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All I want to know is, will I ever get my comments back. They really do mean so much to me. Thank you

I looked at your play and saw my comment there. Are you missing some?

I like the changes for the most part, though I'm not really looking around that much. I think most of the changes impact a smaller site like SS in a good way. I agree with the One True Ping that larger sites, such as the vermillion-adjacent one, are gonna freak the f out. Eventually the dust will clear, but I'm thinking many will have to be brought kicking and screaming to the new format. Life is change. Change is life.

My favorite country songwriter (other than Merle and Willie) died today. Tom T Hall. wrote story songs, and was an astonishingly good storyteller. My Dad loved him too and passed that love to me. I learned yesterday not to post videos with text, since the text disappears, but PLEASE give The Year Clayton Delaney Died a listen today if you find the chance. If I ever write anything half as good as that song I'll die a happy man. 

Hey - a thought! With the new site, can we get a liquor licence for the place? At least one that allows for beer and wine? Or even (gasp!) a cannabis consumption licence (a real thing, they have them here, legal and everything)?

For now, a coffee. And a cookie!     

Ooh, ooh, I just got my first email (thanks Ping)! I really like the display of the email and previous emails.

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Verity, you wrote a play!?  Too cool. That's truly pushing the creative envelope both here and at the other sites. Hundreds of thousands of stories, and has anyone written a play before now? Super impressive. My apologies if I'm missing someone's writing.  


I have thought about writing a play before but I am really not familiar enough with the stage to do it. Haven't read much modern drama either. I think the most recent play I have read was Miller's Death of a Salesman. I was thinking at one point I might hunt up an amateur theatre company to join both to try my hand at acting and so I could get a feel for it, but that's another thing that the pandemic has sidelined.
Ooh, we can click on the genre and see! Cool! I'll go look too!


EDIT: Hey, Larry wrote one!

Dang. I hate 2 Factor Auth, though I understand the need. I hope that if we are NOT mods/admins, we don't have to use it. 

Good morning everyone, and welcome to the first full day of the new SS! It looks pretty cool, and the shakedown is slowly showing us the capabilities and limitations of the new site. I can get to new stories and new posts, which is all I ever did before. Set up a sig line. I haven't started playing around with comments and votes, but I will soon.

Verity, you wrote a play!?  Too cool. That's truly pushing the creative envelope both here and at the other sites. Hundreds of thousands of stories, and has anyone written a play before now? Super impressive. My apologies if I'm missing someone's writing.  

No Talia Friday. I haven't seen the cats yet today. I think they are hiding from me. Rehearsals for our feline+human production of Damn Yankees did not go well. Frikkin divas. In the middle of You Gotta Have Heart, Wallace hocked up a hairball.

Coffee and a dolphin shaped cookie please.

 


So far, the most useful things I've found to quickly get around are the two buttons in the upper right. Stories for latest stories, and forum>new posts to see what's recently been posted (I really like that feature!). Still looking around. I like it!  

Hey, the new site is too cool! I feel so fancy!

Still finding my way around. Wait! Here is the coffee, and here are Sara’s cookie jars. Yum. I need nothing else. smile

Mets finally won a game, though it took them several extra innings. And now we have to play the frikkin Dodgers. Sigh.

Busy day today, so I will get to it.

A coffee and a cookie would be swell.





Thanks for the set-up Larry.

Glad everything is running smoothly again here. It's like the ground is rumbling, as we ready ourselves for...the change.

<insert gif from random disaster movie here>

The prompt entries have been too cool. It's a fun idea. I hope it continues. I'll continue to try to hone my negligible micro skills.

It's No Talia Wednesday here in Verbaltown (she was gonna have to go back full time but they cancelled it at the last minute - yay!). I'm teaching the cats interpretive dance today.

The Mets are SOOOOOOO BAAAAAAAAAAD. That's enough said about that. Hope Roland is dong okay.

Coffee and...let's see...a jellyfish shaped cookie please!
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Hey Every-Body,

Anyone see the Field of Dreams special the other night?

I only saw the entrance from the cornfields and all the players take the field. Still emotional. Damn music and father/son thingie.

Gotta go. Later…


Yeah. I watched it late. I'm a sucker for that stuff. Baseball, fathers and sons, America's Pastime, if-you-build-it-they-will-come, yadayadayada. I eat it all up.

And I say this as the Mets are in freefall toward the basement of the NL East. Yikes! Glad Sara's Braves are doing well. They deserve it.

Looking forward to your story, O One True Ping. And Scott's monster story too.

Finally finished my dog park story. Now I get to edit it into shape, and it's a bit of a mess. Booooring. Such is my life these days.

It's nice to see the Forum up to speed again. Rumors from another site say the switch will happen Thursday.

