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Thanks for the set-up Larry.

Glad everything is running smoothly again here. It's like the ground is rumbling, as we ready ourselves for...the change.

<insert gif from random disaster movie here>

The prompt entries have been too cool. It's a fun idea. I hope it continues. I'll continue to try to hone my negligible micro skills.

It's No Talia Wednesday here in Verbaltown (she was gonna have to go back full time but they cancelled it at the last minute - yay!). I'm teaching the cats interpretive dance today.

The Mets are SOOOOOOO BAAAAAAAAAAD. That's enough said about that. Hope Roland is dong okay.

Coffee and...let's see...a jellyfish shaped cookie please!
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Hey Every-Body,

Anyone see the Field of Dreams special the other night?

I only saw the entrance from the cornfields and all the players take the field. Still emotional. Damn music and father/son thingie.

Gotta go. Later…


Yeah. I watched it late. I'm a sucker for that stuff. Baseball, fathers and sons, America's Pastime, if-you-build-it-they-will-come, yadayadayada. I eat it all up.

And I say this as the Mets are in freefall toward the basement of the NL East. Yikes! Glad Sara's Braves are doing well. They deserve it.

Looking forward to your story, O One True Ping. And Scott's monster story too.

Finally finished my dog park story. Now I get to edit it into shape, and it's a bit of a mess. Booooring. Such is my life these days.

It's nice to see the Forum up to speed again. Rumors from another site say the switch will happen Thursday.

Coffee time. Which means, cookie time!
Hey, I got in!

Hope everyone is well.

The Mets had a lost weekend, and now sit with their backs broken in third place.

Sara's Braves now sit atop the NL East.

We watched the first 7 episodes of M Night Shalamabam's Servent on Apple TV. Still hanging in through the end, but man, I'm gonna be pissed if he can't pull all these threads together. I am skeptical he can. But hey, it's free for 3 months with my new iPad, and the only other thing on Apple TV is The Morning Show (which is pretty good).

I really am gonna finish that dog park story today.

Peace, everyone. A coffee and a giant sugar cookie please.
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Trying to get all my outdoor tasks done as early as possible this week. It has been in the high nineties with lovely accompanying humidity, so it's too hot and dangerous to be outside working for long.

I hate to wish time or summer away, but I am tired of sweating because I walked outside.

I hope everyone is doing well. I'll be in the corner catching up on some reading and eating some cookies.

Now I'm eagerly awaiting the change over to the new platform.

Have a good day, and stay cool, everyone.

Cheers!


Ugh. Low 90s here, and lotsa smoke from California. It's better today than it's been. My afternoon walk is a chore. Still, I do it. I LOVE my afternoon walk. First I have to earn it by writing.

The inspirator stories are so good. I know I've missed some, I'll go through the stories later today.

My critique group is tomorrow. Imposter Syndrome is rearing its ugly head. I don't have any writing in it tomorrow, but I'm submitting for next month. It's a little scary. They kinda ripped up (and rightly so) my first submission.

Talia goes back to work full time today. Wah. The cats and I are going to greet her with showtunes when she gets home. Currently we're practicing "Oklahoma!"

Coffee and hundreds and thousands of Sara's fabu cookies.
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Lovin’ the injection of energy on the site.

As per Nicola, the new look SS has an ETA of a few days. After several years of dormancy, we’ve had a few competitions, and with the latest competition, and now the Challenge, SS is on the right track. Funny thing, a disco song about survival just popped into my head. New members. Old members revived. All good stuff. I can see the voluntary offering of ten dollars per annum to cover the cost of competition prizes. The more entries, the more in the kitty to help offset operating costs. But patience. The good ship SS needs to get launched and be reintroduced to the sea first.

What do y’all think about a competition-challenge repeating pattern?

I like it. Have a gap of a week or two between each. One involves judging and some formality, and the other is a friendly outreach for common-themed stories. I haven’t done the math, but this formula could see four to six of each format each calendar year. Now that it appears SS survived a near fatality, it needs to better look after its health. Consider competitions and challenges like regular exercise. They help to keep the interest up and creative juices flowing. Okay, that sounded way dirtier than intended.

