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Whoosh, Whoosh

Whoosh, whoosh...whoosh, whoosh...whoosh, whoosh.

Quiet. So very still, all around me. Nothing stirring.

Dark. So dense, the atmosphere. Hard to breathe. Nothing to see.

Can't see. Can't hear anything.

Whoosh, whoosh...whoosh, whoosh...

Blood, rushing through my veins. In my head. In my ears. Hearing it.

Stirring. Not stirring. No feeling. None. Arms and legs dead. Dead weight.

Lifting. No lifting. Can't move. Can't move anything.



Big breathe. Big. Not big. Shallow. Shallow breaths.


Am I awake. Am I awake. Am I.

Am I.


Help me. Help. Help...please...please.

Who's that.


Oh no! Who?


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