The Eternal Circle: Part One
Chapter One – The Letter
Rain fell in thin, persistent sheets, tapping the windowpanes of Claire Hammond’s third-floor flat like a nervous visitor unwilling to be ignored. She sat at her small oak table, untouched tea cooling in a chipped mug, staring at the envelope that had been slipped under her door an hour ago.
It was cream-coloured, thick, and without a stamp. No address, no return information. Just her name, written in a slanted hand: Claire Hammond.
She had turned it over half a dozen times before daring to open it.
The letter inside was written on the same heavy paper, the ink faintly smudged as if the writer’s hand had trembled.
*Miss Hammond,
If you wish to know the truth about your parents, come to the house on Coldwater Lane before midnight on the 14th. Come alone. Bring nothing. If you do not come, you will never know why they died.*
Claire read it again, her lips pressed tight. She had been eight years old when the fire took her parents, her memories blurred by smoke and panic, the details always hazy. Officially, the blaze had been blamed on faulty wiring. Unofficially, whispers followed her into adulthood: debts unpaid, a feud gone too far, maybe even something darker.
The 14th was tonight.
Claire glanced at the clock. 10:42.
She knew Coldwater Lane. Everyone in town did. A narrow street tucked into the old quarter, lined with buildings that leaned too close together like conspirators. At its end stood the abandoned house — blackened timbers, sagging roof, windows gaping like sockets in a skull. The locals said no one had lived there since the fire twenty-five years ago. Children dared each other to run up the path, touch the front door, and come back without screaming.
Her parents’ house.
She had promised herself she would never set foot there again. Yet the letter sat heavy in her hand, its words burrowing into her.
The truth about your parents.
She shoved the letter into her coat pocket, grabbed her keys, and left the flat.
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Coldwater Lane was quiet, slick with rain. The streetlamps flickered, half of them out, leaving long stretches in darkness. The house loomed at the end, its roofline jagged against the cloudy night sky.
Claire hesitated at the gate. The rusted iron squealed as she pushed it open, the sound much too loud in the stillness. The path was overgrown, the weeds slick under her boots.
The front door was closed but not locked.
Inside, the air smelled of damp wood and ash. Her torch beam cut across walls scarred with soot. Every step stirred dust that clung to her throat. She moved slowly, her heart thudding, memories flashing unbidden — her father’s voice shouting her name, her mother’s hands pushing her toward the stairs, flames roaring in the walls.
A creak came from upstairs.
Claire froze. “Hello?” Her voice quavered, swallowed by the silence.
Another creak. Deliberate.
She climbed, her hand tight on the banister. The upper hall stretched long and shadowed, doors gaping like mouths. At the end, light flickered beneath one. Candlelight.
She approached, breath shallow.
The room beyond was her parents’ bedroom. Or had been. The furniture was gone, the wallpaper scorched and peeling. But in the centre stood a small table, and on it a single candle. Beside the flame lay a second letter.
Claire stepped closer, every nerve alert. She picked it up.
You came. That is good. To learn the truth, you must stay in the house until dawn. If you leave before, you will never understand. Trust the voices. They will guide you.
Her throat tightened. “Voices?”
As if in answer, a whisper drifted through the room. Faint, broken, but real.
“Claire.”
She spun, torch beam sweeping empty corners.
Another whisper, closer.
“Stay.”
The candle guttered. The door slammed shut.
Claire was not alone.
Chapter Two – The Whispers
The slam of the door rattled the walls. Claire’s torch flickered once, then steadied, the narrow beam quivering with the tremor of her hand.
She pressed her palm to the door, but it would not budge. The knob turned uselessly.
“Alright,” she muttered, forcing her voice into steadiness. “You wanted me here. I’m here.”
The candle guttered again, shadows stretching long across the walls. And then—soft, curling through the air like smoke—came the whisper.
“Claire… stay…”
Her stomach clenched. It was a woman’s voice, faint, frayed with distance.
She swept the room again with her torch. Nothing. Just the peeling wallpaper, the warped floorboards, the lonely table with its sputtering flame.
