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Dancing With Bear Publishing is looking for kid's stories, holiday stories, stuff like that...no, they don't want your erotic stories...don't even try...they have various anthologies coming up and they pay $50 per story...go for it my friends...


I don't know where I got that "$50 per story" thing from...actually, they are much better than that...they split the sales 50-50 with the authors...it says so right on the site...

I know this too because I recently signed a contract with them...I sold "His Christmas Wish" to them for their upcoming Christmas anthology which should be out in print soon, just in time for the holiday gift giving season...but, don't worry, when it comes out I'll make sure the whole world knows...

OK, maybe not the whole world...that's a bit ridiculous...just every English speaking man, woman and child on the planet...
Speaking of classic songs and albums...I think this by Marvin Gaye more than qualifies...
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Hey Mr deWriter,
Just wondering if your kin to that other Rumple guy I know?


Hey Scooter...didn't you know that Rumple is a common name?

It's like Smith in some parts of the world...
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Words of wisdom, Master Moderator.



Hmmm...Master Moderator Martini...kinda has a nice ring to it, you think?

Do you think it would be terribly wrong of me to insist that everyone in my presence refer to me by that name?

Lol...just thinking out loud...
Are you a paranormal writer? I mean, do you write paranormal stories? You know what I meant...

Here's a paranormal short story contest...3500 word limit..."The prize for the best story is $60. We'll choose the ten best stories and we'll publish them to the second issue of “Bleeding words”...go for it my paranormal writer friends...

Just a Contest - Paranormal Short Story Contest
http://www.justacontest.com/writing-contest-0000001765.htm
Not only is this a great song, but that really is a classic album...Al Green...
Hey Mandsi...that sounds like the start of a story you got going right there...right it up and submit it here...

Btw, just like to mention...I am now officially a "Socialite" and have a new badge to prove it...
First off, I'd like to thank Chrissey for sharing this over on Facebook...

This article should be absolute required reading for anyone actually looking to get published...

I've said before, I really don't like to give advice, but in the last fourteen months or so I've spent probably too much time reading writing blogs, joining writing groups, and I've actually met in person and talked to actual published authors...like Caridad Pineiro, an erotic author who writes for Harlequin and others...and I can tell you they will basically all tell you the same things...

Plus, I've managed to make a bit of headway myself in recent months...

What Happened To My Submission? The Chance You Take When You Don't Follow Directions

http://naughtynightspress.blogspot.com/2011/11/what-happened-to-my-submission-chance.html?spref=fb

There is the proverbial shitload of blogs out there by people who have self-published because "traditional publishers are no longer interested in the little author" or words to that effect...

Let me let you in on a fact...traditional publishers make their money finding new talent...

The people who don't get published either need to learn how to write...or learn how to follow directions...or worse yet, some combination of both...

Don't be one of those people my writing Stories Space Cadet friends...

Just saying...
Heard a lot of good things about CreateSpace lately, from people who have used some of the alternatives like Lulu and the like...

Rosanne Dingli, an Australian author who has books both self-published and otherwise has created an instructional doc on using CreateSpace to make a paperback which a lot of people seem to find useful...

Rosanne Dingli - Author Website
http://www.rosannedingli.com/useful-files.php

She has a pretty good writing blog in general, btw...if you happen to be one of those rare authors who actually has time to read writing blogs...
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Someone else mentioned that to me as well. He said they stopped working for him yesterday.


That was actually driving me a little nuts yesterday, well more nuts anyway...when I get a message here and view it, I always delete the e-mail...

I searched for that darn non-existent e-mail yesterday for probably a half hour...searched my inbox, deleted items, spam folder...probably went a week back...

I said to myself, "I don't remember deleting it"...

I think Gav is just trying to mess with our heads...
Hey Gav...I seemed to have stopped getting e-mail notifications when I get a message here...I noticed it yesterday, and thought maybe it was my imagination, or that I had deleted them and forgot...you know how us seniors get...

