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Alive

"I think this one's more from a character's perspective than mine... stream-of-consciousness again..."

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hello from without
please don't pout
we'll be there soon 
we're just past the big spoon
flying through ash
throwing a big ole bash
and hoping he won't lash -
out.

his green eyes
fail to see 
the points to my story
and all my lies 

are
far
from
innocent

I'm far from alive
as I cross this universe
of pain and terse
words. 

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Written by Colors_of_the_Wind
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