And then another whisper, deeper this time. A man.
“Listen.”
Claire’s knees weakened. She dropped into the nearest corner, clutching the torch as if it were a weapon.
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The voices came in fragments at first, rising and falling like a tide. Some were sharp, almost angry. Others were soothing, coaxing. One phrase surfaced again and again, layered with urgency.
“The fire was no accident.”
Her breath caught. “What do you mean?” she whispered aloud, though the absurdity of speaking to thin air pricked at her.
The candle flared as if in answer. And then the smell hit her: sharp, acrid, the reek of burning wood. For a second she thought smoke was seeping through the walls—but when she spun, there was nothing.
She pressed a sleeve to her nose, tears stinging her eyes. Memory surged: her father shouting, her mother shoving her toward the stairs, the roar of the blaze chasing her. She remembered tumbling into the arms of a neighbour outside. The rest had always been blank.
“Show me,” she demanded, her voice breaking. “If you want me to know, show me.”
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The room darkened. Shadows stretched upward until the ceiling was swallowed. The candle dimmed, then flared again, and the wallpaper peeled back in her mind’s eye, revealing the room as it had once been: her parents’ bed neatly made, her mother’s vanity with the oval mirror, a wardrobe yawning half open.
And there, in the mirror, movement.
Claire’s torch beam shook as she raised it.
In the glass, two figures stood. A man and a woman, shapes blurred with static like old film. Her mother’s eyes were pools of sorrow. Her father’s mouth moved in words she could not hear.
Claire staggered closer, throat tight. “Mum? Dad?”
The whisper rose, clearer now.
“Not the fire. Murder.”
The word struck like a blow.
Her father’s figure pointed away from the mirror, toward the floor beneath the bed.
Claire dropped to her knees, half crawling. She shone her torch under the frame. The beam caught something: a metal box, blackened with soot but intact. She dragged it out, coughing on the dust.
The lock had been broken long ago. Inside were charred papers, half-crumbling photographs, and at the bottom, a folded letter.
She opened it with trembling hands.
“Michael, if you do not pay by the end of the month, I cannot guarantee your safety—or hers. Fires happen, debts burn away records. Think carefully. This is your last warning.”
No signature. Just a symbol scrawled at the bottom: a circle intersected by a vertical slash.
Claire’s pulse raced. She had never seen it before, but instinct told her it was no idle mark. Whoever had written this had set the fire.
“Who?” she cried, clutching the paper. “Who did this to you?”
The candle flame leapt high, and a chorus of whispers filled the room, overlapping, frantic.
“Find him… find the circle…”
The door burst open with a bang. Claire spun, heart hammering.
But it wasn’t a ghost.
It was a man.
Tall, gaunt, with a shaved head glistening with rain. His eyes gleamed too brightly, as if fevered. He stepped into the room, shutting the door behind him.
“You weren’t meant to come,” he said, voice low, shaking with something like excitement. “Not you. Not the child. But it seems the dead are greedy.”
Claire backed against the wall, box clutched to her chest. “Who are you?”
He smiled, a terrible grin that didn’t touch his eyes. “The one who keeps the truth. The one they whisper about.”
Her skin crawled. “You set the fire.”
He tilted his head. “I carried out what was asked. Your father thought he could cheat the circle. No one cheats the circle.”
The whispers surged again, sharp now, almost a scream.
“He lies! He lies!”
The candle blew out.
Darkness swallowed the room, broken only by the narrow tremor of Claire’s torch. The man lunged.
She swung the box, striking his temple. He grunted, stumbled, then came at her again.
They crashed against the wall, torch clattering to the floor. Light rolled wildly, slicing shadows. His hands clamped on her wrists, stronger than she expected, pressing her down.
“You were supposed to burn too,” he hissed. “You spoiled everything.”
Claire drove her knee upward, hard. He groaned, grip loosening. She twisted free, snatched the torch, and bolted for the door.
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The house became a labyrinth of shadows and whispers. Corridors stretched longer than they should, doors slammed of their own accord. The man’s footsteps pounded behind her, steady and relentless.