But...it seems to be the same case today...so, maybe I'm not that crazy after all...OK, maybe...
Oh, here we go...we are just doing good today my writing friends...here is a publication that pays 5 cents a word for short stories, and just as good...and some might say better...they pay 1.5 cents per word on previously published stuff...


Guidelines | White Cat Magazine
http://www.whitecatpublications.com/?page_id=225
Oh here we go...me like this one...here's a fiction and non-fiction short story contest with no fee, and get this...they accept previously published stories...."Categories fiction, nonfiction (creative or essay). $300, $150 and $50 prize monies in each category. Limit 5,000 words"...no excuse not to enter this one, and good luck my friends...

Fiction and Non-Fiction Writing Contest
http://pixelhose.com/fiction-and-nonfictio-writing-contest/
"Annabel Lee" is the last complete poem composed by American author Edgar Allan Poe. Like many of Poe's poems, it explores the theme of the death of a beautiful woman. The narrator, who fell in love with Annabel Lee when they were young, has a love for her so strong that even angels are jealous. He retains his love for her even after her death. There has been debate over who, if anyone, was the inspiration for "Annabel Lee". Though many women have been suggested, Poe's wife Virginia Eliza Clemm Poe is one of the more credible candidates. Written in 1849, it was not published until shortly after Poe's death that same year.

Annabel Lee...

It was many and many a year ago,
In a kingdom by the sea,
That a maiden there lived whom you may know
By the name of ANNABEL LEE;
And this maiden she lived with no other thought
Than to love and be loved by me.

I was a child and she was a child,
In this kingdom by the sea;
But we loved with a love that was more than love-
I and my Annabel Lee;
With a love that the winged seraphs of heaven
Coveted her and me.

And this was the reason that, long ago,
In this kingdom by the sea,
A wind blew out of a cloud, chilling
My beautiful Annabel Lee;
So that her highborn kinsman came
And bore her away from me,
To shut her up in a sepulchre
In this kingdom by the sea.

The angels, not half so happy in heaven,
Went envying her and me-
Yes!- that was the reason (as all men know,
In this kingdom by the sea)
That the wind came out of the cloud by night,
Chilling and killing my Annabel Lee.

But our love it was stronger by far than the love
Of those who were older than we-
Of many far wiser than we-
And neither the angels in heaven above,
Nor the demons down under the sea,
Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee.

For the moon never beams without bringing me dreams
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
And the stars never rise but I feel the bright eyes
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
And so, all the night-tide, I lie down by the side
Of my darling- my darling- my life and my bride,
In the sepulchre there by the sea,
In her tomb by the sounding sea.
Eric Clapton, Jack Bruce, Ginger Baker...The Cream...from their first album "Fresh Cream"...
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I only just noticed your hands are not attached to arms! Are they cookies?


I sure hope so...
Here's an interesting document on editing sent to me by DWB Publishing...I have a story coming out in a book soon, and they sent this along with the contract...

It's a good checklist, I think, for any story...though the first couple of sections here pertain to their specific requirements, the rest is sort of a condensed version of a lot of writing tips you may have heard before, and the usual rules..."show don't tell"..."Number formats consistent"...that sort of thing...


Editing Checklist

Step 1: Main Document

Font: Trebuchet MS 12pt
First Line Indent: ½ inch
Line Spacing: 1.5
Properties: Title and Author Name
Margins: 1” left & right, ½” top & bottom

Step 2: Changes

Tabs removed
two spaces to one space
... to … (symbol)
One space after end punctuation, not two
Step 3: During Edits for full length mss only
MAKE SURE THAT "TRACK CHANGES" IN THE "REVIEW" TAB IS ON AND THAT WORD IS USING THE CORRECT DICTIONARY THE U.S. DICTIONARY

Speech
verbal speech is to be in quotation marks (" "), telepathic speech in quotation speech and italic (" "), and written words to be italic with (' ').