Anyway, busy day today. Thanks to those that read my latest. I’ll respond in kind shortly.

Rump, I’ll take a travel mug of that pine tar you call coffee. Darn. I just thought about something. The only batting cage our area has was removed the make way for progress and ‘the public good’. Tragic. It’s something I’d love to take my kids too and swat away our daily frustrations. I guess it’s the driving range we go… until a new batting cage materializes. Sadly, my kids are not allowed to partake in the local offering of ax throwing. I’ve seen them play darts. No ax throwing is probably a good thing.

Good day to you all!



I love the idea of a "friendly outreach for common theme stories." The current one is so relaxed and chill, and I liked that so many people helped me tweak my micro (not a euphemism) (if you read it early on, it's fixed-ish). It takes a village! The big contests are fun, and good for outreach, but between here and the other site I'm comped out for awhile. It's too nerve-wracking.

Another double header today. The Mets actually WON yesterday.

Sadly, i have to go to the dentist today.

I have a path forward on a new novel I think. I still won't start for a month or two. Wait for the perfect pressure of ideas against the front of my head, so when I start, the ideas fly out.

Today, in story land, the guy obsessed with the woman in the dog park gets attacked by...you guessed it...a dog!

I guess, due to the dentist, I'll skip my cookie today. But I'd still love some coffee!
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I both love and hate that there's no deadline. As I always say, I'll get to it... eventually.


You have until the end of next week! Better?


No rules! No structure! Smash the state! Free the words!
I'm on it, like green chili on French fries.

Submitting now. smile
Hello everyone.

So far all I've got is that the girl in the hoodie and the Vans is a robot. Sometimes I feel like a 12 year old boy.

Hey Roland, try this: I've been carrying my Dad's pocket knife with me since he died. It's not much, but there's comfort in it, and it's even come in handy. Also, you could write about it. You'd certainly have a rapt audience here reading your words.

No Talia day. I am slowly daring myself to get my sh1t together and try to write a novel, and today I'm gonna try to sketch it out on art paper. It should be fun! The cats may help. And I can watch the Mets lose to Elisabeth's Nats TWICE as I write and draw.

LOTS of coffee and some SACs (Sara's Amazing Cookies). Give that lil monkey a hug.
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Hi my friends.

I have been off my rocker for a few days but started feeling better last night. I am falling so far behind on my reading. Please accept my apology.

I love my father, but he believed in so many of the right-wing conspiracies like Covid-19 was a hoax. So he did not get the vaccine. Last week he got sick. He would not go to the doctor because he did not think it was serious. My sister and her husband, who live with my father, made him go to the hospital on Sunday night with labored breathing and a fever. When they arrived My sister and her husband had their temperatures taken to get in the hospital and found out they both had fevers too. All three were tested and were positive for Covid-19. Last night my father died of Covid-19. My sister and her husband both had their vaccines. My sister still has a slight fever and a sore throat and her husband no longer has any symptoms. Next week I will be going to Charlotte, NC with my family for his funeral.

I am heartbroken and upset. I can not help but think my father threw his life away because of the lies he listened to and believed.

Until I return from the funeral, I will not be writing much, but I will try to read some. I am sure that reading your stories will help keep me sane for the next two weeks.

Death is a part of life, just like birth, happiness, love, and tragedy.

Till later. Be safe, happy, and continue being the great people you are.

Laughter is healing, so remember; chameleons who can not change color are suffering from reptile dysfunction.


Oh, Dude, I am so sorry. What can you say about the death of fathers? It’s a loss no one is prepared to comprehend, because it’s so…big. It leaves a mighty hole. My thoughts are with you.

Don’t linger on the anti-mask/COVID/science crowd. Linger on the memories.

I was happy to meet you on the Forum here, and have someone to talk baseball with. I will be patiently waiting your return. Take care friend.
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I've been meaning to pop over and have a mooch for months. Finally summoned the resolve and conjured a profile (which I have yet to completer.)

I'm hoping a change of colour will inspire me to write a bit more than I have of late. The well has run dry.