She stumbled down the stairs, torch beam jerking. The front door loomed—closed, locked. She yanked the handle. It held fast.
Behind her, the man descended slowly, deliberately, each step a drumbeat.
The whispers rose into a cacophony. Window! Window!
Claire spun, sprinted into the parlour. The window was boarded, but one plank sagged. She smashed at it with the torch, splinters flying, the man’s shadow growing longer behind her.
She forced herself through, scraping her arms on jagged wood, tumbling into the wet garden outside.
Rain lashed her face as she scrambled to her feet. She ran, the voices still echoing, urging, warning.
The circle… the symbol… find the truth.
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By the time she reached her flat, dawn was breaking, a pale wash of light over the rooftops. She slammed the door behind her, dropped the box on the table, and collapsed into the chair.
Her arms trembled. Her mind reeled.
The man was real. The letter was real. The whispers—whatever they were—had saved her life.
She pulled the charred papers from the box. Among the ashes, fragments of numbers and names emerged, hints of debts, a list of men linked by the strange circle symbol.
Some lines ended with a single word: Paid. Others: Burned.
And at the very bottom, the faint outline of an address.
Coldwater Lane had not been the end. It was the beginning.
Claire folded the papers carefully, her fear hardening into resolve.
Her parents had been murdered. And somewhere out there, the circle still lived.
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Claire Hammond had survived the night in the house. But the voices had been right: the truth had not yet revealed itself in full.
And the circle was waiting.
Chapter Three – The Masked Gathering
Claire had never imagined that silence could have a weight. Yet as she crouched in the wardrobe, listening to the soft shuffle of masked figures filing into the scorched room beyond, she felt crushed beneath it. Her breath slowed, careful, as though even the rise of her chest might betray her presence.
The candle burned low, casting just enough glow for her to glimpse them through the narrow crack in the warped wood. Men and women — six, perhaps seven — all cloaked, all masked. The masks varied: a stag, a fox, a bird with an elongated beak, a skull. Paper-thin, but grotesque in the shifting light.
One stepped forward. His mask was plain white, featureless but for two slits. The Leader, Claire thought instinctively. His voice was calm, measured, with the faintest edge of ritual.
“It has been twenty-five years since the offering was made,” he said. “Fire claimed what we could not take by hand. Their daughter lives, yet she knows nothing. Tonight, the cycle begins anew.”
Claire’s pulse thundered. Their daughter. They meant her.
The Leader raised a bundle of papers, tied with twine. He placed it on the table beside the guttering candle.
“Written confessions,” he said. “Our forebears left the truth to guide us. The Master’s will endures.”
A whisper rippled through the group: The Master. The Master.
The word clung to Claire’s skin like oil.
Another figure — fox mask — asked, “What of the girl? Does she come willingly, or must she be brought?”
“She comes,” the Leader said. “The letter was delivered.”
The group murmured, a susurrus of expectation.
Claire’s throat tightened. They were speaking as though her arrival were inevitable, ordained. She shrank deeper into the wardrobe, yet the walls seemed to close in.
Then, the air shifted. A chill ran through the room, extinguishing the candle. Darkness swallowed everything.
And in that dark, a voice spoke — not the Leader’s, not any of the masked figures. A voice older, raw, like stone grinding against stone.
I remember the flames. I remember the girl.
Claire bit her fist to stifle a gasp.
The masked figures dropped to their knees as one. “Master,” they breathed.
The wardrobe shuddered as if struck by a cold wind. Claire’s torch flickered in her pocket, unbidden. She fought not to move.
The time has come again, the voice said. Blood for fire. Flesh for truth. The daughter will return what was promised.
The Leader bowed his head. “We obey.”
The wardrobe door creaked. Just the faintest sound, but in the absolute silence that followed, it was thunderous.
Claire’s heart seized. She pressed against the wood, willing herself invisible.
The Leader turned. Slowly. His mask gleamed pale in the dark. He stepped toward the wardrobe.