Action tags separated from speech with a period, not a comma
If not using action tag, try to stick with said

Restructure where necessary to remove: that, it, had, was. Make sure they are only where necessary as these words tend to be overused. eg. "She was tall" changed to "When she walked into a room, her head nearly brushed the top of the door frame".

Content
Dialogue: natural sounding? with contractions? without? correct word usage for period?

Information Dumps: too long? show don't tell

Head Hops / POV: too many? confusing? Best kept to minimum every 300 words. I find is best with each chapter, but some authors are able to do it more often.

Flow
Realistic?

Ellipses are to signal trailing off of speech of thought. Ellipses are to be displayed as "…"
Dashes are when something is cut off abruptly.
Emdash: use —
Hyphens do not have a space before or after them, em-dashes (—) do.

Commas after every item. eg, Picking up the leash, biscuits, and collar, I started looking for the dog. If it was Picking up the leash, biscuits and collar, I started looking for the dog. it would imply that the biscuits were attached to the collar.

A centered ~ * ~ is preferable, although sometimes a double space between paragraphs will indicate a short passing of time for the same POV.

Time: Write it out three o’clock p.m. or a.m.

Toward/towards: Do not use "towards", you either go toward something or away, there is no plural when you go toward a person or thing

If you are not sure if a word is hyphenated, one word, or two words, check a dictionary! eg: never the less is actually nevertheless. Alright is correct but if you are asking if someone is all right, it’s two words.

Number formats consistent throughout document. eg. time format the same for all times, weight numbers either spelled out or in numerals (only one format in document), AM & PM as a.m. not "am" through document. Generally lbs. is pounds, kg. is kilograms, etc. I prefer you do not abbreviate, except when using Ms., Mr., or Mrs. unless these words are used in speech. We do not speak in abbreviations. "Thank you, Mr. Smith." NO! Write it out as, "Thank you, Mister Smith." Mr. Smith walked down the road – is fine because "Mr." is not being used in speech and may be abbreviated.

Get rid of words like has, had, just, that, it. If you can read the sentence without the word, you don’t need it.

Your and you’re are two different words. There, they’re, and their are not interchangeable!

When in doubt, use these references:
http://www.grammarbook.com/
http://thesaurus.com/
http://dictionary.reference.com/
http://en.wikipedia.org

Process:
1. Author submits manuscript
2. Manuscript is accepted/rejected
3. Accepted manuscript is sent to Editor with estimated publishing date
4. Editor does first edit, sends to Author, with corresponding edits until both are happy with final product. (This is the line edit stage). All correspondence between editor and author should CC the EIC.
5. Editor sends manuscript on to EIC who then sends it to a proofreader to check it.
6. Proof Reader returns manuscript to EIC who then checks the MS for changes made and again corresponds with the author for and necessary changes.
7. Errata is sent to author. Once author finishes Errata, it is returned to editor.
8. Once editing is finalized, EIC sends it on to CEO for the galley edits.
9. Manuscript is published.

EIC: (Editor In Chief) Jeff
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ok gav, here is my list so far

1. on the top of the screen, the blue banner does not extend all the way across. so the unead mail and friends online section is whatever color the screen you are on is. if background white, cannot see numbers.



I am not having that issue, btw...and I usually have screen issues because I'm always on my little netbook...
A reminder that DWB has a children's book line..."Because the cubs like to read too!"...

So, all you kiddie book writers, check it out...and DWB is very equitable to its authors...

DWB Publishing Children's Line
http://dwbchildrensline.com/
Yeah, thanks Elaine...I don't poor Gav to get bored...

Btw, it looks like there is only one story listed under "Story Picks For October" and I just checked to make sure, and there was most definitely more than one story posted here last month, and with at least six votes...
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3 of 2 people thought this was funny!



Hmmm...still thinking about that one Adele...trying to work it out on my fingers actually...

Give me time, I'll get it...
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Friday 04 November - Firework party later and i have the same thought every year i must not drink whilst lighting fireworks but somehow it never turns out that way !!!


If you didn't drink, you probably wouldn't be lighting fireworks in the first place...

Just a theory...