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You Make Me Feel So Low

You can only heal your own wounds

You make me feel so down
I loved you once
But not anymore

You only have yourself to blame
When I love, I love deeply
But you lost that love

Now you are bitter and twisted
Angry at me for your own faults
Nasty words are sometimes worse than a blow
You make me feel so low

Forever angry, that this our fate?
The love we had that turned to hate
Its tragic and my heart devastates

Your misery is not mine
The things you suffered was a crime
But we all have wounds
We take time to heal us, repair us

But you do not, or dare
Too afraid to face the demons of your past
It won't last, you have to face them
Blaming me and others just makes the traumas last 

Its why our love didn't last
And never can or will
Your emotional rollercoasters
Are making me ill.
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