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Eyes

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No!!! Do not seek my eyes

Blurred dimmed sightless visionaries

Mirror to my anguish so strong

It will bring you to your knees.

Broken shards of a shattered soul

Glowing bright and red, trampled the purity

Piercing my heart bleeding it to death

The residual blood burning acid

Bringing me hellish agony.

My eyes are weeping bloody putrid acid

Smoke rising from burning iris

Relentless weeping, unending screams, pain

Heart a putrid mess.

Smile on my face

Deceiving warmth on my face

Eyes wide open, unseeing

Blackness transcending my soul.

Fearless all my life

Fought the worst with valour of a warrior

Now shudder at merest squeak.

Endless night my warm cocoon

Is shadowed a scare fest

Pain, anguish, despairing angst

A heavy cloud following me overhead.

My thoughts are book of morbid visions

My soul is reaching nightmarish purgatory.

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Comments

It grabbed at my soul. It was well written, sad and makes me want to hug you. Though I don't know you, I suppose it doesn't matter. Not truly. So hugs
"Broken shards of a shattered soul" ... IMHO sums up what you have said and shared with your readers. You are brave and courageous to share this. Thank you.

Rick
ack, *hugs darn it anyhow.
I feel bad, but everybody else made such wonderful comments and I just can't think of anything.
What they said,
hugs
Painfully gorgeous piece, Vani.
What a strong statement. The eyes are the window to your soul. You have been deeply wounded. I feel the hurt and agony you express in your words. My heart wept for you as I read. No one needs to suffer this badly. Come into the light and lift up your eyes and gaze on the love and comfort there. Come join us.
fight back from purgatory vani
wash your eyes of this hurt and live
dear girl you are a writer!!!
Vani.. your eyes have forgotten how to see.. use mine.. and look again..
nirupam. sir did you not read her hurt and fear for
her eyes ?? may I ask you to re-read
her story. thank you
vani
your words bring shutters to my
soul. wish you to heal my warrior
princess. I'm here for you
my love to you my heart is hurting
for you
still a great piece 5+
well-written, but why so deeply anguished?