Great to be here. See you guys about.



Hey, nice to see you.

I doubt your writing well will ever run truly dry. Just an arid patch. Looking forward to more of your stories.
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Has anyone have any ideas for a comp story about Tam's baby with Verbal and/or Ping? Monsters, horror, sci-fi?


It’s true love, baby. Like real men, Verbs and I didn’t have to do a thing. Tams did all the work. Well, I did say it was immaculate conception. So, really, no one did anything. It just happened.

Oh God, I just know it’s mine!


Yeah, all I had to do was fill out a form. Republic of Gilead, I think? Tam did all the work.

But he will be a happy and well-loved child! Part radioactive, due to his dominant Godzilla genes, and part motorcycles stuntman, due to Ping's recent Evil Knievel fixation.

See? He's laughing!

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My dad finally retiring ..😃🙌🎊 finally!!



Smart man. I bet he enjoys it greatly.
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Thanks for the coffee set up, Larry.

Despite my botching of the english language (and yes, I agree there are far too many confusing words), Mrs Rambles has kicked off the first-line story challenge with a wonderful piece. Which can be found here: https://www.storiesspace.com/stories/micro-fiction/-the-invisible-girl-.aspx

I'm fighting some sort of cold. I'm fully vaxed but went to the walk-in clinic over the weekend, just to be safe. Tests came back negative for covid and the delta variant, so I guess there are still other viruses out there all vying for our attention. Under normal circumstances, I wouldn't have minded giving it to them. But now I can't help but wonder if every time I get sick, I will feel the need to get tested. Ugh...

Hope you all are having a wonderful start to the week!


Could only be one other thing… you’re pregnant.

CONGRATULATIONS!!!

If it’s a boy, please name him, Verbs. If it’s a girl, please name her, Ping.

If you have one of each, or more, any variation of PinglyVerbs or VerballyPing will do nicely.

Immaculate conception. What a concept!


Just spent three hours in the dentist chair. A very old (probably older than our mother-to-be) crown broke. Lots of prep. But we’re good to go again until the permanent crown is made.

Toffee, gum, and anything sticky and chewy, please. I want to test my dentist’s proficiency.

Smile. It’s Monday. No more Olympics.


Tams is having Ping's and my secret love child!? What a selfless gesture! A product of the combined gene pool of Ping and Verbs: what could possibly go wrong?

PinglyVerbs. Perbal! Ving!

I think perhaps I've had a little too much coffee....
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This weekend has been very hot, sweaty and hot, humid and hot. Spent it with husband visiting a vast number of antique malls in PA. Not very good a/c in these old buildings and just walking and walking and every now and then saying "how about this?" To which his usual reply is "nah, we have too many of those". Nice motel though with thoroughly European feel. Only open a week and lacking a few things "that got delayed in the supply line". Lovely breakfast and more hours slogging through more antique malls.
Finally home and feet up for maybe a week.
Oh, and Verbs - welcome to my world. How does it feel being one above the Nationals? Sorry. Don't even get me started on why, why, why the trades were made to the Dodgers. Gnashing teeth every time I think about it.



I think it was just time to move on from the core of that 2019 team that won the World Series. That was an astonishingly fun team to watch, Sherzer and Strasburg were such a strong one-two punch. You'll be good again in a couple years, with lots of young (cheap!) prospects. As opposed to the Mets, who are just flat out unable to score a run.

But hey, it's a sunny day, and Talia is feeling well again, and I finally figured out was is up with the haunting grey-eyed lady in the dog park (SHE'S FICTIONAL!).

Gotta disagree with the "too many words" thing, Pingo. Like every sperm being sacred, every word is perfect for some sentence somewhere. I say, more words! Ever increasing ways to express ourselves! Let out teenagers invent new weird slang, let Urban Dictionary overflow with their obscene and misspent vocabulary, let sports and space travel fling new words into our mouths like popcorn!

Whew. That took a lot out of me. Hope everyone is well.

