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Annie can count on a comment from me, too! She always creates superior stories. I'll look forward to reading it.

Meanwhile, I've just submitted another "Bear & Girl" story, so hopefully, it will be out in a couple of days.

I think I'll take a Bear-sized mug of Red Rose back to Sara's Seat and see if Annie's story's out yet.

I was sorry to hear of Larry's passing. I didn't know him well, but he always had a kind, encouraging word, and wrote stories that were a cut above anything I can produce.

I sense that StoriesSpace will miss him more than I'm aware.

As Jeff said, Hug those whom you love.

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I’ve had carcinomas removed. My most recent diagnosis has me doing a few rounds of a topical chemo to avoid having part of my lips removed. Interestingly enough, docs are convinced that my issues stem from sunburns I got as a child years ago. Seems unfair. Back in the day, we ran around outside all summer long. We didn’t know about sunscreen.

Good luck with that ear. Sending positive vibes.

Ditto!

I remember in the summers, I would throw on some undies, a pair of shorts, sometimes a t-shirt, and go outside and play all day. No shoes, no sunscreen, no telling Mom where I was going…just go.

And yes, I've had much the same thing happen to me. Basal cells on my forehead, which I've had treated, and some sun-damaged skin. Not because of what I do now – very careful in the sun now – but because of what I did when I was too young, dumb, and happy!

So, busy day, winding down. I've got a new Bear & Girl story out – and Kat has a lovely poem, you know – one of those thingies with rhymes and meter and stuff?

Her poem is Body Language

And Jeff has a love poem that starts, improbably enough, in a dentist's chair! Dentistry

Ah, but MY story has an even shorter title: Less

(yawns) Oh, and some smart alec stuck a Valentine's heart on my back! Humans!

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Spring Training starts tomorrow!!!

…and every team is undefeated! YEA!

Not sure about the off-season moves by the Jays. I like the guys coming in, but we gave up two heart-of-the-order hitters to improve the defense, and the players we have now tend to be injury-prone. If everything goes well (and when does it?), they'll do great. Otherwise…"wait until next year"!

But, as Howard Cosell used to say, "That's why they play the games!"

Thanks, Mendalla.

The story has been posted!

It's called: Mardi Gris, and it's…well, you'll have to see for yourself.

I'll join you in a Red Rose – if'n we can find a mug big enough – plus a couple of Sara's GF cookies, please.

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sniffs I smell BASEBALL in the air ..spring training games start the 24th worship

Superbowl is on Sunday

Hi peeps!

A large hot chocolate with mini marshmallows would be fantastic.

It's been a day .

My friend Jolene's funeral is Saturday morning I'm not looking forward to it I know I'm bawl like a baby .

peeks in the cookie jars yay in good shape.

giving the adorable critters fresh water and treats

But atleast my today list for the day is DONE

grabbing a couple of cookies and a mug of hot chocolate and climbing up in my favorite overstuffed chair

Sorry to hear about your friend, Sara.

Maybe the fact that pitchers and catchers report on Monday will cheer you a bit.

Hi everyone. It's been a busy period of time for me – for most of us, I'd guess.

I've just submitted my entry for the comp, which means I will be able to start reading the other entries – when I can find the time! My story is a very different take on Mardi Gras, so…

I've got Red Rose black tea and Typhoo Green Tea in pots on the side, and some fine Kona coffee in the pot.

I'm going to mosey on back to Sara's Space with a Bear-sized mug o' Red Rose and some GF cookies, and see if I can't at least get a start on reading the entries.

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Hi peeps

A chilly day here and I'm the first in here in a couple of days

Emptying out the coffee pot and tea kettle and washing them out then filling the tea kettle with fresh water and today's coffee is Cafe du Monde . Today's teas are lemon zinger and Earl Grey .. and there Is a tea chest filled with other teas and a wooden box filled with a variety of hot chocolate.. and there is baskets filled with creams, sugar ,artificial sweeteners, lemons and marshmallows.