Coffee time. Which means, cookie time!
Hey, I got in!

Hope everyone is well.

The Mets had a lost weekend, and now sit with their backs broken in third place.

Sara's Braves now sit atop the NL East.

We watched the first 7 episodes of M Night Shalamabam's Servent on Apple TV. Still hanging in through the end, but man, I'm gonna be pissed if he can't pull all these threads together. I am skeptical he can. But hey, it's free for 3 months with my new iPad, and the only other thing on Apple TV is The Morning Show (which is pretty good).

I really am gonna finish that dog park story today.

Peace, everyone. A coffee and a giant sugar cookie please.
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Trying to get all my outdoor tasks done as early as possible this week. It has been in the high nineties with lovely accompanying humidity, so it's too hot and dangerous to be outside working for long.

I hate to wish time or summer away, but I am tired of sweating because I walked outside.

I hope everyone is doing well. I'll be in the corner catching up on some reading and eating some cookies.

Now I'm eagerly awaiting the change over to the new platform.

Have a good day, and stay cool, everyone.

Cheers!


Ugh. Low 90s here, and lotsa smoke from California. It's better today than it's been. My afternoon walk is a chore. Still, I do it. I LOVE my afternoon walk. First I have to earn it by writing.

The inspirator stories are so good. I know I've missed some, I'll go through the stories later today.

My critique group is tomorrow. Imposter Syndrome is rearing its ugly head. I don't have any writing in it tomorrow, but I'm submitting for next month. It's a little scary. They kinda ripped up (and rightly so) my first submission.

Talia goes back to work full time today. Wah. The cats and I are going to greet her with showtunes when she gets home. Currently we're practicing "Oklahoma!"

Coffee and hundreds and thousands of Sara's fabu cookies.
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Lovin’ the injection of energy on the site.

As per Nicola, the new look SS has an ETA of a few days. After several years of dormancy, we’ve had a few competitions, and with the latest competition, and now the Challenge, SS is on the right track. Funny thing, a disco song about survival just popped into my head. New members. Old members revived. All good stuff. I can see the voluntary offering of ten dollars per annum to cover the cost of competition prizes. The more entries, the more in the kitty to help offset operating costs. But patience. The good ship SS needs to get launched and be reintroduced to the sea first.

What do y’all think about a competition-challenge repeating pattern?

I like it. Have a gap of a week or two between each. One involves judging and some formality, and the other is a friendly outreach for common-themed stories. I haven’t done the math, but this formula could see four to six of each format each calendar year. Now that it appears SS survived a near fatality, it needs to better look after its health. Consider competitions and challenges like regular exercise. They help to keep the interest up and creative juices flowing. Okay, that sounded way dirtier than intended.

Anyway, busy day today. Thanks to those that read my latest. I’ll respond in kind shortly.

Rump, I’ll take a travel mug of that pine tar you call coffee. Darn. I just thought about something. The only batting cage our area has was removed the make way for progress and ‘the public good’. Tragic. It’s something I’d love to take my kids too and swat away our daily frustrations. I guess it’s the driving range we go… until a new batting cage materializes. Sadly, my kids are not allowed to partake in the local offering of ax throwing. I’ve seen them play darts. No ax throwing is probably a good thing.

Good day to you all!



I love the idea of a "friendly outreach for common theme stories." The current one is so relaxed and chill, and I liked that so many people helped me tweak my micro (not a euphemism) (if you read it early on, it's fixed-ish). It takes a village! The big contests are fun, and good for outreach, but between here and the other site I'm comped out for awhile. It's too nerve-wracking.

Another double header today. The Mets actually WON yesterday.

Sadly, i have to go to the dentist today.

I have a path forward on a new novel I think. I still won't start for a month or two. Wait for the perfect pressure of ideas against the front of my head, so when I start, the ideas fly out.

Today, in story land, the guy obsessed with the woman in the dog park gets attacked by...you guessed it...a dog!

I guess, due to the dentist, I'll skip my cookie today. But I'd still love some coffee!
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I both love and hate that there's no deadline. As I always say, I'll get to it... eventually.


You have until the end of next week! Better?


No rules! No structure! Smash the state! Free the words!
I'm on it, like green chili on French fries.

Submitting now. smile
Hello everyone.

So far all I've got is that the girl in the hoodie and the Vans is a robot. Sometimes I feel like a 12 year old boy.

Hey Roland, try this: I've been carrying my Dad's pocket knife with me since he died. It's not much, but there's comfort in it, and it's even come in handy. Also, you could write about it. You'd certainly have a rapt audience here reading your words.

No Talia day. I am slowly daring myself to get my sh1t together and try to write a novel, and today I'm gonna try to sketch it out on art paper. It should be fun! The cats may help. And I can watch the Mets lose to Elisabeth's Nats TWICE as I write and draw.