Coffee and a cookie please.
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Hi everyone
A beautiful day here
A large coffee would be fantastic
Me and miss Molly the monkey are gonna help in the church nursery this morning.
Scott that's a good idea I'm sure each animal who visits have an idea what they like .

*Moving the old cookies to the emergency cookie tins behind the counter and filling the cookie jars to the tippy top with fresh cookies.*
In Big Bird we have pecan divines, oatmeal raisin cookies, chocolate orange cookies and snickerdoodles
In Cookie Monster we have ginger snaps, white chocolate supremes, chocolate covered cherry cookies and hot chocolate and marshmallow cookies
In Elmo we have lemon cookies, double chocolate hazelnut ,m&m cookies and snickerdoodles

*Giving the adorable critters fresh water and treats*

Off I go to deal with little humans
Stay safe everyone!


SNICKERDOODLES!!! How did you know?

Lazy day today, though yardwork and grocery shopping are both involved. I think we're grilling tonight: a small strip steak, a piece of salmon, some corn on the cob. Yum.

The Mets blow chunks. That is all. First place recedes like the first blush of youth.

We might follow Ping's example and go see Quiet Place 2.

Coffee and a SNICKERDOODLE please!!!
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Oh my, Mr Mendalla. How could you think such a thing about a sweet old lady like me.


Never said it about you, just about that story. And if mine was in any way an influence, you are welcome. I don't think I have ever been cited as an influence (other than a bad one ) before.


Don’t worry, I’ve got the bad influence thing going on in spades. smile

I can’t think of a danged thing for the prompt. Looking forward to what everyone else does with it.

The Mets have officially fallen from first place. They left 15 runners on base in 9 innings. How does a team even to that?

Great comp going on at another site, btw.

Talia went to bed headache-y and tired, and woke up feeling the same. I suspect I am playing nurse to her today. Give her some healing thoughts!

Me, I don’t need healing thoughts, I need frikking coffee!
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I really like your idea Verbs, but I am (among other things) extremely tech-challenged. I want to avoid creating more work for the mods by having to help insert pics into the body of the story.

I also like Ping's suggestion. My fear (pun intended) is that Halloween is right around the corner and I wouldn't want to step on the toes of a possible future comp. I do like the thought of keeping the stories light and fun.

My idea is that I will throw down an opening line. So many fantastic stories start with killer first lines; Call me Ishmael...or...Mother died today, or maybe yesterday; I can't be sure. Not saying mine is killer, but it seems like it will be fun to see where each person takes the line.

Here is what I have come up with for rules:

- I will give a first-line prompt, every story must have that line as the open.
- From there you are free to take it where ever you'd like and in whatever category and length you choose.
- Please make sure to follow storiespace guidelines for acceptable content.
- Please include Inspirators as a tag. Make sure it is spelled exactly that way so when we click on the tag, it will isolate all of our stories on one page.
- This is just a challenge and all for fun, no prizes or awards will be given out.
- There is no time limit for entries.

Here is your first-line prompt...have fun with it!

"To everyone in the room, she seemed like just a normal girl wearing Vans, bluejeans, and a red hoodie."




On this like sugar on cookies!

Hello everyone. Hugs to those who need them! Just help yourself.

Mets lost AGAIN. Sigh. We could lose first place tonight. Big series against the Phillies.

No Talia today. The cats and I are going to build a Duplicator! She's come home to two of me, and four of them!

Blerg. Still waking up. Coffee and a sugar cookie would do the trick!


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Morning All!

drums fingers on counter waiting for the coffee to finish brewing...decides to sneak a GF cookie for the wait

I'm having post-comp blues. The energy and buzz when those comps are active make it so much fun. Plus for some reason, my brain gets more active when there is a prompt to work off of. What if we did a friendly Inspirators story challenge thingy? Anyone have ideas for a prompt?

I tend to gravitate toward these categories(but I'm certainly open to anything):

- Thriller
- Horror
- Fantasy
- Romance

Just a thought...hope everyone is having a great day...and look at that, the coffee's done percolating.


That'd be fun - no prizes, a friendly game. We should collect prompts!

Here's one: look around you and find three objects you can literally see. Combine them in a story or poem or plot. Post pictures of the three objects with your writing.