Claire’s muscles screamed for her to run, but she stayed frozen as the hand reached for the latch—
A crash. A window shattering downstairs. Shouts from the street.
Police.
The figures scattered, hissing like startled birds. The Leader snapped his fingers, and in seconds the group vanished through a hidden door behind the ruined fireplace, cloaks swirling.
The wardrobe door wrenched open — but not by the Leader.
It was DS Melanie Sommers. Her torch lit Claire’s terrified face. “Jesus Christ,” she muttered. “Hill, she’s here!”
Strong hands pulled Claire out. DCI George Hill loomed behind Sommers, his lined face tight with tension. “What in God’s name are you doing in here, Hammond?”
Claire could barely speak. “They… they were here. The Circle. They were talking about my parents.”
Hill’s eyes narrowed. “We’ve been chasing whispers about them for years.”
Sommers said, “The neighbours called — saw lights in the house. We thought it was kids.”
But Hill’s gaze was fixed on the table, on the bundle of papers still resting there. He snatched them up, flipping through by torchlight. His expression darkened. “It’s them. Their names are in here. Judges, councillors… people with power. Bloody hell.”
Claire reached for the papers. “What does it say about my parents?”
Hill pulled back. “Not here. Not now. We need to move.”
But Claire had already seen a single line before he closed the pages:
Hammond — failed the Master. Punishment: fire.
The room spun. Her knees buckled, and Sommers steadied her.
Hill’s voice was grim. “We’ve stirred a nest. They won’t let this lie. And whoever — whatever — that voice was, it won’t stop here.”
From the ruined fireplace, a breath of cold air escaped. Claire felt it brush her skin like fingers.
The Master was listening.
Chapter Four – The Circle Hunts
The police car’s engine hummed low as it pulled away from Coldwater Lane, tyres spitting rainwater. Claire sat in the back seat between Hill and Sommers, her hands trembling despite the blanket Sommers had thrown over her shoulders. The bundle of papers lay on Hill’s lap, bound tight with twine. He hadn’t spoken since they left the house.
The city slid past in blurred streaks of light, streetlamps glowing sickly in the rain. Every corner seemed to hold shadows watching them, every headlight behind felt too close, too deliberate.
Claire broke the silence first. “They killed my parents.” Her voice was raw, matter-of-fact. “It wasn’t an accident. The Circle burned them alive.”
Hill glanced at her, then away. “The papers suggest as much. But you’ll need to prepare yourself — there’s more in here than you’ll want to see.”
“Show me.”
“Not yet,” Hill said, tone final. “We’re heading to the station first. Lock this evidence away.”
Sommers gave him a sharp look. “Sir, with respect, if these people have the reach we think they do, the station may not be safe. We’ve had leaks before.”
Hill’s jaw worked. He said nothing, but the crease in his brow deepened.
Claire stared out at the rain. “They knew I’d come. They were waiting. That letter… it was bait.”
Sommers nodded grimly. “And now they know you’ve seen too much.”
The car turned into a narrow side street, a shortcut toward the station. That was when the black van appeared behind them, headlights glaring in the mirrors.
Hill stiffened. “Mel, eyes on that van.”
Sommers checked. “Too close. No plates.”
The van accelerated, closing the gap. Claire’s stomach dropped.
“Hold on,” Hill barked. He floored the accelerator. The police car surged forward, tyres screeching as they tore around a corner. The van followed, relentless.
Rain-slick roads blurred beneath them. Hill’s hands gripped the wheel with white-knuckled focus. “They’re not letting us get to the station. Bastards planned this.”
Sommers keyed the radio, shouting into the static. “This is DS Sommers — unit under pursuit, possible hostile — request immediate backup at—”
The radio cut off with a burst of static. Dead.
Claire clutched the seat. “They’re jamming you.”
The van slammed into their rear bumper, jolting them forward. Metal shrieked. Hill fought the wheel, swerving down another street.
“Mel, window!” he barked.
Sommers pulled her pistol, shoved the passenger window down, and leaned out. She fired twice. Glass shattered on the van’s windscreen. It swerved but kept coming.
