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"a smiled creased his face"

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Erin the young granddaughter smiled,
the old warrior at peace.  Smile creased
his face.   His dream continues.

Young and cocky in red and plaid
steel to his backbone.
Till his eyes fall on her.
Angels did so sing.
One glace love so did spring.
His lass forever.
Ringlets of red flowed south.
Emeralds for eyes.
Her heart pure.
Soon to be his.

As his smile wanded, the old warrior
slept on.  Dreams of land, love, and pain.
As angels and demons fought on.

 

 

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Written by fuzzy1954
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Comments

Beautifully written :)
thank you Angel get well soon too 😊
Your mind is full of thorns and roses my friend. You express it well.
thank you Larry yes this old lion remembers a pretty kitten that I pledge to her a beautiful white rose
Beautiful dream to read. Thank you so much for sharing, Carl and Have a wonderful day :)
thank you my dear friend for reading and comments
I can only reiterate what Mer and Cal have said. Beautiful, lovely thoughts and visions.
thank you CK with you and my "core" friends you all fuel me to continue his dream
Beautiful......
thank you for reading and your kind words
Lovely thoughts and vision.
thank you Sir.