I'm still waking up, though, so I'm not gonna do it now. smile

The game was fun - Roland's Cubbies won 3-2 - though the drive was long. We had an excellent time. My daughter loved it. We brought a six-year-old friend of the family who had never seen a baseball game before, and seeing the experience through his excited eyes got me teared up a few times. Really, really sweet. We made some memories.

I'm still a little tired from the drive though. Expecting a chill day today. Write and edit. See what happens to the eerie hot girl in the Dog Park.

Coffee and three cookies please.
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Happy Hump Day to all Inspirators. The coffee pot has been rinsed and dried as has been the tea kettle. Today's coffee is from the Big Mamou Coffee Co. located near the fabled town of, Little Mamou. Water is from the nearby Atchafalaya River. Enjoy.

Some of the baseball teams Inspirators pull for won: Padres, Diamondbacks, Braves, while others such as the Mets Royals, and Nationals did not. Probably a great object lesson there but it escapes me.

Time to fill my mug, grab some of Sarah's cookies and wander over to the corner table to spend some time wool gathering.

Later, Inspirators.



The object lesson is: baseball is as much about losing as it is about winning. Life, too.

And that’s as philosophical as I am prepared to get today.

My youngest daughter and I are driving up to Denver today to see the Rockies play Roland’s Cubs. I don’t have a strong rooting interest in either team, I just like to watch baseball. And hang out with my daughter.

It’s a longish drive, so we might leave early. Those Coors Field games can get long. It’s a GORGEOUS stadium.

Enjoy your day all. I’m taking a vacation day.

Coffee and a snickerdoodle!
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Jeff, you are going to love watching Baez play. He plays the game with the heart of a gladiator, the talent of a hall-of-famer, and the joy of a little boy. His defense and baserunning are gifts from Olympus. If you forgive him for his strikeouts, he is day in and day out the best in baseball.

Saw my brain doctor today, and he said over the last six months, I have shown only a minor decline in my tests. So I did not dare tell him I had not slept since Saturday night. I have had insomnia since high school. So I have been binge-watching 'Grimm.'

Have a great week, my friends.


He is a joy to watch! I love the abandon with which he plays. The Mets as a whole are still playing poorly, but winning isn't the only point of watching. Baseball is as much about losing as winning.

Really glad the doc had good things to say. We like to see you around here. I don't have anyone else to talk baseball with, so take care of yourself.

Lovely day here. Edit and write, long walk, eat supper, watch the game on time-delay around 7. That's my rhythm most days, and I really thrive doing it. Retirement has freed me in so many ways, and I am so grateful. It's a gift from Covid actually: CSU wouldn't have offered early retirement but for the huge losses in state revenue from The Covid.

I hope everyone is doing well! When's the next contest?

Anyway. Time to settle in.

I love a coffee and several snickerdoodles (I thought I saw some in one of the back jars).
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Wow... So many talented writers and so many excellent stories! I'm honored to be sharing the podium with Verbal and Thespian. Everyone who entered deserves a round of applause.

Thank you to everyone who read my story and especially those who scored and left a comment.

If I know Verbal, he's already blown his winnings on Godzilla posters for the ceiling above his bed.8WT6wVYMdJ18FZ2W So, a round of sarsaparillas on me!



Close.

Enough left over for a six-pack!

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Reading a graphic novel series called Once & Future. Basically, what if King Arthur's return was horror rather than fantasy. Arthur is what we would call a "lich" in D&D, basically an animated skeletal monster commanding a "round table" of similar horrors. Merlin just showed up but seems to be something else entirely. Arrayed against Arthur's evil are Bridgette Macquire, an elderly monster hunter who is supposed to be living in a seniors' home, her grandson Duncan and a historian named Rose (who kind of got sucked into the story by dating Duncan).