Claire’s heart hammered against her ribs. She felt it again — the presence, the cold whisper threading through her mind. They will have you. The fire was only the beginning.
“No!” she screamed aloud, startling both officers.
“Claire?” Sommers shouted over the rain and engine roar.
“They’re in my head!” Claire clutched her skull, the voice curling like smoke inside.
The van rammed them again. The car fishtailed, spun sideways, then slammed into the kerb with a bone-rattling crash. Airbags burst with choking powder.
Claire tasted blood. Her ears rang. Through the spiderweb cracks of the windscreen, she saw masked figures spilling from the van, moving fast, purposeful.
“Out!” Hill roared, dragging open his door. “Move, now!”
Sommers yanked Claire by the arm. They stumbled into the rain-soaked street, dazed but running. Hill clutched the bundle of papers tight, his pistol drawn in the other hand.
The figures gave chase — at least four of them, cloaked and masked. One raised a blade that gleamed even in the dark.
“Alley!” Sommers pointed. They sprinted into a narrow cut between warehouses, feet pounding puddles, breath ragged.
Claire’s legs screamed in protest, but terror drove her on. The whispers pressed harder: Do not flee. Submit. The Master calls.
At the alley’s end, they burst into an abandoned yard littered with rusted machinery. Rain hammered down, echoing against corrugated walls.
Hill spun, covering their backs. “Keep moving!”
A masked pursuer lunged from the shadows, blade flashing. Hill fired. The figure crumpled, cloak darkening with blood.
The others faltered for a heartbeat, then advanced.
Sommers pulled Claire behind a rusting skip. “Stay low. Do not move.”
Claire huddled, shaking, as Sommers and Hill fought. Gunshots cracked sharp in the night. Shadows darted, cloaks whipping. The rain smelled of iron and cordite.
One figure broke through, charging at Claire. His mask was grotesque — a bird’s beak slick with rain. He reached for her, voice rasping, “The daughter is ours—”
Claire seized a rusted pipe from the ground and swung with all her strength. The mask shattered. The man fell, screaming as blood poured from his face.
Sommers grabbed her. “Come on! They’ll regroup!”
They fled through another alley, into the maze of the old quarter. Sirens wailed faintly in the distance now, maybe real, maybe imagined.
Finally, they collapsed inside an abandoned shopfront, breath ragged, hearts hammering. Rainwater dripped from broken tiles above.
Hill leaned against the counter, clutching the papers. “They’ll keep coming. Christ, they were organised — waiting for us. That wasn’t chance.”
Sommers reloaded, hands steady despite the tremor in her jaw. “Sir, we need to think bigger. If The Circle’s reach goes high enough, backup won’t matter. They’ll bury this — and us with it.”
Claire’s voice was a whisper. “The voice… the Master. It knows me. It said I would return what was promised.”
Hill looked at her, hard and unflinching. “You’re the key, Hammond. They want you alive. That’s leverage — and danger. We’ll use it.”
Sommers frowned. “Sir—”
But Hill cut her off. “No choice. If we don’t take this to someone outside the Circle’s influence, we’re dead anyway.”
Claire stared at the bundle of papers, the twine damp and frayed. She felt the words inside like a living thing, humming with truth. Her parents had been sacrificed — and the Circle wanted to finish what they started.
And in the back of her mind, the voice purred.
You cannot hide. At dawn, you will be mine.
Chapter Five – Names in the Fire
The rain eased by dawn, but the city did not feel calmer. It was as though the storm had drained into the streets, leaving them sodden and watchful. Claire sat in the back of the commandeered car Hill had scraped together from a sympathetic contact. Sommers drove this time, eyes flicking constantly to the mirrors. Hill sat beside her, the bundle of papers clutched like a holy relic.
They had abandoned the wrecked patrol car hours earlier. If the Circle’s reach extended into the local station, every officer on duty could be a pair of eyes watching for them. Now, they moved like fugitives through their own city.
Hill finally spoke. “The Circle has threads in government, police, the courts. These papers list names, dates, payments, initiations. Claire, your parents — they tried to pull out. They wanted out of the fire. They were silenced.”