*emptying out the cookie jar crumbs and washing them out and drying them .. while they dry we will use Mickey and Minnie mouse cookie jars for today's Disney themed cookies....

filling the cookie jars.. mickey gets theme cookies and Minnie gets cinnamon and honey graham Scooby snacks

giving the adorable critters fresh water and treats

Pouring a large hot chocolate with a splash of coffee and a mountain of mini marshmallows and climbing up in my favorite overstuffed chair

My friend that i wrote the story A Survivor Tail about died Saturday afternoon I spent Sunday being whiney . But she's no longer in pain so that's a blessing.

Hug your people tight .

Great cookies Sara! Gonna see if there are any GF cookies like that, then grab me some and retreat.

Sorry to hear about your friend, kiddo!

Favourite Disney movies, eh? Hmmm…Mary Poppins, perhaps? The original Parent Trap, with a young and luscious Hayley Mills? Or the remake with Lindsey Lohan, before she blew up her career?

And Robin Hood, of course, with Brian Bedford as Robin!

Jungle Book, absolutely! I was Bagheera in our Cub pack when I first started as a Scout leader, so definitely Jungle Book!

Lemme get things started here …

I've rinsed out the kettle as well as the coffee pot. We've got Red Rose and Twinings' Lemon Ginger teas in pots on the side. We're running Sir William's Lousiana Creole dark roast coffee today, in honour of the Mardi Gras competition.

I have an idea for the comp, but have to find time to actually write it. Not sure it will amount to anything, but I gotta try. However, Real Life is intruding, and I'm doing a detailed analysis of whether to install solar panels on our new (to us) house or not - and if so, to overbuild with the intention of disconnecting the natural gas heat and water heater and going all electric.

Decisions, decisions!

Nice to see Lady Sharon here! Good morning!

And good morning to everyone else! Gonna take me a mug of Red Rose back to Sara's Spot and set a while, perhaps read some.

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A to-do list is like a room full of rabbits. Turn your back and the to-dos start breeding. 😕

Nice simile, Mendalla! I may just steal that, file the serial numbers off, and claim it as my own!

With a fresh paint job, of course.

I have a new "Bear & Girl" story out: Fires in the Field, if anyone cares.

Actually, it's out whether anyone cares or not! Blame the management!

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Coffee, tea, or whatever your beverage of choice might be…

All drinks are on me today! ☕️🫖🧋

January was apparently a successful writing month for me here on SS. I managed to snag a top author and a top story badge overnight. My back is feeling well patted and I appreciate my friends here who have read and liked my stories. Thanks!! 😎

Hubby comes home today, YAY! I’ve slept so poorly this past week. I predict I will sleep like the dead tonight. 😴💤

Hope all y’all have a great day. I’m off soon to take my brother to the eye doc.

Sounds like a good day for our TechGoddess! Well-deserved congratulations on both counts!

After checking, I've made pots of Red Rose and Lemon Zinger teas, and a dark roast Kenyan coffee from Cooper's Coffee Company.

I'll grab some Lemon Zinger and mosey on back to try to catch up on my backlog of reading!

First in, I see.

Well I've got Red Rose and Matcha Green teas in pots, and a dark roasted Tanzanian Peaberry coffee in the pot.

Thanks to Serendipitous Sara for the Superb Snacks!

I'm going to take a Bear-sized mug of Matcha green back to Sara's Spot, and try to come up with an idea for the comp.

Take care, y'all!

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Hard to concentrate lately. So much to do and no interest in getting it accomplished. Nothing I can do. So helpless.

I get times like that, too. When I do, I select something I really want to do, and promise myself I can do it – once I've done something I need to do, like pay bills.

Or you can use Robert Benchley's technique. He would set out 5 things he needed to do, select the top one, and sit down to do it. No sooner than he started it then he would feel the need to do something else – so he would do another one of his 5 things to avoid doing #1. Then he would sit down to do the first thing again – and get distracted by one of the other tasks, and so on.

The first thing might never get finished, but he found that the others did.

It's a thought.