LOTS of coffee and some SACs (Sara's Amazing Cookies). Give that lil monkey a hug.
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Hi my friends.

I have been off my rocker for a few days but started feeling better last night. I am falling so far behind on my reading. Please accept my apology.

I love my father, but he believed in so many of the right-wing conspiracies like Covid-19 was a hoax. So he did not get the vaccine. Last week he got sick. He would not go to the doctor because he did not think it was serious. My sister and her husband, who live with my father, made him go to the hospital on Sunday night with labored breathing and a fever. When they arrived My sister and her husband had their temperatures taken to get in the hospital and found out they both had fevers too. All three were tested and were positive for Covid-19. Last night my father died of Covid-19. My sister and her husband both had their vaccines. My sister still has a slight fever and a sore throat and her husband no longer has any symptoms. Next week I will be going to Charlotte, NC with my family for his funeral.

I am heartbroken and upset. I can not help but think my father threw his life away because of the lies he listened to and believed.

Until I return from the funeral, I will not be writing much, but I will try to read some. I am sure that reading your stories will help keep me sane for the next two weeks.

Death is a part of life, just like birth, happiness, love, and tragedy.

Till later. Be safe, happy, and continue being the great people you are.

Laughter is healing, so remember; chameleons who can not change color are suffering from reptile dysfunction.


Oh, Dude, I am so sorry. What can you say about the death of fathers? It’s a loss no one is prepared to comprehend, because it’s so…big. It leaves a mighty hole. My thoughts are with you.

Don’t linger on the anti-mask/COVID/science crowd. Linger on the memories.

I was happy to meet you on the Forum here, and have someone to talk baseball with. I will be patiently waiting your return. Take care friend.
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I've been meaning to pop over and have a mooch for months. Finally summoned the resolve and conjured a profile (which I have yet to completer.)

I'm hoping a change of colour will inspire me to write a bit more than I have of late. The well has run dry.

Great to be here. See you guys about.



Hey, nice to see you.

I doubt your writing well will ever run truly dry. Just an arid patch. Looking forward to more of your stories.
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Has anyone have any ideas for a comp story about Tam's baby with Verbal and/or Ping? Monsters, horror, sci-fi?


It’s true love, baby. Like real men, Verbs and I didn’t have to do a thing. Tams did all the work. Well, I did say it was immaculate conception. So, really, no one did anything. It just happened.

Oh God, I just know it’s mine!


Yeah, all I had to do was fill out a form. Republic of Gilead, I think? Tam did all the work.

But he will be a happy and well-loved child! Part radioactive, due to his dominant Godzilla genes, and part motorcycles stuntman, due to Ping's recent Evil Knievel fixation.

See? He's laughing!

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My dad finally retiring ..😃🙌🎊 finally!!



Smart man. I bet he enjoys it greatly.
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Thanks for the coffee set up, Larry.

Despite my botching of the english language (and yes, I agree there are far too many confusing words), Mrs Rambles has kicked off the first-line story challenge with a wonderful piece. Which can be found here: https://www.storiesspace.com/stories/micro-fiction/-the-invisible-girl-.aspx

I'm fighting some sort of cold. I'm fully vaxed but went to the walk-in clinic over the weekend, just to be safe. Tests came back negative for covid and the delta variant, so I guess there are still other viruses out there all vying for our attention. Under normal circumstances, I wouldn't have minded giving it to them. But now I can't help but wonder if every time I get sick, I will feel the need to get tested. Ugh...

Hope you all are having a wonderful start to the week!


Could only be one other thing… you’re pregnant.

CONGRATULATIONS!!!

If it’s a boy, please name him, Verbs. If it’s a girl, please name her, Ping.

If you have one of each, or more, any variation of PinglyVerbs or VerballyPing will do nicely.

Immaculate conception. What a concept!


Just spent three hours in the dentist chair. A very old (probably older than our mother-to-be) crown broke. Lots of prep. But we’re good to go again until the permanent crown is made.

Toffee, gum, and anything sticky and chewy, please. I want to test my dentist’s proficiency.

Smile. It’s Monday. No more Olympics.


Tams is having Ping's and my secret love child!? What a selfless gesture! A product of the combined gene pool of Ping and Verbs: what could possibly go wrong?

PinglyVerbs. Perbal! Ving!