Claire’s voice was hoarse. “Silenced by burning them alive.”
Sommers glanced at her, then at Hill. “Sir, how far up do you think this goes?”
Hill’s jaw tightened. “Farther than we can reach. That’s why we need to find someone outside their grasp. International, maybe. Someone who can’t be bought.”
Claire’s gaze drifted to the damp bundle. “And if they find us first?”
No one answered.
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They holed up in a safe house Sommers knew — a derelict flat above a laundrette, long forgotten in case files. The rooms smelled of mildew and soap, but the locks held.
Hill spread the papers across the table. Candlelight threw shadows across his weary face as he scanned pages, muttering names. “Judges. MPs. Business magnates. All marked with symbols… different animals.”
Sommers leaned over his shoulder. “The masks. Each one represents a role in the Circle.”
Claire hovered nearby. “My parents’ names?”
Hill turned a page. His brow furrowed. “Here. Richard Hammond. Eleanor Hammond.” His finger tapped beneath their names. Failed Offering. Next to it: a jagged symbol like an open eye.
Claire’s throat closed. “Offering?”
Sommers whispered, “Sacrifice.”
Hill’s hands curled into fists. “They were ordered to give you up, Claire. Instead, they tried to run. The fire was punishment.”
The air grew colder. Claire shivered. She knew before she heard it that the voice was coming.
They defied me. They burned for their defiance. And you — you are the debt unpaid.
The candle guttered. Hill looked around sharply. “Who’s there?”
Claire pressed her palms to her temples. “It’s him. The Master. He’s here.”
The voice seeped through the walls, everywhere and nowhere. You cannot hide from what is owed. The Circle serves, but I endure beyond them. Their masks change, their names rot, but I am constant.
Hill raised his pistol, absurdly aiming at shadows. “Show yourself!”
The voice rumbled like thunder in a cavern. Another vessel failed. The one you called Cutter. He spilled blood, but not enough. They stopped him, yes — but not the one who worked through him. Even now, he feeds in another land. Do you see, child? Do you feel the fire still?
Claire’s breath caught. Cutter. She remembered the news stories — the possessed killer, the trail of death. Hill and Sommers had been part of that hunt. And now this voice, this thing, claimed responsibility.
Sommers whispered, “My God… Cutter wasn’t mad. He was…”
“Used,” Hill finished grimly. His eyes narrowed. “And now it wants Claire.”
The Master’s laughter was dry as bone. Not want. Own. She is mine by promise of flame. At dawn, she will walk willingly, or her city will burn in her place.
The candle snuffed out. Darkness pressed in like a weight.
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They lit a lantern. Hill’s hand shook as he relit the wick. “It’s bluffing. It feeds on fear.”
But Claire’s skin prickled with certainty. “No. It can burn us. Just like it burned them.”
Sommers laid a hand on her shoulder. “We’ll stop it. We stopped Cutter, didn’t we?” Her voice faltered on the lie, but she forced it steady. “We’ll do it again.”
Hill gathered the papers back into their bundle. “We need to understand how the Circle serves this thing. If we cut off its worshippers, we cut its reach.”
Claire touched the jagged eye symbol beside her parents’ names. Her fingers trembled. “This was never about them. It was always about me.”
Hill met her gaze. “Then we use that. If you’re bait, fine — but this time, we set the trap.”
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Later, when exhaustion finally claimed her, Claire dreamed of fire. She stood in the ruins of her childhood home, walls burning, her parents screaming her name. But over their voices came another — the Master’s, vast and patient.
Later, when exhaustion finally claimed her, Claire dreamed of fire. She stood in the ruins of her childhood home, walls burning, her parents screaming her name. But over their voices came another — the Master’s, vast and patient.
Blood for fire. Flesh for truth. When you wake, the Circle will come. And you will go where they lead.
She woke gasping in the dark flat, Sommers asleep with her pistol in hand, Hill dozing upright in a chair. Rain ticked softly at the window.
But Claire knew the storm wasn’t over. It was only beginning.