and walks away.

“What is buried is not always dead. But sometimes, it is finally laid to rest.”

Epilogue: The Root Remembers

Year: 2083 – Somerset, England

The garden was overgrown with lavender and nettles, just how Wren Vale liked it.

She sat in an old wicker chair, wrapped in a shawl the color of riverstone. Her hair was white now, her face lined with decades of storms and healing, but her eyes still burned with gold-tinged knowing.

A little girl with wild curls and dirt on her cheeks was kneeling near a patch of soft moss.

“Gran-Wren,” she said, holding up a stone shaped like a spiral.  “Why does the ground keep doing this?”

Wren smiled faintly. She had been waiting for this question for years. “Because the earth remembers, Rose. It always does.”

The child tilted her head. “Is it bad?”

Wren leaned down with effort and reached for the girl’s hand. Their fingers met, and just like that, a spark passed between them—quiet and ancient, like breath through old trees.

Rose blinked. In that moment, she saw roots glowing beneath the lawn, bones wrapped in vines, faces in the bark of the oak tree. And she did not scream. She listened. Wren nodded, satisfied.

“One day, the world may need us again,” she said. “You’ll know when it’s time.”

“How will I know?”

Wren closed her eyes, her voice no louder than a wind through reeds. “The soil will sing your name.”

And somewhere far below, in the dark folds of forgotten earth, a spiral stirred—not in hunger, but in memory.

The End

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