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Without EVE

Without Eve I would not exist.

The sin of humanity is shared

Not Eve

Not Adam

Both sinned.

I do not need an apology from either than to prevent the recurrence of that sin

God made man with the sole intention to rule and govern

God made Eve not to deceive but to collaborate and make life work better

Man had its command

They fell short with the weakness of a woman who brought forth from the hip of which man was the emblem replica of God who carved them into his perfection.

I was sperm donated mixing chemical with my mother's genes but when I came into

Existence the first I saw was she and as I grew older,

Clothed me

Sheltered me

Fed me

Nurtured my mind, soul, and body

She wrapped me with love and compassion

My father ran away as he was a coward making the mistakes of Adam

Of not fulfilling, his command and removing himself from responsibilities.

Therefore, whenever you begin to reason from the perspective that Eve is at fault

Forgetting that woman bore you with nine months of pain and struggles when Adam

Forsakes his duties

Do not reason as a hypocrite as I know without my mother I would not exist.

Without my mother's love, I would be homeless

Without her commitment to me, I would be dead

Thank God, He made Eve also.

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