Cheating husband quaffs greedily. Catches wife's eager celebration. Realises, dies.

Where have all the spooks got to? Just over one week to deadline and only seven entries so far. Maybe there will be a last minute avalanche. But it just occurred to me, spooks always wait for the 'dead'-line!

I hardly need to plug my own story with kindly folk like Mendalla around. But walking blindly into this spot I am most grateful and can now understand why the story has fewer viewers than others. Thank you, Mendalla. The historical background to my story owes much to the influence of Henrietta Fielding. Also, I just got started with no real idea of direction when I asked Anna May Zing if she thought a Spooky tale could have a happy ending with just a touch of remaining mystery. From that moment it took flight, and just made the length requirement without any cutting. So, yes, please try it, if you have the time. Here it is:

https://www.storiesspace.com/stories/supernatural/out-of-the-lake

Thank you for your prompt response. I  was always aware of how much the story length was more than I intended. I spent ages editing each section so I agree about it being too long. But you will know that when you get entangled with editing , it becomes a trial of will. I'll bear all the points you make.

What I am furious with myself about is the change to 'first person'. I had done that in four places (when I was tired, my excuse). But I was sure I had dug all those errors out. On the old site it was easy to edit an already published story, perhaps you could let me know if that facility still exists.

I really appreciate the time you have given in responding so helpfully. Much to bear in mind. Now for that 'Spooky' tale. Thank you.

I would appreciate opinions of my recent fictional piece, verified yesterday, and placed under the uncertain banner of 'Romance'----title 'Twice Upon A Time'. 

I've never asked for comment before---but confidence is waining.

 Waking each morning, I find I'm still here. Thank God.