The underlying idea seem to be that it is not so much people coming back to life as their stories, with many variations possible on those stories. Beowulf has made an appearance, and the last chapter that I read (I am partway through volume 2) ended with the appearance of his foe Grendel. Beowulf is sent against Duncan and Bridgette by Arthur who describes them as "monster and mother", creating an allegory for Grendel and his mother. Not sure how Grendel is going to fit in, yet, but he is currently outside Bridgette's home. Good stuff. The last volume is up for a Hugo (one of the most prestigious sf and fantasy awards) this year and the series has picked up other awards and nominations as well.

Author is Kieron Gillen, a British comic book writer, and the art is by Dan Mora. Both creators are multiple award-winners.


That sounds amazing. Not only the Arthurian bit, but the Beowulf/Grendal thing too (I have a soft spot for mothers and monsters smile ). Have you heard of the book Grendel, by John Nichols? It's the story from Grendel's point of view. Just wonderful. I think it was made into an animated film as well. One of my favorite books.
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Hello everyone

Congratulations to all of the entries to the contest. Every story was excellent. I would have pulled out every hair on my head if I had to make those choices.

Sometimes, when I read a story, I can not think of a single thing about that story that has not already been said, and I wind up not commenting. I read every story in this competition, and everyone was excellent, but I did not comment on three of the stories. Two of those three non-comment stories won awards. Either that was a big coincidence, or the judges must think my praise is negative towards grading.

A couple of cookies and tea, please.

Bryant (SFG), Baez (NYM), and Rizzo (NYY) all hit home runs in their first game for their new clubs. I wish them well.

Have a great day, my friends.



Good morning all. Glad you had a fun birthday James.

Thanks for the set-up Larry.

Still waking up. Fun weekend. Great concert, great to be in a bar, great to travel out of town and hang out with friends. I'm going back up on Wednesday to see a Rockies-Cubs game with my daughter.

Speaking of the Cubbies, you are right about that fire sale Roland - but it also means you'll have fresh new talent and a smaller payroll to start fresh. Rosters get bloated after a World Series win. At least the Mets got a piece of that championship in Javy Baez.

Coffee would be swell. And a large handful of cookies! Hugs to all the animals and humans.
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Drinks are on me! And while no alcohol is allowed in the coffee shop, I hear a rumour that Ping is passing out limoncello shots from the trunk of his car out in the parking lot. It's that 1979 Monkey-sh1t green Ford Pinto out there. No, wait, that's my car!






You are unsafe at any speed, Mr. Ping. An honor to be in the contest with you. Dig that EP! Now, can I have a limoncello please? I'll wash that fine sports car of yours in payment for it.
Happy birthday, James!

And congrats to all the winners and top tenners (that rhymes!) on the comp. I genuinely did not expect to win (that's not false modesty, trust me) and so it's a perfect cap on a lovely weekend.

A cold and rainy day here, but that just means I don't have to do yardwork, so you'll hear no complaints from me.

It was SO NICE to go to an actual bar and hear actual live music. Really good concert, and the whiskey went down smooth. Robert Earl Keen is a helluva storyteller, and told a lot of stories. Here's one he didn't tell on Friday, about his car burning up during the second annual Willie Nelson picnic. Followed by that song Bill loves so much.

Drink're on me today, and for the rest of the month of July!



Sorry, couldn't resist, that's my favorite comic of all time.

What a cool contest, what a strong field, and I love that it is ultimately about the survival of StoriesSpace, and the continued camaraderie of all the writers here. I met a couple new writer friends here, and got into some extended conversations with others I'd not talked to much before. So here's to the writing community here, and to the hard work and skill of everyone who entered. Frankly, the strength of those early entries (I'm looking at you Verity) is what pushed me, and I'm sure many others, to do my best.

Also, HUGE thanks to Molly, who did so much verifying and clarifying, and kept us all up to date on who had entered. This would not have happened without the talented, hard-working, red-haired siren of Stories Space, Molly.

This really made my weekend, everyone. Thanks!

Drinks are on me! And while no alcohol is allowed in the coffee shop, I hear a rumour that Ping is passing out limoncello shots from the trunk of his car out in the parking lot. It's that 1979 Monkey-sh1t green Ford Pinto out there. No, wait, that's my car!
It’s August 1st on the East Coast of the US. Just sayin’.