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The Loss of Virginity

The Loss of Virginity

This I'll always remember...

I was just sitting there, 
Thinking of all the things 
I have not experienced, 
Watching the sun drift through the sky lights 
Of a short ceiling—

As it laid 
Stunningly bright rays 
Across the golden glow of your skin, 
While dancing across those deep, 
Sea green eyes 
That are suddenly staring completely through me.

God should never have created such eyes, 
Such temptation.

They are like the fleshy part 
At the end of your fingers, 
Gliding along the skin 
Stretched smoothly 
Over my collar bone.

I stood 
To follow you 
Out of a side door marked 
Exit Only.

You turned, 
Fluid like liquid heat, 
Mouthing the word 
To which I replied...


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