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It's been a busy week with various appointments for my Dad. He loves them because he enjoys talking with everyone and never stops. He exhausts everyone around him. But after he gets clearance from his doctors, he can have surgery.

For some reason, I am having difficulty dealing with losing my cat, Apollo. I wonder if it's because we don't have any pets now. When Hannibal died, we still had his brother. I wake up thinking he is on the bed with me. He acted more like a dog and would greet me at the door and follow me everywhere. We'd watch tv, and he'd even get up and follow me into the bathroom. I'm grateful for the extra time we had with him. He accidentally got out five years ago and was missing for five weeks. So these past five years were a bonus. He was such a sweet comfort when stress was too much.

It's going to be a quiet weekend. I see several naps in my future. I hope everyone has a great weekend.

Cheers!

My brother and his wife recently lost the last of three cats – a mother and two brothers. The last of the brothers recently died, and they were bereft as well. They had a simple solution: they got two kittens, also brothers. Brother and SIL certainly miss their previous cats, but the kittens don't give them a lot of time to brood about it.

I went to bed last night with ZERO ideas for the Mardi Gras comp, and woke up with a rather unsettling one. We'll see if it settles or not.

Meanwhile, I got the coffee started, Ethiopian, where coffee first originated a thousand years ago. I don't THINK these beans are that old, but you never know!

And we have pots of Red Rose and Prince Of Peace Organic Oolong teas.

Meanwhile, I have a new story out in "The Bear & the Girl" series:

The Fall

Hope y'all like it.

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(puts blanket over sleeping Gillian, tip-toes away)

OK, I'm gonna get things started, but try to be quiet about it. Let's let Gillian sleep, if she can. Poor kid.

We have pots of Red Rose and Assam black teas available, plus lots of gerbil teas in the box, as well as other fine teas.

Coffee is perkin' away, and we're gonna stick with the N'Oleans roast, in celebration of One of Our Own being there! Have some beignets for us, Mendalla!

And, of course, Sara's Scrumptious Snacks are nestled all snug in the containers, just waiting to be selected and savoured!

There you go! The day has begun.

(tip-toes off to Sara's Space to imbibe a Bear-sized mug of Assam tea)

Morning, everybody! With Mendalla still AWL (Absent WITH Leave), I've put out pots of Red Rose and Darjeeling teas, plus some N'Oleans Cajun roast coffee, in acknowledgment that he's now in New Orleans enjoying the cuisine (and the nightlife?) and we're not!

Plus Sara, the cookie fairie, has blessed us with yummy offerings, so…we've set sail on a new week! Enjoy it!

Good morning, everybody! Let's get things rolling, even if we are a bit behind.

Tea's maid…I mean, made…Red Rose and Irish Breakfast in pots on the sideboard.

Sachets of hot chocolate with mini-marshmallows for the sweeter set.

And coffee is ready, too, something more exotic – Turkish coffee today, dark, thick, and sweet!

And how is everybody doing this fine Friday the 13th? Anybody afflicted with triskaidekaphobia?

If so, then take a black cat, and go hide under a ladder!

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Thanks for the set-up, James.

Glad to hear from you Scott. I'm a little jelly, a cruise is on my bucket list, and I think we will probably do one soon.

No Talia Thursday. My novel critique group has THREE novels in it currently, so I've got some homework between now and Saturday. PLUS two stories to critique for Monday critique. Dang. Lotsa reading ahead

Meanwhile, I'm knee-deep in chapter 4, and wondering if chapter lengths should all be similar. Thoughts?

Roland, my team is the Mets (thanks for asking).

A coffee and a Deputy Dawg cookie!

My feeling about chapter length is – it depends. Just as a paragraph should focus on one idea (as expressed by the topic sentence), a chapter should explore, expose, and expound on one facet or aspect of your story. Unless, of course, you are William Faulkner, in which case you don't give a fig.

So, a chapter may be long or short, but I wouldn't artificially tailor them towards a specific length. If you do, some will be too hurried (to cram in all the necessary stuff), and some too wordy, as you stretch the content to fit the word count.

That's the way it seems to me, at least.