I think perhaps I've had a little too much coffee....
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This weekend has been very hot, sweaty and hot, humid and hot. Spent it with husband visiting a vast number of antique malls in PA. Not very good a/c in these old buildings and just walking and walking and every now and then saying "how about this?" To which his usual reply is "nah, we have too many of those". Nice motel though with thoroughly European feel. Only open a week and lacking a few things "that got delayed in the supply line". Lovely breakfast and more hours slogging through more antique malls.
Finally home and feet up for maybe a week.
Oh, and Verbs - welcome to my world. How does it feel being one above the Nationals? Sorry. Don't even get me started on why, why, why the trades were made to the Dodgers. Gnashing teeth every time I think about it.



I think it was just time to move on from the core of that 2019 team that won the World Series. That was an astonishingly fun team to watch, Sherzer and Strasburg were such a strong one-two punch. You'll be good again in a couple years, with lots of young (cheap!) prospects. As opposed to the Mets, who are just flat out unable to score a run.

But hey, it's a sunny day, and Talia is feeling well again, and I finally figured out was is up with the haunting grey-eyed lady in the dog park (SHE'S FICTIONAL!).

Gotta disagree with the "too many words" thing, Pingo. Like every sperm being sacred, every word is perfect for some sentence somewhere. I say, more words! Ever increasing ways to express ourselves! Let out teenagers invent new weird slang, let Urban Dictionary overflow with their obscene and misspent vocabulary, let sports and space travel fling new words into our mouths like popcorn!

Whew. That took a lot out of me. Hope everyone is well.

Coffee and a cookie please.
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Hi everyone
A beautiful day here
A large coffee would be fantastic
Me and miss Molly the monkey are gonna help in the church nursery this morning.
Scott that's a good idea I'm sure each animal who visits have an idea what they like .

*Moving the old cookies to the emergency cookie tins behind the counter and filling the cookie jars to the tippy top with fresh cookies.*
In Big Bird we have pecan divines, oatmeal raisin cookies, chocolate orange cookies and snickerdoodles
In Cookie Monster we have ginger snaps, white chocolate supremes, chocolate covered cherry cookies and hot chocolate and marshmallow cookies
In Elmo we have lemon cookies, double chocolate hazelnut ,m&m cookies and snickerdoodles

*Giving the adorable critters fresh water and treats*

Off I go to deal with little humans
Stay safe everyone!


SNICKERDOODLES!!! How did you know?

Lazy day today, though yardwork and grocery shopping are both involved. I think we're grilling tonight: a small strip steak, a piece of salmon, some corn on the cob. Yum.

The Mets blow chunks. That is all. First place recedes like the first blush of youth.

We might follow Ping's example and go see Quiet Place 2.

Coffee and a SNICKERDOODLE please!!!
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Oh my, Mr Mendalla. How could you think such a thing about a sweet old lady like me.


Never said it about you, just about that story. And if mine was in any way an influence, you are welcome. I don't think I have ever been cited as an influence (other than a bad one ) before.


Don’t worry, I’ve got the bad influence thing going on in spades. smile

I can’t think of a danged thing for the prompt. Looking forward to what everyone else does with it.

The Mets have officially fallen from first place. They left 15 runners on base in 9 innings. How does a team even to that?

Great comp going on at another site, btw.

Talia went to bed headache-y and tired, and woke up feeling the same. I suspect I am playing nurse to her today. Give her some healing thoughts!

Me, I don’t need healing thoughts, I need frikking coffee!
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I really like your idea Verbs, but I am (among other things) extremely tech-challenged. I want to avoid creating more work for the mods by having to help insert pics into the body of the story.

I also like Ping's suggestion. My fear (pun intended) is that Halloween is right around the corner and I wouldn't want to step on the toes of a possible future comp. I do like the thought of keeping the stories light and fun.

My idea is that I will throw down an opening line. So many fantastic stories start with killer first lines; Call me Ishmael...or...Mother died today, or maybe yesterday; I can't be sure. Not saying mine is killer, but it seems like it will be fun to see where each person takes the line.

Here is what I have come up with for rules:

- I will give a first-line prompt, every story must have that line as the open.
- From there you are free to take it where ever you'd like and in whatever category and length you choose.
- Please make sure to follow storiespace guidelines for acceptable content.
- Please include Inspirators as a tag. Make sure it is spelled exactly that way so when we click on the tag, it will isolate all of our stories on one page.
- This is just a challenge and all for fun, no prizes or awards will be given out.
- There is no time limit for entries.

Here is your first-line prompt...have fun with it!

"To everyone in the room, she seemed like just a normal girl wearing Vans, bluejeans, and a red hoodie."




On this like sugar on cookies!

Hello everyone. Hugs to those who need them! Just help yourself.

Mets lost AGAIN. Sigh. We could lose first place tonight. Big series against the Phillies.

No Talia today. The cats and I are going to build a Duplicator! She's come home to two of me, and four of them!

Blerg. Still waking up. Coffee and a sugar cookie would do the trick!