I remember John Brunner (a science fiction author) once tried to sell a book (I don't remember which one) based on the title, but the publisher wanted the first chapter before he bought it. Brunner grabbed a piece of paper, and wrote a one-word chapter: "I–"

Special circumstance, of course, and the second chapter began, "–solationism," then carried on from there. But it's a pretty good example of why chapter length can vary enormously.

Well! A surprise visit by the vacationing Mendalla! Hope he's enjoying the warm weather. It's fashionably cool up here in Ontario – as he'll find out when he returns.

Hmmm…

He didn't do any of the setup, so let's get it started.

The kettle is steaming away, ready for hot chocolate or infusion drinks. The teas on the sideboard are Red Rose and Darjeeling, and we're using Teaberry Arabica from Tanzania for coffee today.

Plus, of course, we have Sara's Scrumptious Sweets for Suitable Scoffers.

Help yourselves, and keep us posted on any new stories!

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Doc says I have to wait until Friday to start round 2 of treatment since I’m still not 100% from the stomach bug that derailed me for nearly a week. But it’s supposed to be chilly this weekend so I won’t be missing much. It will be a good weekend to catch up on some reading

If there are any stories here you wish had gotten more attention along the way, feel free to drop me a message or, better yet, post the link for me here!

Good luck with the treatments, Kat! You'll get there.

If you're interested in a talking Bear (ridiculous premise, right?) discussing philosophy, cosmology, and the existence of God, then try Of God and Bear. If not, then don't!

I'm hoping to extend the "Bear and Girl" series. I have several stories finished, but need to punch them into shape.

Thanks for taking care of that, Sara! With Mendalla away, and me being tied up with our 2-year-old granddaughter, I didn't get in until late!

Chilly here, but that's kinda what we expect in January (not you, Annie, but us Northern Hemisphere types), but it's been GREY for days and days. Lady Jay is solar powered, and gets run down and grumpy when it's like this, so I'm praying for sunshine – and soon!

Trust me – Jay is an amazing woman, but you DON'T want to be in the vicinity when she gets grumpy!

With Mendalla on vacation, SOMEBODY's gotta get things running!

The kettle is ready to serve, there are pots of Red Rose and Lemon Zinger teas available on the side.

Coffee is hot and ready, with a special blend from a friend of mine – Lousiana Creole dark roast, with water straight from the Bayou.

And, of course, treats are available courtesy of the Cookie Angel – Sara!

Take care out there, folks. We got some freezing rain overnight, and I almost wiped out when I stepped out on the porch to pick up the newspaper!

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Thank you, Bear. As I'm now retired, everyday is the weekend. I'll have a coffee but must give the cookies a miss. I put on a few pounds over Christmas.

You should be a Polar Bear! We Bears LIVE on fat, and a few kilos extra are just BEAR-ly enough!

Applications at the Front Office. Ask for the Big Guy…

Good morning, everybody!

The kettle is on, there are pots of Red Rose and Earl Grey on the side.

Coffee is hot and ready to go.

And, as always, there are Sara's Sensational Snacks to be had in the cookie jars!

Enjoy the day – even if it is Monday!

❤️☕️😉

I know that Mendalla is away on a well-deserved vacation (or at least away…), so let me fire up the kettle, make a couple of pots of Red Rose and Earl Grey tea, plus some coffee for those so inclined.

There are Sara's delicious cookies in the tins (including GF cookies in Quick-Draw McGraw!), so help yourselves!

Other than football, anything going on around town? The Lady wife and I went out early to do some errands, getting the stores in question early before the crowds. We've never gone very far from our 2020 caution, and now with the new, more infectious variant of COVID, we are pretty much back to where we were in late 2021.

But that includes writing, fortunately. I have a bunch of Bear and Girl stories that I've written, but never published, and will try to post some in the next few days.

Take care, everyone! It's still dangerous out there.

Well done, you three – Verbal, Ping, and Kat! And well done all top ten! It was a fun comp, and the winners certainly deserve it!

YEA! Congratulations! 🍷